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Review of chapter "I'm not evil... I'm misunderstood" from Keshkreature
Review:
Very enjoyable :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm not evil... I'm misunderstood" from xman
Review:
Love the story and want more now so get to work on it. No really lover it and hope you get more done soon.
Review By [xman] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm not evil... I'm misunderstood" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I can see how Harry's "old man" story will be misconstrued by Giles. Good character moments. Not so sure about "primal human" but I can see how the magic around the key's protection might have some odd reactions from the interdimensional energy of the hellmouth.
Comments from author:
I'd like to share the answer but that would of course be a spoiler :D It might indeed be connected to the monks that created Dawn... or not
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm not evil... I'm misunderstood" from tiggergirl
Review:
Great story idea but the timing is pretty off on this chapter. Think about the time dawn is alone before Giles came upstairs. Harry took time to bathe etc before going to get dawn. Otherwise keep up the good work. I love the Xander parts so far.
Comments from author:
Yer, I think I wanted to portray that Buffy had to call Giles from his house... and that he had to drive to Buffy's... I'll fix it soon I guess :D Thanks!!!
Review By [tiggergirl] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from budrick
Review:
this is a very funny fic , it reminds me of Harry as " Mr Black " but in a different direction, keep up the good work,hope the next chapter comes out quickly,
Review By [budrick] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay... continuing to enjoy the Harry reveals and the Harry and Dawn friendship. You did a fair job of explaining/describing what might be going on with Xander. The Key protection thing might be powering him up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from borgrabbit
Review:
A snifter of haiku:

My own learning curve
A tall order breaking wind
Laughing at shovels

Great chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from eriktheviking
Review:
Always good for a laugh, thank you.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jaeger
Review:
Great fun this story.
The whole "pleased to meet you, hope you've guessed my name... aaand your guess was wrong." is very entertaining
Review By [jaeger] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
Darned double post haiku, again:

I hit the damn button
I guess I hit it real good
I saw deja vu
Comments from author:
ahahahaha
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
Darned double post haiku:

I hit the damn button
I guess I hit it real good
I saw deja vu
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from cabale
Review:
It's just harry and it's already an epic clusterfuck! It's like reading the dark lord ascendent or another ramna fanfic!
Comments from author:
dunno if it's a good thing or not but from your rating I think you like it so thanks!!!
Review By [cabale] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ivanjedi
Review:
*getting myself up from the floor from laughing*
Well, they do say that to assume things is the fastest way to make an ass of yourself...
Comments from author:
thanks!!!
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
If haiku is always so brief, why don't they call it 'underwear'?☺:

'Ware the Dragon's fart
Repulsive joy that it is
Each one loves their own



Great story! The dragon haiku is a nod to your Serpent assassin mini-arc.
Comments from author:
Ahaha well I'm glad that I inspired you to make or get or find a haiku for the story! Thanks for the review
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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