To answer your question "I don't know where everyone is getting the idea that Xander has low-level force powers from. For I don't believe I mentioned that anywhere. Basically Xander has inherited almost everything from Anakin including his Force Powers. "

In your reply to Vianca, you said, "And no. While Xander may get a bit of Anakins powers in the Force it is not all that much. Basically he is similar to that one pilot in Wraith Squadron that has a very tiny bit of Force potential. So sorry not going to happen either"

Could you please clarify that reply? Thanks

EDIT: Just a thought about telekinesis - what about tactile telekinesis like Superboy? For the sake of argument, say that he is capable, using his normal strength, of lifting twice his body weight (not impossible). Using tactile telekinesis, he can lift five times as much of anything he is physically in contact with.

Opps. Sorry about that. Completely forgot I wrote that before I switched gears on the story. For I mentioned I hit a brick wall earlier in writing this chapter, therefore I recently just threw out many of the ideas I had.

However no worries I am taking Cretins idea and running with it. Once again sorry about the confusion.

Very good

Thank you for the Review.

I would point out that Nuklear should go and watch the first season episode where Daniel steps through the mirror to the alternate SGC...

The one where O'Neill was the General and Hammond was the Colonel. As you very clearly stated in your first chapter that you were setting this story in /that/ universe. If he wants to pick nits, all you have to say is that Hammond is the one who led the Abydos mission in that reality.

Anyway, I am definitely enjoying this and greatly look forward to more.

Oh... one thing... Girl clonetroopers? :)

Actually this Universe is not THAT universe, its a different Quantum Mirror-like universe. Since there have been plenty different of these universes showing up in the series.

As for Girl Clonetroopers, just wait my friend, more to come.

Charlie is alive? Then why is Jack part of SGC? Charlie dying was the reason he joined the SGC in the first place.

Like I mentioned there is a whole another story. However just some quick and dirty background for this. Basically this isn't the Charlie we know as in the Prime-Canon universe, notice he is older then the canon-Charlie. Well it wasn't Charlie who died thanks to Jack's gun, no it someone else in the family. And that is all I am going to say.

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Again I do not know where is everyone getting that Xander isn't getting Force Powers, but I may just follow through with your ideas after all. For that works out really good. Thanks for that. As for the first meeting with the SGC and Xander well I do have plans for that, and the SGC isn't going to be enjoying it. /evil laugh/
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Good for you. This *IS* your story and you have every right to take it where you want to go. If a bunch of crybabbies don't like it, well let them write their own story, nobody is stopping them.

Thanks for those words Clei, for I was getting a bit downtrodden from some of these reviews. So thanks.

okay its well written and all but I'm going to have to bow out at this point, your alt SGC was already annoying me when you drag out Charlie still being alive and being a member of the SGC turns it to active dislike, at this point I'm hoping Skywalker vents the the atmosphere of wherever they try boarding, but your decision to remove Skywalker's Force powers after the spell ends kills the fic for me, especially as an answer to the 'ship of the line' challenge. Like I said its well written and I am sure others will find it enjoyable but for me its lost its appeal. Good luck with the story...

and please someone explain why when an author decides to make the SGC run but another country or a group of countries they instantly seem to think they have to add stuff like moon bases, ships, defense platforms, etc... other that to say 'look see how incompetent the USA military is' that is

Edit: its bad for a few reasons 1 - the one of the main reasons O'neill was tapped for the first mission through the gate was because he was basically suicidal due to the death of his son, so now there is no reason for him to have joined that mission 2 - if he lived, why did jack and his mother break up, unless Sam is his mother which doesn't make much sense to me 3 - if Charlie joined the military there is no way he would be assigned to SGC due to that putting him directly under his father's command which is against regulations... I am assuming Sam is a civilian in this AU for the same reason.

Wait what, I never said anything about Xander not getting Anakin's Force Powers? As for Charlie O'Neill being alive how bad can that be? For this happens to be a Alt Universe after all. I have seen other Alt Universes keeping Charlie alive.

However it is your opinion therefore i am not going to say any more. Thanks for reading what you did read. Hopefully I didn't completely turn you off from the story and you be back, but sadly I don't think so.

