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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Gideon
Review:
Confusion rules all around! I know I'm confused, and I know most of the history Buffy is referring to here. All the accusations that her friends are throwing at her do seem very serious from their point of view.
The first evil showing up and threatening them all with death won't help her case either.
Comments from author:
You should be confused, because a lot of things you're seeing don't appear to make any sense. Buffy's only just starting to realize that they don't make sense. She hasn't worked out why they're happening, though.

I'm pretty sure Buffy hasn't thought through just how bad this looks to her friends. Although, in her defense, she's got a lot of other things to think about, right now.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Gideon
Review:
Well she saved most of the babies and Willow too. That counts as a win, doesn't it? If we are not counting the creepy prophecy of doom from the Doctor :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
Review:
If even vengeance demons can't change it then Buffy really is in trouble. It sounds like she might be very busy for the next wee while.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
So, Buffy is now in a world that's been isolated by a timelock?

Although, if she'd thought about it, she could have bluffed Anya that sometimes living would be a greater vengeance than killing him.

Not that it would change the timelock, but...
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
Review:
Yeah, running from a slayer, not smart. That will always be a losing proposition.
Of course, summoning a vengeance demon, also not smart, but what other option does Buffy have?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
To quote Dr. Sam Beckett, another time traveller: Oh boy!

I'm still not sure which Doctor is the First and which is pre-possession (since you haven't had him touch anything and Buffy hasn't forced the issue).

And Buffy is going to Ethan Rayne for help? After the messes with Eyghon and Halloween, that isn't going to convince her friends she hasn't gone completely bonkers.
Comments from author:
I think that Buffy is convinced that once she finishes, here, time will be reversed, and everything will go back to normal -- like it did in the episode where Cordelia made her wish. So she doesn't care what these friends think of her, because she won't have to deal with them for very long.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from potterinu
Review:
I would love if you kept Ethan around. He has so much potential as a character.
Comments from author:
I've tried to create an entire story around Ethan Rayne and the Doctor, but it wound up getting scrapped because it wasn't any good. You're right, there's a whole bunch of potential, there. I won't tap into it in this story (too much else going on, sorry. There were other characters I didn't manage to use the way I wanted to, either, due to the too-much-else-going-on factor).

If I figure out how to write Ethan better, I'll shove him into a future story.
Review By [potterinu] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from PATM
Review:
Buffy makes a good case for crazy, of course they won't fish the candy out of the trash, especially Xander. Intensity acquired for sure.
Review By [PATM] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
Oh dear. Not only does the first evil have an immortal time traveling servant but Buffy has been stripped of her friends and support structure. At least she is still able to give them good advice about the band candy. Maybe explaining about that properly would help if she proved that she knew was what happening and then they would believe that she is from the future.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from potterinu
Review:
I can always appreciate a good redo/traveltoAU story and this one even has an interesting twist on it.
Review By [potterinu] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading more. This one is a little stranger than the others I think, but it should be interesting.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Letomo
Review:
Hmm, The ninth before Rose? Or while Rose is sleeping? And, how much condescension does he have for humans just at the moment? Can't wait to read more.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Buffy didn't try to touch them? That would have been an instant test of whether it was the First or not.

Unless, of course, the changes allowed it to become corporeal?

Anyway, I look forward to the twists I'm sure you'll add. Probably a few of them will be about as welcome to Buffy as a knife to the gut.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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