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Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Mordare
Review:
Great story even if I do not know where the other story line came from. I like the characters so far. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
which storyline?
Review By [Mordare] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from HolyKnight
Review:
Considering that seemingly Miranda's sterile. . . .its a miracle. . a Key-related one i guess. . . .Oh shi. . . .if Miranda was deadly, how it will be a Mama Bear Miranda Lawson?
Comments from author:
It's not a Key-related miracle. Dawn is still the key but she shown up earlier than normal. This is more in line with how the Mass Effect universe got brought back. As Commander Shepard, she knew Miranda couldn't have children thanks to information recovered from the Shadow Broker's database on her team.

Mama Bear Miranda would be deadly but think about this. The child is the child of Miranda Lawson and Commander Willow (Rosenberg) Shepard. I would pity anyone who thought it would be a good idea to kidnap or otherwise harm this child because you would bring not only the parents' wrath down upon them but also the extended family.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from SeniorFleetCaptain
Review:
I love what you have done with this story I hope that you are able to keep writing it.
Comments from author:
I will do what I can.
Review By [SeniorFleetCaptain] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Given that Kinsey and O'Niell are related and about to find common cause, Harris is about to get his Ryback on, and Amalia is about to preemptively remove the organization and leader voted Most Certain To Be The Bastard Fusion Of Shadow Broker And Illusive Man, things are looking up.

(The people voted Most Certain To Get Their Cerberus On are actually NID/DRI...)
Comments from author:
Kinsey and O'Neill get along like oil and water and always will. The fact that they are related will matter very little except that they might try to act civil around Willow. But that will be the extent of how they act together.

With Xander, I wanted him to have the potential to fit in with Willow's team and maybe be a part of the team while not making him a super soldier or more than normal human being. My first thought was having him go as O'Neill for Halloween but as I was writing the first chapter, Under Siege came on and I couldn't resist.

Amalia taking out the Watchers' Council and Quentin Travers was a planned event from the time I first started the story. As much as it is to eliminate a threat, it is also to send a very simple message.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from DarthPayne
Review:
Oh... Boy... Indeed. :)
Comments from author:
I thought a well placed suprise would spruce things up a bit. What do you think? Anyone expecting that?
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great story. I'm a fan of your other stories and this one is up to your usual standards. I took a quick look at the other reviews and noticed your pairing notes for Xander. One was him and Miranda. Considering Willow got her pregnant, that might make thinks a little bit stranger than usual if you try to pull that one off. :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're a fan and you're right. One of the pairing options I have in the air is Xander and Miranda. The child in question will of course be a daughter. No Y chromosome to speak of obviously.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Cmiller
Review:
If Joyce is Benezia did you bring Kaidan's soul back too.

Oh and Miranda pregnant with Willow Shepard's kid is funny.

Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Kaidan will be a mystery I will keep close to the chest.

Willow's restart of the universe was subjective. It wasn't an exact restart where everything was exactly as it should have been if the Reapers never arrived. The batarians were still beaten down by the Reapers but the other more friendly races have been fully restored as if no war has occurred except for the postive impacts of it such as the genophage cure.

Miranda's pregnancy is another example of this effect.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good story, thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you found it amusing. You're welcome.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Raider
Review:
sir, you have just made my night.

well done, well done indeed.
Comments from author:
I'm glad I did. Thank you.
Review By [Raider] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from grd
Review:
This is soo very good. The twists keep coming and surprising. I love it!
Comments from author:
That's what I aim for. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Great job
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Interesting story. But who's the woman Xander will be with? Ash? Miranda? Carter?

I allways thought that the Omnitools are part of the clothing (or something similiar to a watch) and not implants. BTW it seems that every ME (crossover) fic has a different way to explain how they work.
Comments from author:
That will be revealed later.

I based this on a codex entry I found in Mass Effect 2 about computer interfaces. Without the implant, you would need to wear special gloves in order to use any of the holographic interfaces that you see in the games. It makes more sense to have them already have the chip implanted.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Bit too little fuss over Jenny's death, I feel, but they are rather busy. Of course, I do hope she survives it somehow.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighth Of November" from AndreaMaine
Review:
My bad on reviewing chapter 2. I went back and reread Chapter 1. I saw the part where Xander said something about Willow's Uncle Jack being able to piss of Gandhi.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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