EDIT: 1) Yes that's true but like I mentioned in another reply is that this Charlie O'Neill is different from canon, thanks to it being an Alt Universe after all. Therefore there could have been another member of his family killed, maybe Sara, or another kid. Also I know, I know then he wouldn't so suicidal to join the mission. But who says it has to go the way it did in canon, for once more its an Alt Universe.
2) See One. Though I would like further my earlier explanation with this: The original fic idea/plot bunny that I threw into this story, was that Charlie was Sam's kid from her past relationship. aka Jonas. It is also the reason for her leaving the Air Force. As for Sara O'Neill she was killed thanks another kid that she was babysitting/watching finding Jack's gun and ending up shooting her by accident. That is the plot bunny i mentioned a few times.
3) Who said Charlie joined the military, I believe I mentioned he wasn't. He is a civilian that has been trained to be a First Contact Specialist.

A well written and intriguing change to canon events for all the crossover universes.

Thank you. Stay tuned for it is going to be quite different.

Interesting start I look forward to more

When it comes to Force powers might I suggest that you make a middle ground between full Force powers and almost none.
For instance you could leave the Force senses and enhanced reflexes allowing him to continue using a Lightsaber effectively including deflecting attacks as well as sensing the intentions of others and it would also help his piloting skills. At the same time you remove the Telekinesis, Mind Tricks and even Force Jumps, this prevents him from being too powerful but at the same time allows him to be a capable and dangerous warrior.

Being able to sense the intentions of others would certainly be helpful in the meeting with the SGC since he might be able to sense potential danger before the meeting occurs allowing him to take precautions (I suggest wearing fully sealed suits so they can depressurise the hanger and blow the SGC out if needed), he might also sense that they will take the ship by force if the talks don't go well.

You could also avoid making him much "weaker" than Anakin by explaining that the Force works differently in the BTVS Universe thus reducing some Force powers to almost nothing while others are remain the same or are only slightly reduced.

Please write more soon.

Again I do not know where is everyone getting that Xander isn't getting Force Powers, but I may just follow through with your ideas after all. For that works out really good. Thanks for that. As for the first meeting with the SGC and Xander well I do have plans for that, and the SGC isn't going to be enjoying it. /evil laugh/

Thanks for the idea and review.

This is a good story, but for the fact that there is both too much information and to little. Your are deliberately skipping over some stuff, and overexpaining the things you do show.

You skipped over;
-What are the rest of the scobies doing?
-How did the spell end?
-Why did everyone choose the costumes they did?
-If Charlie is alive, why did Jack join the SGC?

You are over explaining;
-Equipment details. A list of stats does not make a story.
-Authors notes about stuff going on behind the scenes. A quarter of the last chapter was authors notes! I would really suggest you use flash-backs or foreshadowing scenes for this stuff instead of notes. It would give the story more depth and reduce the behind the scenes revealing you are doing. Besides, some people completely skip the authors notes. They shouldn't be necessary to understanding a story.

/sigh/

Yes I know I tend to do Data-Dumps, but like many fanfic writers I try emulate the writing style of authors that I read. For me that is David Weber, who is famous for the Data Dumps. I have tried to tune it down, but it still seems to happen often.

"-What are the rest of the scobies doing?
-How did the spell end?
-Why did everyone choose the costumes they did?
-If Charlie is alive, why did Jack join the SGC?"

That is going to be answered a bit later when Xander visits Sunnydale. However it won't be much, for like i mentioned I am NOT a fan, nor ever will be, of the series therefore it won't for very long and will be the the only real visit for a while sadly.

The spell basically ended the same way it did in canon, though a bit later thanks to a few issues. It too will be explained during the Sunnydale visit.

The custumes choice was basically answered in this chapter by the mentioning that Rex was once a member of the 501st LA Garrison and still had connections there. Therefore he managed to get the costumes for the kids, and Xander. As for Xander getting his costume that will be explained later on as well.

The reason for this, is basically in my other YAHF stories no really liked the long lead up to the fun stuff. Therefore I just dropped everyone right in the middle of the action. Though it appears not everyone would like that. So I do apologize.

