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Ship of the Line: Hunting Snakes

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Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story so far, I hope you continue this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from cyberfish
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I hope you will add more to this .......and soon Why? because I like it! lol
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from gaulty
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God chapter, bye
Review By [gaulty] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from DarthPayne
Review:
It's a real bummer that this fic hasn't been updated in so long...
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 01: The Chaos Begins" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Well it is no doubt that the Vamps are in trouble. Because now they are facing General Anakin Skywalker. Coolness

TTFN
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from gaulty
Review:
Good chapter, bye
Review By [gaulty] • Date [21 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Kay! Yah got a framework, now, where is the picture?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from Markelo
Review:
I like this story.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from Bill
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Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from Oddshot
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I am truly enjoying this story and hope that you update soon , I am tracking most if not all of the responses to the Ship of the Line Challenge & am find them all most interesting but also so different to each other, some one shots others with ongoing development .

Hope for more updates ASAP so I have more to read .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Nice to see this back, Are you going to post this on Spacebattles? Anyway in thanks ~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFQhBJWN0qo
Comments from author:
I'm thinking about it since a few of the other Ship of the Line stories are over there. But haven't really made a decision about it yet.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from banditdoz
Review:
Great story thank you for writing.I´m really looking forward to the next chapter.
I love how you are exploring a Alt SG1 Universe and the way you have let the other countries in to play as well.
Please keep posting in this fic because I´m loving the adventure your leading us on ;D
Comments from author:
No worries, I am blown away by all the reviews and such I have been getting.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from SeniorFleetCaptain
Review:
I like what you have done so far especially the council that runs earths defince not a lot of people think of adding a government or council to handle this. I look forward to read what you do next.
Review By [SeniorFleetCaptain] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 02: Through the Gate" from jimk
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One point you seem to have missed is the only reason the Stargate program was so small in the show was the budget for the TV show and not what it would have cost the military. Yes, it's grossly unrealistic that such a program would be so small but the first action of the US government would not be to bring in China or allies but to simply make it a major war program and put the millions of people into it that it would realistically have done if this were real. The whole keeping it secret and small would have been stupid in real life and again was only a gimmick so the show could be filmed with a normal TV budget.

Edit: Yeah, well the whole point was that easily making it international or quickly uniting the planet is not very realistic by itself. What's the reason for even feeling so pushed into it period? I'm not opposed to a good idea to make it global or someone wanting to make it such but your reply seems to indicate that you think it just has to be that way when it is actually the least likely outcome compared to Xander keeping the ship independent or it becoming American.
Comments from author:
/sigh/

I know that, I am not a complete idiot. Though I think it seemed a lot bigger in the series then what they could show during the last few seasons. However the reason I decided to make the Stargate Program international is that I didn't want to do what everyone else was doing and forcing the planet to unite just to get this tech or something. A few of the other Ship of the Line stories are having that, like the one with the Enterprise-E.

EDIT: /shrug/ Honestly, I am tired of the straight American SGC stories, read a lot of them and wanted to do something else for a change. Also like i mentioned you can blame the NuXCOM game for that, for originally I was just going with an IOA like organization but decided to throw this Council to make things different. Besides the planet is not honestly united, there is just an UN-like Council in charge of the SGC. By the way thanks for discussion for it helps to improve my story.
Review By [jimk] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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