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Review of chapter "The Road to Destiny?" from alynambered
Review:
Only watched a hand of A:tS and only saw Connor the baby. Bored, I decided to skim ch 1; well here I am at the end of 6, sucked in again! lol
Comments from author:
So glad you stopped by and very happy to be of service!! I feel very satisfied that you're able to follow and enjoy, despite not having followed the show. That's what I strive for... That and not boring my readers!

Blue
Review By [alynambered] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Destiny?" from LordSchmodder
Review:
I like this.
Now I'm really curious how the rest is going to go down!
Thanks!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad!

You will find out very soon. I'm working on getting the next chapter together.

You're more than welcome. Please come again! :-)

Blue
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Destiny?" from Mcspender
Review:
One of the best tricks is doing exactly what the opposition wants. They wanted Connor back? Sure, they can get him... along with a very pissed off entourage. I wonder if Hellen and Jack knew that this was Otto Skorzeny's favorite trick. Jack maybe will find it very funny, using the tricks written by one of the most magnificent bastards german soldier of WW2.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm not sure that stealing John back from WRH and is what WRH has in mind... and I'm 100% sure that Angel will be unhappy to see his son turn up with a bunch of very dangerous people! The only Otto trick will be what the hunters do in the dungeons.

Jack's funny will be something completely different...

Glad you like my chapter!

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Road to Destiny?" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Loved the bonding between Connor and Jack O'Neill, including Jack's reflection that if Connor were his own son Charlie there isn't anything he wouldn't do to protect him from those who sought to hurt him.
Comments from author:
Thank you... It hit me as I was writing that Connor would remind Jack strongly of what he'd lost and that he'd identify with Angel, even without meeting him. It's going to be an interesting morning at Wolfram and Hart.

Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Road to Destiny?" from AllenPitt
Review:
And now I'm imagining them encountering Lorne. All the hunters will want to kill him on sight, the SGC will think maybe he's an alien, and L. won't know who Connor is. Weird.
Surprises all around. Angel's team won't be happy when they first hear their memories have been messed with. And with their luck, Sahjan will get out of his box soon. Connor really needs his memories back. He's got enough 'regular life' memories to not be nuts now, I think. He'd be great in the SGC, might be the best place for him, really. His "Destroyer" prophecy has to happen somewhere after all. He seems to have all the abilities of a master vampire without being undead (enhanced senses, strength, durability). One wonders if he has the longevity, too.
When Angel finds these people in the building, having brought his son into W&H. He won't be happy.
Comments from author:
Yes, that will go well... meeting Lorne, I mean... especially when Connor realizes that it's not just his memories that have been screwed with. The hunters are gonna have their hands full for a while... at least most of them...

Yup, I'm enjoying this trainwreck! Slow moving tragedy and chaos. So much fun! Yes, Connor needs his memories back very badly. Not sure who's gonna be unhappiest when he's no longer Mr. forgetful.

It was established on the series that he had vampiric hearing and strength and alluded to that he tracked in Quortoth, which probably means vampire smell too. Who knows about the longevity?

Hold onto your hat, it's gonna be a bumpy... morning.

Blue

PS: I feel sorriest for... Eve.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from Shayna
Review:
A great story! I can't wait for more!
p.s:I see my review for chap2 has been replied to, before I even finished reading the story :)
Comments from author:
Glad to be of service! I try to respond promptly while I have time, because once life hits the fan, it gets difficult!
So glad you like the story!

Blue
Review By [Shayna] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who are you?" from Shayna
Review:
I really liked how Dean has his priorities straight: worrying about his "baby" instead of Sam warning Connor! :D
Comments from author:
Yes, well, that's Dean! Why do you think his father is so underwhelmed by his reaction?? Glad you were amused!

Blue
Review By [Shayna] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from Waverly
Review:
This is fantastic, I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. More soonish.

Blue
Review By [Waverly] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from Mcspender
Review:
Nice to see Frank as a reasonably human bad guy, the kind of guys who get in the Game, but don't forget their basic humanity. That doesn't excuse his sins, but at least, when he dies, he can tell he did some good to pay back for his crimes.
Cool chapter, see ya!!
Comments from author:
Yes, Frank is more tragic than wicked... but that's the situation with a lot of people who make bad decisions... they find themselves up against the wall and they make the easy decision... in his case, with a wreck of a body, working for someone as a mercenary probably seemed like a good deal... a job and a restored body... He probably didn't care about the consequences... he had to realize things were too good to be true.

Glad you liked!

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from skychan
Review:
Another chapter of good clean fun. I wonder when Daniel is going to pull the ancients into things, or at least the discussion. Private like most likely, but still, that and getting their new turncoat off world...
Comments from author:
So glad you're having fun with it! Not sure about the Ancients... It's already an open secret that the team is something a bit 'unusual and I don't think they're going to reveal to the hunters what they are... The only reason they have any jurisdiction is that Connor might have been a threat to national security... and now, WRH has replaced him... So, Roberts as part of the SGC like... Teal'c? Hmmm... well, that's an intriguing idea.

Blue
Review By [skychan] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from Lottii
Review:
Awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one


Cheers
Lottii
Comments from author:
Thank you! As soon as Cassie stops arguing with me, I should be able to get it done!

Blue
Review By [Lottii] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm starting to like Roberts.

Another excellent update.
Comments from author:
Yes, me too. Scary when that happens...

Thank you so much!

Blue.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe it's the real world." from AllenPitt
Review:
On swearing--I figure Angel was on his best behavior when in Sunnydale, once out he relaxed a bit on speech. That's my story and I'm sticking with it. Gee, all the bad stuff about W&H, they're going to think Angel is the ultimate evil. Kind of funny. They know just enough to come to completely wrong conclusions. Then again taking over the LA branch was a really bad move.... that Angel did only to save Connor. Irony is everywhere here.
Connor is in for a shock when the truth comes out. If the spell breaks, does that mean Willow & Faith will remember him, too? Ouch.
Comments from author:
I'll go with that... I think that most of the cast speaks like most Americans, which can be quite profane, at least compared to what I grew up with. I just think they couldn't show that on TV, so they were careful what they 'captured' .

Yes, the stories about Wolfram and Hart. Poor Connor... Imagine what he's thinking about his dreams... Yes, of course, there's going to be misunderstanding. Misunderstanding and chaos and strangeness, Oh My! And of course, Roberts isn't feeling all that kindly disposed toward them, after all, they did try to kill him...

Connor isn't going to be the only one in for a shock. All sorts of people will be shocked and 'upset'. Should be fun!!

Blue
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Papa Bear" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Oh boy Angel is a bit angry.
Comments from author:
Little bit, yes. No one messes with what is his.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Papa Bear" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Don't remember Angel being that much of a potty mouth. Sort of expect it from Sam and Dean, but not Angel.

Other than that, great post. Looking forward to more soon.

James
Comments from author:
It's TV for Angel and cable for Stargate - therefore, Stargate had more leeway, language wise and nudity wise. Most of my work is R rated and I let people speak the way I think they would actually speak, and even though I'm a church mouse, most of my friends aren't.

I guess that I think an upset 250 year old vampire who used to hang out with whores and then was homeless in the streets of new york in the 70s through the 90s wouldn't be 'genteel'. I think he'd say whatever was on his mind. I don't plan for him to to swear all the time b/c no one does (other than people with something to prove).

Hope it wasn't too shocking! :-)

Blue
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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