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Review of chapter "Who are you?" from Gideon
Review:
Yeah Destroyer is not really a name with much in the way of kind and fluffy connotations. But then again, sometimes you need a Destroyer! I wonder how many people from all over will get dragged into John's pursuit of Connor?
Comments from author:
Yup, the destroyer is not so much with the fluffy bunny-ness! He is, however, absolutely needed. I can't tell you just how many people are after Connor... where would be the surprise in that! :-)

Blue
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who are you?" from Mcspender
Review:
Good grief, seems that everyone wants a piece of poor Connor xD!!!.
And boy, getting the Council in this, is gonna make things even more of a mess.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
You don't know the half of it! hehe. Mess doesn't begin to tell it and the council will be the least of their problems, believe me! There will be... OH my... I can't tell you that. Yet.

heheh

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who are you?" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
I love Connor- I hope he remembers his past soon- The Destroyer is badass... I admit I'm not fond of the Cassie/Connor pairing but I think their friendship is sweet.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoy Connor. Hope that you will enjoy where I take him. The Cassie/Connor pairing will probably not go in expected places... These are both people with a lot more darkness than usually credited for.

Please let me know what you think as we go along.

Blue
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who are you?" from AllenPitt
Review:
This is weird. I was just thinking about the difficulties of an SPN/Stargate crossover due to two "Sam"s . Great minds think alike. Or something.
Poor Angel. He made that deal with W&H to save Connor, the rest won't be happy when their memories come back. And if the spell breaks, Willow & Faith will remember him, too. And wonder why somebody erased their memories of him. He's a lot like Dawn now, if you think about it.
So --Angel doesn't know, but it sounds like to insert Connor into that family, another child was taken out of it ? Ouch! I don't suppose it was Riley Finn? That would be weird.
I'm hoping Cordelia survives. She is part demon after all (done to help with the vision-osity)..so maybe she just needs time to heal. (Or you could have it she got slayer-activated and, like Faith, needs time to heal up ). They really need her. That ep "You're Welcome" really showed how badly they need her on their team.
Hm, in the SGC they eventually got a device that can restore blocked memories, as I recall. Just sayin'......
Comments from author:
I decided to write you directly about this... All I want to say is thank you for your brain synchronous reviews. It's always such a gift!

Thanks

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from HebiR
Review:
I want more of this so very much.
Comments from author:
Sometime tonight or tomorrow. How's that?

Blue
Review By [HebiR] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from (Past Donor)James
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"Apparently, she really wasn’t squeamish. Probably a good characteristic in a premed student."

Best line so far.

Even if I hadn't known it was you writing this, I would have figured it out eventually. This story just screams your writing style. Which, is a good thing, btw. :-D

Brilliantly done. Looking forward to more.

James
Comments from author:
Wow... thank you. thank you so much.

You know, sometimes I think I don't have a 'style'. I lament that my writing isn't more 'adorned', but that's just me. One of these days, you'll have to describe this style of mine that apparently 'screams' loudly! :-)

So glad you like my lines. Yes, I enjoyed that line. I aim to please. There will be another chapter in a couple of days.

I appreciate your supportive comments!

Blue
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Duquette
Review:
This is really interesting, I've always thought that Conner had a lot of potential as a character, but you don't see him featured as a lead all that often.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've wanted to write about him for a while. He's had chapters in two of my stories because he's fascinating for a bunch of different reasons. I hope you'll enjoy where my mind goes.

Blue
Review By [Duquette] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Xovervore
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I am really liking the setup for this story. It is a good way to get the three universes together.
Oh yeah, if Connor can kill a PTB, then it's possible his ability transfers to being able to permagank other high level beings.
He is having memories of his past life, and as he has their names he could do some investigation of his own to determine who all the people in his dream/vision are.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm looking forward to causing all sorts of trouble!

