Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Taldus
Review:
This is a really great start and I can't wait to see how you have the three universes effect each other after this initial meeting.
I really liked all the different character reactions, and I thought the paranoid reactions of the senior Winchesters was appropriate, especially since as of this moment they really have no character development. I do hope Connor and Cassie work through things, though hopefully not too quickly. I don't know about anyone else, but if my quasi girlfriend sent the air-force after me for being different when they're different themselves it would leave me pretty peeved at the least.
Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your lovely compliments. I'm very glad you enjoyed my debut chapter. When three rivers meet, interesting things happen...
I'm glad you enjoyed my character reaction, but I'm not clear what you mean by no character development - feel free to elaborate. The hunters are a paranoid lot and for someone with that kind of mentality, everything pointy is a nail and they're the hammer!
Connor and Cassie are going to have interesting times. This is the kind of situation that has the potential to bind strongly people together - or rip them apart. The next few chapters are gonna change a lot for everyone. Peeved is one thing, but remember Connor in the series? When he didn't know about himself, he actually turned to Wolfram and Hart....
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Mcspender
Review:
Something tells me that Connor playing tennis is kinda dangerous to people's health xD. I know that Connor is special because he's a dhampir and was chosen by a rogue higher being, but killing a Very powerful demon like Azazel is kinda surprising. I wanna see the explanation you have for this particular feat =). Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Ever wonder why Connor was born? Why he was chosen by Jasmine to be her 'father'? Why after everyone was handed their heads, he was able to put his fist through Jasmine? I wondered these things. Yes, more will be revealed. Yes, killing Azazel is quite a feat. Wonder what that makes Connor?
Glad to see you're doing that thinkin' thing... it means I'm accomplishing my goal!
Good to hear from you!
Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from kalibex
Review:
Great start! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm working on it!
Peace,
Blue
Review By [kalibex] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from aveave
Review:
Great start. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Just have to finish some editing. Glad you like it.
Peace,
Blue
Review By [aveave] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from RevDorothyL
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Fascinating! I love the AU future that this opens up for Connor, as well as for Cassie and Sam Winchester. Good work finding a way to get Cassie to college BEFORE Janet's untimely death in "Heroes" (unless you're going to change that too, I hope, I hope?). :)
Comments from author:
I like Janet. That's all I'm going to say. We will see what happens. I'm glad you approve. When my favorite peeps approve of what I'm writing, that's always great sign. Thank you for your support! It is definitely gonna be a bumpy (and interesting) future...
Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from AllenPitt
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This is a really neat story idea. Bringing 3 worlds together, I like it. The funny thing here is, even Connor doesn't know what he is. I'm betting Angel has him under surveillance (unless this is post-NFA?) and will know if he gets taken to Colorado or anything weird like that. Imagine Ange/Spike/Illyria showing up. Illyria...would look a lot like a Goa'uld to the SGC (human, taken over by alien as a host). I hope Connor gets his memories back. With the new-Connor memories in there, he'd likely not be insane-o ...and he needs the skill to go with his abilities. After all, Sahjan might be gunning for him soon.
Comments from author:
Wow... You review and I get new ideas... Really love it when you review! Yes, Illyria would be interesting to explain... Yes, I'm hoping he'll have his 'chops' back before his visit to 'Chez Angel'.
I forgot about Angel's surveillance. Thanks for the reminder. That should be 'interesting'. I've been wondering how to take the chapter I'm currently working on... this gives me so many lovely ideas!
Yes, he will definitely be needing his skills *very* soon. Just not to fight the people you think... Wow. Now I need to make notes. I love it when this happens!!
Thank you!
Blue
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated