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Review of chapter "Three" from MarbleGlove
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Hah! This remains awesome. I love the little details: that the security on Faith and Dawn's phones are likely magical, that Faith can probably hear Finch talking to John on his ear piece. Keep writing.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from Greywizard
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I'm enjoying this quite a bit.

Your Reese-Finch dialogue and interactions are spot-on. Now all we need is Bear thrown into the mix. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from Gideon
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It is much easier when you work together is it? Faith hardly had to break a sweat :) And she does have a real time data feed - the little voice in John's ear! I wonder who will be the first to figure out why those guys were after Dawn?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from RaeBear
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oh this is so good! I've been so trying to write a PoI/Buffy crossover and this is so fun!
Review By [RaeBear] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from Mcspender
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Ya know something?, I think Bear could have been veery useful in the subway station. Any chance to see the sixth member of the team =)???.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from RevDorothyL
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So, John went for KILL shots this time instead of his more usual knee-shots? Interesting . . .

Wonder how long it will take Finch and Reese to figure out that Faith can HEAR Finch's voice over John's earpiece? :)
Comments from author:
With kneecapping they still could have returned fire.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written op gone wrong and maybe just going full circle to right.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from slmncpm
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wooHOOO!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from PATM
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Is a 3/4 coat longer or the same size as a Pea coat? No matter this some kind of a meet cute yeah? Loved it.
Comments from author:
Yup, peacoat length. Maybe a little longer
Review By [PATM] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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I love an intriguing new cross!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from VillageOrchid
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Very nice and resonately in character for the poi characters and servicable for the buffy-verse characters.
Comments from author:
This whole story is going to be from the PoI character's POV.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from pagefault
Review:
Very nicely done. The interaction Reese - Finch very much in tune with the show. Reese meeting Faith + Dawn will be interesting. Eager for the next update.

A trivial comment:
"New York Area or the Machine would not have flagged it for us"
The machine only flags for NY residents ? I must have missed that on the show. Otoh one shouldn't think to hard on the logic of tv shows. If the machine flagged for the whole of the US not to mention the whole world ... it would be utterly unmanageable. Limiting to NY makes sense.
Comments from author:
It has flagged ONE number that was outside the New York area, and that was in the 2nd season first episode.
Review By [pagefault] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from VillageOrchid
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That's cool... and also if not distracted -- slayer hearing!
Comments from author:
Slayer hearing at 50 meters over city background sounds would probably be blocked. In a subway station not so much.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from PATM
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The perfect foil(s) for Mr Reese. Finch must be some hacker if he thought the sisters back story was clumsy. It's just like I was watching an episode.
Comments from author:
Finch is the best...even Root is second to him.
Review By [PATM] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing and well written scene-setter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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