Very cool

this new kin/pack that Cordelia's gathering around her seems much more promising than the old one she just exorcised. :)

Uh, oh. Xander's going to be in trouble. *grin*

Very well done! I love how you did the primals, and the direction this is going so far! Keep up the great work!

Is your vision of omega similar to Patricia Briggs books?

In any case, the explanations given and Cordy's changes are tantalizing.

I was reading about Omegas and came across the following - "Omega animals are subordinate to all others in the community, and are expected by others in the group to remain submissive to everyone. Omega animals may also be used as communal scapegoats or outlets for frustration, or given the lowest priority when distributing food. "

Are you sure you want to make Xander an Omega?

EDIT: Thanks, I like their definition better

For the others who might be interested.

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=omega+male

I found a couple of passages amusing.


Two Rams are butting heads while the female watches. The winner who mates is the stongest and therefore the Alpha Male.

Wait...A third ram runs out of the woods and mates with the female while the two males are fighting. THAT is the omega male.

The highest possible status a man can achieve. eats alpha males for breakfast.
When an omega male is born its game over.
the end.

I know the technical definition of Omega. I researched it and stuff, but that's specific to wolves. I'm only using alpha as a description, not a designation. Same goes for omega. And I decided I like the definition of omega from Urban dictionary best. It fits in with my plans for this fic best.

Wonderful! I do hope you'll continue this?

Wow. Wonderful set up. I can't wait to see where else you take this.

Several spelling errors but a good read
I like Cordelia's point of view bits
Thanks
Hoping for more

Your Xander's reaction to Alpha kissage was both hilarious and very true to Xander's character. I continue to love your story. More, please?

Nice, oh so very nice, start here!

A story written well enough to get a positive review from MarcusSLazarus on this site is a well-written story indeed, he is one of the founders of this site, as I understand. In the forums he's an Old One so yeah, his opinion matters here....

Wish I could have gotten him to review some of my stuff; that he picked yours to review over mine speaks volumes. I tip my hat to you, esteemed author whose gender I know not ergo I know not which to call you...sir or ma'am?

And if we're all still here after this day has passed and nothing has happened, then I look forward to more. Side note - check "Code Ragnarok"; it's a new series by HMaxMarius that is open to all authors, you may wish to give it a peek and see what's the what, as Faith would say...

Yup, Queen C's inner bitch just got 20% more alpha to Xander's and Angel's detriment. Buffy will really have to work hard to save the day. Willow will probably end up heartbroken, though, and that is just bad.

"He wasn't meant to rule, he was meant to care."

PERFECT LINE.

I love your Alpha Cordelia. But I have a very bad feeling Xander is going to be at the top of the Alpha's "mate list". He always seemed to attract the female baddies. Lol!

I noticed you wrote "tension in the room brakes" when I think you meant "tension in the room BREAKS".

Thank you! I changed it, I'm awful with this stuff so I really appreciate the help!