Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 2" from Tjack
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That's it I am hear by abandoning sanity and hoping for the Herculoids. Go Zok!!
Review By [Tjack] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 2" from SamTurner
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Missing 4 cars from that race if memory serves me right.I think Penelopy,Dick Dastardly,a scientist and the guy in the white car,can't remember the last 2 names.Will be waiting to see if they are in this wonderful story or not.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 2" from djhardim
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Now you've done it, coming up next - Captain Caveman, Mightor, the Mighty Heroes, Birdman, Space Ghost, Frankenstein Jr and the Impossibles, and last but not least, Captain Nice and Mr Terrific.
What you really need is Mr Black and the folks from Black Ink.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 1" from Rich
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Nice variation on the "escort" scenarion. Good work !
Review By [Rich] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 1" from SamTurner
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Go Ant Hill Mob.
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 1" from djhardim
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And the Ant Hill mob makes its appearance.
But what of Penelope Pitstop? Will she escape the clutches of the Hooded Claw?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 1" from DarthTenebrus
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WHAT the ....?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Escort Duty - Part 1" from SpacedCadet
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Bugsy Malone crossover ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Asgard's Chosen" from DarthTenebrus
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This may not yet be the Twilight of the Gods themselves, but I cannot but think that this is the Great Battle of our time. Someone please write a piece for the beginning of this chaos and how it came to be.
Today we write our own Eddas! Glory to all contributors! Let songs be sung of this day to end all days! ROFLMFAO...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Now we have a Roswell grey named Thor, plus the original Norse Thor, and if somebody brings in the Avengers we'll have the Marvel comics Thor. O'Neill is goingto have to give them callsigns or numbers - and it would be funny if somebody (other than me) wrote the scene where they all meet.
Well Done.
Comments from author:
Well, they could be Grey Thor (Asgard); Red Thor (Norse Mythology) and Blond Thor (Marvel). These three meeting would definitely warrant maximum confusion.
Review By [Rich] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review: Goodness, now we have Gojira entering the fray? Ah, at least these last two chapters are well written, tying everything in rather well. > > This is the real Gojira right? Not the crappy one from that God-Awful reworked movie right?
Review of chapter "A Little Recce" from Manchester
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Fantastic! I love the Laundry stories very much. Assuming Bob ever gets a chance to help out the ISWC, is his wife and her gruesome violin coming along? Or perhaps Persephone Hazard and Johnny McTavish will also get into the action...
Comments from author:
The violin is pretty much irreplacable so probably not. Persephone and Johnny maybe, or some other secondary characters.
Review By [Manchester] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Some really great chapters and a very good story line. Look out,it's a little girl with a football.Love it. :)
Comments from author:
Little girl with a football? That isn't my bit, I'm afraid [marcus]
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Little Recce" from DarthTenebrus
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A well thought-out story is a well written story, and this latest chapter to the piece certainly fits the bill! Look out Laundry, if the Sith take over after Code Ragnarok, then they might just decide to take a peek there next and see what's there...and that's assuming the demons don't wreck everything first...
Speaking of well written stories, I can't believe for the life or death of me how far this thing has come in only a month! And so many have contributed besides myself to HMM's grand apocalyptic vision, with so many more waiting in the wings to put their piece into this thing. It nearly boggles the mind how complex this has become while still retaining some semblance of coherency, and my own contribution to this has not yet been finished. I applaud HMM for creating this sandbox for everyone to play in, and I salute each author besides myself who took the time to add their portion. You all know who you are.
Comments from author:
Oh, I'd love to see one of the Sith trying to control Angleton's mind or Bob's, but I really can't say why without massive spoilers...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Little Recce" from HMaxMarius
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Very nice Marcus...
British, Laundry... Hmmm Extra starch for the stiff upper lip!
An excellent take on a universe with its own problems. Nice to see a group that actually has to think up it's response and not just throw men, material and money at the problem. I definitely want to see more!
hmm
Comments from author:
I may do more with this - I think Bob may end up going back with a small team of military advisers, a copy of "Computational Thaumaturgy for Dummies" or the equivalent, and lots of advice on why too much magic is a REALLY dumb idea, at least in his world.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Manchester
