good ship but you might want to replace the hyerdrive with the native stargate version dont know if you agree or not but i think its a better ftl mode than star wars hyperdrive

I can't. The Challenge specifies that the 'home' universe style of FTL has to be the same, no matter the difference between the style of FTL of the Third Crossover. Anyways thanks for the review and I am going to see about working on the next chapter soon.

Great story. Can't wait to see whats coming up. Keep it up.

Thanks. Some nice stuff shall be coming up soon.

very well done beginning.

Thanks.

interesting take.

Thanks.

A great start and I do LOVE chaos :D

Thanks. No worries by the time I am through with this story Chaos shall really be the order of the day. /laughs

great start!

Thanks.

It's strange! I remember another story with the same principe but with dark vador in place of anakin :)

That said, not bad, a good beginning. But i have no more too say :)

Good luke.

Yes that is another of the Ship of the Line Challenge stories, and the one I mentioned in my opening notes. Basically having the Executor in place of the Resolute. I would head over and check some of the other Ship of the Line stories, some interesting takes.

interesting start to what could become a very good story. dont do what so many others have done and leave us with a great opening premice and then... nothing. give us some more i believe that you could do this justice.

Well honestly I was originally going to forget about this and move on to another project but the very large response I got has surprised me therefore I am going to get to work on it. Thanks for the Review.

A well written and interesting set-up.

Thanks. Next chapter shall be up in the next few days.

Loved the start of it. Hope that you do contiue it.

Thanks. I will, and am not looking over my second chapter that I have written and seeing what I can do with it. For I wasn't liking it earlier.

Interesting.....

I assume since its "Star Wars > Andrew-Centered" that Andrew is Jedi Knight/General Anakin Skywalker. But not sure I see how "Stargate > Xander-Centered" fits in, although with General O'Neill and Doctor Carter, I assume it's also a SG AU from the Quantum Mirror verse or after series.

I am a fan of Jack/Sam, and Xander-Centered fics, not sure of the "Andrew-Centered" as Andrew is a "later" series character that I don't know/care much about.

Still, Star Wars tech in the Stargate Universe might be interesting.

Opps. I don't know how it became to be Andrew-Centered, but no it will be Xander Centered story. As for the Alt Universe yes, this universe is going to be quite different from what you have seen in other stories, and from the original. I think I am one of the few that has purposely has the story based in one of the Quantum Mirror Alt Verse.

Yes! Especially with what is on board the ship. /laughs/

Very good

Thanks. Second chapter should be out soon.

Yes. *Yes* [Steeples fingers], I see much promise in this story. I will be following this story with much interest, now in thanks ~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcZ9kQ1h-ZY

Thanks, stall tuned for the next chapter up pretty soon.

A nice start, though I admit I'm not a Star Wars fan so I don't know anything about the Clone Wars. I don't mind Sam/Jack, I think they're a good couple. I am assuming that Sam is a civilian, since they're openly married.

Thanks. No problem since this is placed entirely in the Buffy/Stargate Universe and not in Star Wars you really don't need a good background in it to enjoy it. And yes like mentioned this Stargate universe is a Quantum Mirror Alt Reality so of course the two of them have to be married! /laughs/

I love it and hope you continue it to Xander's quoted future rank. The meetings should be fun.