Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from BelleMorte
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Okay this was, THE BEST CHAPTER YET of a truely great story.
I am well spoilt for choice at what part was best, i adore the depth you put into Buffy thinking about how getting Harry has changed her for the better, love the idea that he's brought such new hope to her.
AND at last James is on the move and got Sirius out, love his reactions.
But if i have to pick a favorite part, well it was just so da*m cute the whole Buffy and Harry in the park with the ducks and than the whole bubbles, adore his accidental magic with Buffy as well as her reaction to it, love reading this whole maternal Buffy it's well perfect.
Thank you for another great chapter, you made my week and as always made me jump with joy at seeing the chapter alert.
Not sure what i am looking forward to more, James turning up at the Dursley's and finding out how bad they are and that harry is not there, or when Buffy and James finally meet (though i have a feeling that's not going to be soon) and seeing how their first meeting goes.
Anyway till next time, thank you.
Review By [BelleMorte] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A truly brilliant chapter. I predict a couple more chapters involving going for Harry, not finding him, some serious words with Dumbledore, perhaps the political fall of Dumbledore with Giles and Willow meanwhile looking for the source of Harry's powers and eventually the magical world. At some point you'll need to do a major time jump of around 9 or 10 years in order to get Harry into Hogwarts and proceeded with that plot line. I look forward to seeing how this all continues to play out.
I see the biggest problem coming up will be how and why James Potter et all will or will not find his son Harry. The two solutions to this i see are some sort of magical handwavium that hides him or that you create a James/Buffy pairing. If you go the hidden way- will young Harry will be recognized or not by wizarding worlders; particularly if there will be a manhunt if you go the Harry is hidden way. Should you choose to go the relationship way it could very well work although the pairing idea will be far, far more difficult to write given the problems that are bound to come up when those two meet.
Just found it, loving both the idea of Dawn and Harry being Buffy's children. Thank you (& also loving the idea the Neville is with his mum not the weirdo that is his Gran. For that alone I'd love the fic regardless of what I put above :)
Review By [Misty] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great chapter! But then again, how can we expect anything different from you?
Yay for Sirius! And Dumbledore is not going to survive the confrontation with James, is he? Love Buffy/Harry scenes, she's such a great mother...
Review By [Callista] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you had James able to take charge. I find it interesting the thing with Alice, because I'm not sure if this means that Neville will end up being fierce and brave or a prat if she raises him. I enjoyed the parts with Buffy and Harry.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from LordSchmodder
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I really like this fic. I'm waiting with baiting breath on James' reaction to discovering that Harry isn't at the Dursley's anymore. Thanks for continuing!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
I have a notion that Dumbledore is going to be in hip deep trouble at least. And that Frank Longbottom is fairly lucky that he's already nutso. And that Crouch's career isn't the only one about to take a nose dive.
I wonder if the three remaining marauders will hunt the the last one, and Crouch Jr. and the Lestranges as well...
Thanks fro writing
Review By [vidicon] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
So very very good. I think this was the best chapter yet. I'm looking forward to seeing Harry train with Willow. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Sirius and James as well.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Well almost to the discovery of Lost Harry. I really really hope it blows up in Dumbledore's face. He may manage to keep some form of power, but I can't imagine he'll retain all three positions, the international one, wizengamot one, and headmaster one. He could probably save one, but I can't see him not suffering for his part in Sirius's imprisonment considering he was the "witness" and then putting Harry with Muggles when he had no right to and for Harry then going missing. I can see him getting away by blaming the Dursleys, but as slippery as he is he can't get off without loosing a lot of power and influence. Especially since one Hero of the wizarding world will be against him and he lost the other one.
I'm looking forward to more and really hope Dumbledore's actions blow up in his face.
Review By [MaddRobot] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Sirius finally got out of Azkaban and was reunited with James! YAY!
I'm both dreading and looking forward to when James will eventually show up at the Dursleys and discover that Harry's not there. On one hand, it's probably going to be the proverbial straw that breaks James' back and that's not going to be pretty. On the other hand, Vernon Dursley (and Dumbledore) will actually have to face the consequences of his actions which is good in my book.
Harry's display of magic made me cringe when I thought of how such a thing must have been received by the Dursleys in canon the first time it happened. So, SO glad that Harry has Buffy taking care of him instead of the Durselys.