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The Secret Return of Alex Mack

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Review of chapter "Interlude VIII" from raxadian
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Short chapter is short. Also, I guess Alex powers will also mutate or at last get stronger? She has been exposed to way more chemicals than anyone else who got superpowers in her world.
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Yes, expect that most of the interludes will be shorter than the chapters, and that the chapters will slowly get longer. As for Alex, she has been in a stable configuration for half a decade: she may not change much.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude VII" from raxadian
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Downingtown= Mad Science Sunnydale.
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Did you look up Downingtown yet?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth and Consequences" from raxadian
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Alex totally doesn't know that Libby could have an attitude very similar to Cordelia Chase, as in, she won't regret at all being a jerk even if she meets a nerd who she likes. And Libby is dumber than Cordelia, so... her learning to love and tolerate? Maybe when she is out of high school.
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Alex may be overestimating Libby. But at a minimum, the first part of her plan should work, since Libby is bored and lonely and isolated right now, and 'Acid Burn' is fun to chat with.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stuffed Up" from GwynApNudd
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>>Too bad Alex never cared to teach Willow the whole thing about having a totally different personality and attitude when pretending to be someone else.

Willow already knows this and has always practiced it online -- one of the reasons that Sal1x680 was never caught. But it is much easier in text, and Willow doesn't get out much, so in voice Willow has had no experience. Plus she really is excited to be involved in this new adventure. Besides, Jack is smarter than he looks. Remember Willow had already obscured Alex's electronic "paper trail" before Jack started looking for her. He just deduced things about Tera/Alex that the average searcher would not know (like the week's abscence without a valid alibi).

But Willow is a quick learner, as you'll see in other situations. You can look forward to confident portrayals of "CEO Rosenberg," "RedTree's Genius" (which gets her a write-up in Newsweek), and four other surprise live identities in the future.
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But still, performing well under pressure is astonishingly hard. Especially that first time.
Review By [GwynApNudd] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude VI" from raxadian
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"he dropped off the face of the earth maybe four or five years ago" Jack men said that hacker had not been active for ten years.
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Yeah, Willow knows precisely when she last used that hacker alias, so she is accidentally dropping a massive clue that she knows more than she's saying. Oops.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wrapped Up" from raxadian
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Well, is not Kendra the slayer or a DC character...
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Kendra? There are plenty of Kendra's out there, some of them not even fictional.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stuffed Up" from raxadian
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Too bad Alex never cared to teach Willow the whole thing about having a totally different personality and attitude when pretending to be someone else.
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Alex doesn't even realize that *she* has a totally different personality as Terawatt. And it's a learned skill that requires training and innate ability. After all, how many 'actors' and 'actresses' really only have one personality no matter how many roles they play? *cough*Tony Danza*cough*
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Set Up" from raxadian
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Never underestimate your enemy.
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Extremely arrogant supervillains have that problem by definition. Their arrogance forces them to underestimate those around them. Danielle Atron saw Dave Watt for years and never realized that he had more than two brain cells. Granted, he started out only using about one and a half brain cells, if that.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sat Down" from raxadian
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I am guessing that liquid was not the antidote?
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Nope. She's not going to take antidote just when she *needs* her powers.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sitting Up" from raxadian
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Well, she is Alex, damn. She better get into her costume fast.
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But it's a classic trope! Like whenever Bruce Wayne or Peter Parker gets caught in the middle of a robbery or something. My personal favorite: Clark Kent gets caught in the middle of a superpowered jailbreak... while interviewing Lex Luthor... and he has to save the day while not tipping off Lex.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible Robbers" from raxadian
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Maybe her dad could work on an antidote for the invisible young man?
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Maybe. But remember that Invisible Guy is a really good biochemist in his own right if he designed the drug in the first place.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible Dangers" from raxadian
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Well, I guess she will need to go silvery on the guys, cause otherwise, she is not bulletproof.
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She's dealt with bullets while not silvery. But silvery is highly recommended by Ralph Nader.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude V" from raxadian
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Yeah, cause a girl that got her powers five minutes ago can beat one who got them from years and got training. Jo is just a distraction at best.
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She's a possible *big* distraction. And she has no idea she's about to mess with a superheroine.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible Teenagers" from raxadian
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So, they are crazy cause they mixed up drugs? Mixing drugs is worse than mixing up drinks guys!
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Or maybe they were crazy *before* they got dosed. They were planning on murdering a guy for playing pranks on them. That says 'psychopath' to me.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invisible Trouble" from raxadian
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So, she will just be telekinetic girl for now? Good idea.
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Or maybe just Broad Jump Girl.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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