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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from willboon
Review:
great story keep em coming
Comments from author:
Thanks. And I will.
Review By [willboon] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Seven metaphysical years... a small price to pay.

Good stuff.
Comments from author:
For what Young Xander will be getting, that's basically a steal. ;-)
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from leb
Review:
this is great! please update it soon
Comments from author:
The next chapter is being written, but I have no idea when it will be ready to post.
Review By [leb] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from loretta
Review:
this sounds like it will be a great story, i cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [loretta] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from superfan
Review:
I hope he goes for the Space-Marine/Charmed/Bond combo.

I really enjoyed this. Hope for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that would allow for a whole lot of options, wouldn't it? ;-)
Review By [superfan] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mendal
Review:
If you know anything about 3.5 the choice would psionists.


EDIT:In that case a monk should definitely be included.
Comments from author:
Not at all familiar with the 3.5 version, since when I played, psionics were in the supplement in teh back of the book and were all determined by rolling the dice.

But, I have my own plans for what is and isn't available, as you'll soon see. ;-)
Review By [mendal] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice start on the story, I hope to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the chapter as my muse dictates it to me. ;-)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Miranda
Review:
I really like how this story is written so far.

I always love "super" Xander stories, but the one thing I would stress is that the automatic upgrade to being amazing at everything gets over used. Even Buffy took 7 years to get to a level able to take on extreme villains. I guess what I'm saying is that I want to see Xander's evolution.
Comments from author:
Not to worry too much.

Xander will honestly earn everything he gets. ;-)
Review By [Miranda] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from shakeval
Review:
probably some sort of war-born sorcerer who has a patron god or goddess that has taken a vested interest in it's new representative in this dimension, all xander has to do is occasionally give some sort of offering or pray every once in a while
Comments from author:
That's one possibility. ;-)

And remember, you get what you pay for.

Although the coin used may vary, depending upon location. ;-)
Review By [shakeval] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Selias
Review:
Huh. Interesting.
Comments from author:
Not to worry - it gets even more interesting soon.

In a Chinese proverb, 'May you live in interesting times' sort of way. ;-)
Review By [Selias] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another well written and depressingly plausible look at a future of humanity.
Comments from author:
Yep.

Whenever I'm feeling depressed, I just look at the world around me, and then I go and slice my wrists even deeper. ;-(
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
Give him the Ultimate version of the Super Soldier Serum and the appropriate training.

A moderate magic ability, a knowledge of the arcane and languages on a level with Giles.

In general, I would ask my counterpart what abilities the other Xanders found to be most useful.

Some abilities may be more compatible with Xander than others.

Note: Get Harry Potter trunk, some force lances, an Omni-Tool, etc.

After reading some of the previous reviews, I'm curious about psionics.

Does this story cross over with Heinlein?

EDIT: To be really, REALLY greedy, give him a Morphic Adaptation Unit
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-8427/GandalfTG+Worthless.htm
Comments from author:
I've got a good idea of what Young Xander will be ending up with, and you'll see what that is, starting a couple chapters from now.

And giving Xander a MAU is definitely getting into Xander-Stu territory.

Not that that couldn't be fun, mind you. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Just remember TANSTAAFL!

Seeing what Xander has to do for the powers he requests will be fun!
Comments from author:
Most definitely. You get what you pay for - one way or another. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Studyofchaos
Review:
More please! Gambit powers for the thief bit is always nice... I liked the Charmed option and maybe Spiderman for the Warrior. Nice blend but not God like.
Comments from author:
Spiderman is definitely a really good general brick set for your basic character.

And you'll be seeing what Xander will be offered, and what he'll be choosing in upcoming chapters.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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