Yes, it should be interesting finding out why Connor can kill PTBs and demons... Oh, and I love the term 'permagank' so if it's yours and not from SPN, consider it stolen!! :-) I had to interrupt responding to this review to go write some... between you and my other fine reviewers, my brain is buzzing with ideas! I love it when that happens.

It will be interesting when and how Connor finds out about his 'real family'....

Blue
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Taldus
Review:
This is a really great start and I can't wait to see how you have the three universes effect each other after this initial meeting.

I really liked all the different character reactions, and I thought the paranoid reactions of the senior Winchesters was appropriate, especially since as of this moment they really have no character development. I do hope Connor and Cassie work through things, though hopefully not too quickly. I don't know about anyone else, but if my quasi girlfriend sent the air-force after me for being different when they're different themselves it would leave me pretty peeved at the least.

Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your lovely compliments. I'm very glad you enjoyed my debut chapter. When three rivers meet, interesting things happen...

I'm glad you enjoyed my character reaction, but I'm not clear what you mean by no character development - feel free to elaborate. The hunters are a paranoid lot and for someone with that kind of mentality, everything pointy is a nail and they're the hammer!

Connor and Cassie are going to have interesting times. This is the kind of situation that has the potential to bind strongly people together - or rip them apart. The next few chapters are gonna change a lot for everyone. Peeved is one thing, but remember Connor in the series? When he didn't know about himself, he actually turned to Wolfram and Hart....

More soon.

Peace,

Blue.
Review By [Taldus] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from Mcspender
Review:
Something tells me that Connor playing tennis is kinda dangerous to people's health xD.
I know that Connor is special because he's a dhampir and was chosen by a rogue higher being, but killing a Very powerful demon like Azazel is kinda surprising.
I wanna see the explanation you have for this particular feat =).
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Ever wonder why Connor was born? Why he was chosen by Jasmine to be her 'father'? Why after everyone was handed their heads, he was able to put his fist through Jasmine? I wondered these things. Yes, more will be revealed. Yes, killing Azazel is quite a feat. Wonder what that makes Connor?

Glad to see you're doing that thinkin' thing... it means I'm accomplishing my goal!

Good to hear from you!

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from kalibex
Review:
Great start! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm working on it!

Peace,

Blue
Review By [kalibex] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from aveave
Review:
Great start. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Just have to finish some editing. Glad you like it.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [aveave] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from RevDorothyL
Review:
Fascinating! I love the AU future that this opens up for Connor, as well as for Cassie and Sam Winchester. Good work finding a way to get Cassie to college BEFORE Janet's untimely death in "Heroes" (unless you're going to change that too, I hope, I hope?). :)
Comments from author:
I like Janet. That's all I'm going to say. We will see what happens. I'm glad you approve. When my favorite peeps approve of what I'm writing, that's always great sign. Thank you for your support! It is definitely gonna be a bumpy (and interesting) future...

Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sometimes all you need is one good swing..." from AllenPitt
Review:
This is a really neat story idea. Bringing 3 worlds together, I like it. The funny thing here is, even Connor doesn't know what he is. I'm betting Angel has him under surveillance (unless this is post-NFA?) and will know if he gets taken to Colorado or anything weird like that. Imagine Ange/Spike/Illyria showing up. Illyria...would look a lot like a Goa'uld to the SGC (human, taken over by alien as a host).
I hope Connor gets his memories back. With the new-Connor memories in there, he'd likely not be insane-o ...and he needs the skill to go with his abilities. After all, Sahjan might be gunning for him soon.
Comments from author:
Wow... You review and I get new ideas... Really love it when you review! Yes, Illyria would be interesting to explain... Yes, I'm hoping he'll have his 'chops' back before his visit to 'Chez Angel'.

I forgot about Angel's surveillance. Thanks for the reminder. That should be 'interesting'. I've been wondering how to take the chapter I'm currently working on... this gives me so many lovely ideas!

Yes, he will definitely be needing his skills *very* soon. Just not to fight the people you think... Wow. Now I need to make notes. I love it when this happens!!

Thank you!

Blue
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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