As for Charlie living, /sigh/ well that is a story itself. Another old story idea thrown in here in fact.

Now as for the overexplaining thing, well like I mentioned I like use Data Dumps for the story. Not the best idea, but is something I am working on along with the show don't tell thing in stories. /sigh/

As for the author notes, that is me covering my ass for in the past I have gotten flames and bad reviews saying why didn't you warn me of this or something like that. Therefore I know just point to the author notes, and Foreword mentioning that yes I did you just didn't read it. Also I DO NOT do flashbacks for I really hate doing them for it seems like you are rushing the story, and that it should have started before hand. Yes Flashbacks are good later in the middle of the story but here at the beginning is a big no-no.

I do believe that is it, besides thanks for the review.

excellent work keep it up.

Thank you I intend to.

Not bad. I do have a few questions though.

"Parts of this unit were deployed by themselves for various purposes, and one of these parts would be Torrent Company which here I have placed under the direct command of Anakin during the early days of the war when he is still a Padawan and into the early days of being a Jedi Knight. "

Are you saying that he's a Padawan? As I understand it, Padawans were given the rank of commander. Jedi Knights were generals.

Edit: It sounds as if Janus made Xander a low level Force sensitive because he didn't want to take the chance that Xander would become a Sith. Possible Jedi candidates - From SG-1, Charlie O'Neill and Daniel Jackson. From BtVS - Jonathan and Oz.

Additional thought: "However that is not all for apparently this ship is configured for deep-space operations and sports six I-C2 Construction Droids, and twenty-four RB-I3 Zero-Gee Repair and Worker Droids to help keep the ship in operation for a long time. There is also twelve I-M3 Mining Droids which paired with the docked Factory Ship... "

As far as giving any technology to the Earth Defense Council, might I suggest building them their own Droids of the types previously mentioned? It could possibly, for example, speed up the construction of the Prometheus.

"Are you saying that he's a Padawan? As I understand it, Padawans were given the rank of commander. Jedi Knights were generals."

In the beginning of the war yes, Anakin was a Padawan. What I was saying is that Torrent Company was organized then and placed under the direct command of Anakin by the orders of the Chancellor. Later when Anakin became knighted, he would receive the command of the expanded 501st, and command of Torrent Company would later be handed down to his own Padawan Ashoka.

I don't know where everyone is getting the idea that Xander has low-level force powers from. For I don't believe I mentioned that anywhere. Basically Xander has inherited almost everything from Anakin including his Force Powers.

As for the SGC and ADF getting stuff from Xander and his forces. Yes, that will happened eventually but that is ways off. For Xander is not going to be happy with the Council and the SGC thanks to them boarding the ship, and trying to take it from him.

Also I already have some plans on what the SGC and ADF will get, and it should prove interesting.

If you take a hint of how Trawn improved cloning times, I suggest you look up prison cell and Jedi cell kinda stuff, some of them can shield against the force, while others just disrupt your concentration.
If they have the blueprints for things like the Trade Federation stuff onboard, for battleplaning stuff, then they might just be able to use a trade federation battleship it's computer as a main computer and use the droid control function (hard-wired instead of wifi) to improve slave-circuiting(?) the ships.

Their main problem is things like blaster gas and those other gasses, since it's wast from some creatures that live in gas gaints.
Maybe you can use a combo of cloning and building droids to get the right gasses?
Well, atleast untill they have a crude replicator running.
Would mean that for a while they would be running on lower quality, while saving the higher quality for a emergency and then stricking gold in the form of infinite high quality.

For now I would try and get to a more "out of the way" place, while leaving some stealthed com-sat behind.
They could always use troop-insertion gear for trips to Earth.
Before, you know, the Earth nations pull a "Moon Raker(?)" .
As for that upgrade option I meationed in my last review, they could maybe use it for when they design and build a upgraded Venator, possibly lengtend as well, so she gets more of a Imperial star destroyer look.
Do suggest Xander and co raid the internet.

Star Wars has a tablet variant that is slight thicker, especialy on the top-side, that has a holoprojector build in as standaard.
So you got options there, now they only need HUB's for the fighter and so.
Best thing is that the cloning facility has a teaching system as part of it's setup-up.

