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Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from DrDamage
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This is good fic.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Bill
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Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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The way she said that does not bode well for Xander.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Selias
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Totally saw that coming. Over a millennium of memories crammed into a human head? Yeah, that's not going to end well. Planning on having him die and then regenerate as a time lord?
Review By [Selias] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Zealot
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Great chapter, hope to see more updates soon!

I hope Xander won't even try to hide what happened to him. Not only would it go completely against his character, it is simply impossible as well.
Review By [Zealot] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Duquette
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This is the absolute best transition from Doctor, to Xander, that I've ever seen. The best transition from the Doctor to anyone else actually, cant wait to see where this is going. Literally, hurry up with the next chapter before I go mad.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from SlykeDB
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oh damn, like how you handled the body. Well done again. If Xander is a human with the mind of a timelord he's totally doomed, if he (hopefully) has the enough capacity he would know what that would have done to Donna and will have to undergo a mindwipe, unfortunately the doctor for all that he is fictional has a much broader presence here for Xander to run into to bring it all back. A nasty catch 22. Looking forward to chapter 7!
Review By [SlykeDB] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from yog
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The only complaint I have about this brilliant story (and it is brilliant - you've caught Doctor's character quite well) is that Doctor lies about his age. There are indications that he's well over two thousand even before his ninth incarnation (9th incarnation 900 years - sounds like he made a number out of 100 years per incarnation). Other than that, this is glorious.
Review By [yog] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Bobboky
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very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from MagnusXXN
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Logical Xander. Its enough to throw anyone off. I wonder just how much of the good doctor was left behind though. Oh, touching on the fact that The Doctor had kids and grandkids. Something later Doctor's refuse to go into with anyone. Which is understandable.

Over protective Joyce. Nice. Little weird with the akward hugs, but nice I guess. Dunno how the whole dead person in the kitchen's going to go over when Buffy and her mom talk. Great chapter, update soon.


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Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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I am really enjoying this amazing story. You've thought out well how Dr Who's presence might have affected Xander. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from joshlamont
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Absolutely brilliant, especially when Xander remembers his children.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from Rod
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Oh my dear sweet Lord. I can't put it better than JonnyNapalm did; that's one of the best come-downs from Halloween I've ever read. Xander's realisation that he shouldn't be able to think what he's thinking, his fear of a genuine metacrisis and his struggling to cope with a merely human body again... beautifully done. Thank you.
Review By [Rod] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from kaleecat
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this is an utterly interesting story. I really like how you've developed it, as well as the character voices. Xander's disorientation after the spell ends is particularly vivid as his mind darts from point to point. And I do like how he realizes that there is two possibilities as to what happened to Willow. (and have to say within the buffy'verse logic she really should have died from that spell b/c lying there exposed on a porch meant free food).

I'm very interested in where this might go.
And I do have to say thank you for writing a Gen story (in that there are no couples other than established in canon at the time) because sometimes I just want to read a well-written story that doesn't go there with one pairing or another.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wherein we start to see the aftermath" from ArjaiH
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So far so good, keep it up!!
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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