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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I assume you mean eight chapters of 2500+ words.
Whoever arranged the contract to save Kendra's spirit and allow her to lead a long and hopefully happy life else where, has done some serious long term planning. He, she or it is probably responsible for blocking Faith's memories pre coma.

The SVU detectives may not be able to find out anything on the 613th Rangers. That's is where Faith turns up to answer selected questions.

The gang tags! Are they brainless or trying to implicate another group?

I don't remember seeing the film, so I looked it up. There's going to be some serious and quick or perhaps slow deaths coming up. I only hope Zoe is not a lost cause.
Comments from author:
Depends what you mean by a 'lost cause'!

This story has some unexpected consequences for a lot of people...actually that's putting mildly! However, I shall say no more.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I see the makings of a rogue Slayer gone evil with the prerequisite thoughts of revenge and mass retribution, as the title suggests...well, not the "mass" part in the suggestion, but you get the idea...

Yay You!
Comments from author:
Death Wish is a xover I've wanted to do for ages, but couldn't until recently work out a back ground. The thing that changed it for me was to make the vengeful slayer a OC. It seems to have worked.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Inoeth
Review:
Fantastic beginning to this spin off story.

My only nit-pick was her 'retrieving her steak' when she had thrown it at the vampire, it seems to be canon that steaks if not retrieved and pulled out before the vamp is dusted, tend to lose the steak to said dusting (ie dissolving with said corpse).

On the whole, You did an excellent job of introducing part of the SVU team, Zoe and the whole situation, doing a fantastic job conveying the emotions of the various scenes. Keep it up and I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Actually I think that should be 'stake'...I think we've found a silly error here I better go back and change that!

The entire thing about the stake disappearing with the vamp is a bit hazy. If the stake vanished every time you'd never have got Mr Pointy. I think it was all down to what they could do with the special effects at the time. I work on the theory that if the slayer is holding her stake it doesn't vanish, if she isn't it does.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Boy, Faith is gonna get some very weird vibes from this crime. Richard the dad, is he a member of the Demon hunter unit?.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Maybe, maybe not.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EasterCat
Review:
So far, it's very compelling. Hope to see more.
There were some minor grammatical and spelling issues, but nothing that can't be easily fixed.
Comments from author:
More soon, I'll check back on that other stuff.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DianeCastle
Review:
I assume the last name 'Kersey' means this is also a 'Death Wish' crossover or reference? At any rate, well written. I look forward to more chapters.
Comments from author:
Kersey was indeed the family name of Charles Bronson's character in the film.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written dark scene-setter, that harks back to the brutality of the movie.
Comments from author:
Cheers, I seem to remember that it took years to release 'Death Wish' on VHS.

D.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BillieBog
Review:
New story, yeah! More please soon. Thanks so much
Comments from author:
More soon as usual.
Cheers,
D.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rich
Review:
Anything connected to the FITA series is worth reading, and this looks like a worthwhile addition. Considering what they deal with, it was inevitable that the SVU team would eventually make an appearance. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [Rich] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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