Thank you for the review. I mentioned that I didn't want to produce clones like battle droids so I have a few ideas already.

As for the Blaster Gas, yes I noticed that, and I tend to go research about the Tibanna Gas before I start writing up another chapter. I originally thought the Blasters just needed to be recharged but then I remembered everything about the Blaster Gas from the old EU Star Wars books that I haven't read in years.

As for 'out of the way', well Xander will do that once he gets the first meeting with the SGC out of the way. There he will start building up his forces, after a very brief meeting with the Scoobies in Sunnydale.

Again thanks for the review.

well, i like it so far, and i hope to see more of it in the future.

The main problem is that a Venator has short legs and doesn´t have any real production capability.
Now if a Civil-Industrial I-C2 droid was on the flightdeck, a BRT-supercomputer for the ships main computer togeter with a good amount of cloning gear, then they would stand a change to get her up-and-running long term without having to do lots of modifications.
A reason for such gear could be the construction of a fall-back cloning base for if Kamino would fall for some reason and expanding to include a shipyard and such would then be easy.
Though the Venator could also be used as the basis for such a base, just use enough Venators.
Just remember, Venators can land and if you want to not let people know this, check the Lusankya her history of how she became parked at Coruscant
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Venator
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Civil-Industrial_I-C2_droid
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/BRT_supercomputer
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lusankya

But if they upgrade using Gua´old tech....
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x141/zeppo_01/VenatorModularOptions.png
The light blue section could be converted to a Gua´old style flightdeck, that way the original (red) main deck could be used for cargo.
Pink could be closed-up with mission specifiek moduls and light green could be used for crew-deck, fuel storage, ect, ect.
Later Star Destroyer style superstructure will give them back their living space, for one.
Mag-Lev trains could be used for internal personal transport, like in TOS-BSG their Battlestars.

Another upgrade possibility is lenghtening the ship along the Imperial Star Destroyer lines and putting the superstructure of a Interdictor (were the grav.-domes are now modular pods) on the underside without the bridge section.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_I-class_Star_Destroyer
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Interdictor-class_Star_Destroyer

Though you´re forgetting a pefectly good plot-tribble, what if the day in the last episodes of seizon one was during the Sunnydale Halloween?
With that I mean is that those two Gua´old ships attack during the night of Sunnydale´s famed halloween and that because of the aftermath of this, makes the Venator staying around, though damaged, thanks to having made a capture of one of the alien ships while SG-1 wrecks the other one or so.
Thus having moved them out of range of the spell and that leaves things around even though they get their mind back.
But then strangly enough, only the Republic people coming from Earth, stay around, all the other troops are gone and they now have two ships to worry about.

What I´ve never have seen, is a story were they used Sunnydale´s industry to build the tech needed to save a few things (useal computer test in some Sci-Fi), the first computer could then start upgrading the factory systems for the real thing.
Or using the god status of the Gua´old to do a little planet grabbing of a little real estate with some pretty decent production capabilities.
Whats more real, the Gua´old their fake powers or the force?

Do remember that blaster gas or Tibanna gas is produced by Beldon´s, so unless they find a way to get more, they have to be carefull.
Lucky enough you have series like star-trek and Stargate does have ring shaped transportuers to travel between ships and so.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Beldon
http://stargate.wikia.com/wiki/Transportation_rings


Edit:
Ever checked the SSD page?
There are special SSD mobile repair ships, they contian everything to start a new fleet from the ground up, besides crew stuff.

Edit2:
The EVE and I-C2 construction droids work thanks to their Molecular Furnace, basicaly a Fusion Torch, certain mining droids have the same abilities as construction droids, though way slower in the build section.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Molecular_furnace
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fusion_torch
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mining_droid

Woah! Most likely one of my longest ever reviews I have ever received! Well I am going to do this the way I answer reviews over at FFN.

"The main problem is that a Venator has short legs and doesn´t have any real production capability."

No worries have some plans to counter this.

"Now if a Civil-Industrial I-C2 droid was on the flightdeck, a BRT-supercomputer for the ships main computer togeter with a good amount of cloning gear, then they would stand a change to get her up-and-running long term without having to do lots of modifications.
A reason for such gear could be the construction of a fall-back cloning base for if Kamino would fall for some reason and expanding to include a shipyard and such would then be easy.
Though the Venator could also be used as the basis for such a base, just use enough Venators.
Just remember, Venators can land and if you want to not let people know this, check the Lusankya her history of how she became parked at Coruscant"

No worries I am not Star Wars newbie here my friend, I have read the vast majority of the EU Books, the Thrawn Trilogy, all of the X-Wing Books, recently Mercy Kill, and all of the NJO series. The only thing I am NOT touching, even with a full length light saber is the new stuff after NJO. /spits in anger/

I admit my original plan would have the Resolute with a few of those Construction Droids that the Rouge Squadron liberated during the Liberation of Coruscant on board. However these I-C2 Droids look like a better idea though thanks for that.

As for the Cloning Stuff... /whistles innocently/

And yes I know about the Venator being able to land but I am going to be doing something special planned that should be pretty awesome.

"But if they upgrade using Gua´old tech....
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x141/zeppo_01/VenatorModularOptions.png
The light blue section could be converted to a Gua´old style flightdeck, that way the original (red) main deck could be used for cargo.
Pink could be closed-up with mission specifiek moduls and light green could be used for crew-deck, fuel storage, ect, ect.
Later Star Destroyer style superstructure will give them back their living space, for one.
Mag-Lev trains could be used for internal personal transport, like in TOS-BSG their Battlestars."

Ah! No. That is one thing I am not going to do sorry, the Resolute is not going to get any Goa'uld based upgrades besides some minor Asgard-based upgrades to the shields and hyperdrive. As for everything else, no this version of the ship is going to be a bit different from what we see it in the series. /whistles innocently/

"Another upgrade possibility is lenghtening the ship along the Imperial Star Destroyer lines and putting the superstructure of a Interdictor (were the grav.-domes are now modular pods) on the underside without the bridge section."

Sorry No. There is a reason I choose the Venator Class instead of say a Clone Wars era Victory Class.

"Though you´re forgetting a pefectly good plot-tribble, what if the day in the last episodes of seizon one was during the Sunnydale Halloween?
With that I mean is that those two Gua´old ships attack during the night of Sunnydale´s famed halloween and that because of the aftermath of this, makes the Venator staying around, though damaged, thanks to having made a capture of one of the alien ships while SG-1 wrecks the other one or so.
Thus having moved them out of range of the spell and that leaves things around even though they get their mind back.
But then strangly enough, only the Republic people coming from Earth, stay around, all the other troops are gone and they now have two ships to worry about."

You are forgetting where this based, for this Stargate Universe is quite different from canon. For it is purposely based in a Quantum Reality-Based Alt Reality. Therefore the First Battle of Earth with Korel and his father attacking the planet happen differently here. /shrug/ So no.

"What I´ve never have seen, is a story were they used Sunnydale´s industry to build the tech needed to save a few things (useal computer test in some Sci-Fi), the first computer could then start upgrading the factory systems for the real thing.
Or using the god status of the Gua´old to do a little planet grabbing of a little real estate with some pretty decent production capabilities.
Whats more real, the Gua´old their fake powers or the force?"

There are plenty to do that, like Xata and a few other stories therefore I am not going to do that. I already put in a hint into the story that Xander is not going to be hanging around Earth for a while fighting against the Vampires and such. Partly thanks to his knowing about the threat of the Goa'uld out there ready to destroy the planet he calls home, another reason is that I am not a big Buffy fan besides the bit about Halloween fics for they are always good fun to read.

And no. While Xander may get a bit of Anakins powers in the Force it is not all that much. Basically he is similar to that one pilot in Wraith Squadron that has a very tiny bit of Force potential. So sorry not going to happen either.

So that said the next chapter shall up soon so stay tuned.

good ship but you might want to replace the hyerdrive with the native stargate version dont know if you agree or not but i think its a better ftl mode than star wars hyperdrive

I can't. The Challenge specifies that the 'home' universe style of FTL has to be the same, no matter the difference between the style of FTL of the Third Crossover. Anyways thanks for the review and I am going to see about working on the next chapter soon.