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Review of chapter "I'm not evil... I'm misunderstood" from tiggergirl
Review:
Great story idea but the timing is pretty off on this chapter. Think about the time dawn is alone before Giles came upstairs. Harry took time to bathe etc before going to get dawn. Otherwise keep up the good work. I love the Xander parts so far.
Comments from author:
Yer, I think I wanted to portray that Buffy had to call Giles from his house... and that he had to drive to Buffy's... I'll fix it soon I guess :D Thanks!!!
Review By [tiggergirl] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from budrick
Review:
this is a very funny fic , it reminds me of Harry as " Mr Black " but in a different direction, keep up the good work,hope the next chapter comes out quickly,
Review By [budrick] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay... continuing to enjoy the Harry reveals and the Harry and Dawn friendship. You did a fair job of explaining/describing what might be going on with Xander. The Key protection thing might be powering him up.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from borgrabbit
Review:
A snifter of haiku:

My own learning curve
A tall order breaking wind
Laughing at shovels

Great chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It's a deal" from eriktheviking
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Always good for a laugh, thank you.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jaeger
Review:
Great fun this story.
The whole "pleased to meet you, hope you've guessed my name... aaand your guess was wrong." is very entertaining
Review By [jaeger] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
Darned double post haiku, again:

I hit the damn button
I guess I hit it real good
I saw deja vu
Comments from author:
ahahahaha
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
Darned double post haiku:

I hit the damn button
I guess I hit it real good
I saw deja vu
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from cabale
Review:
It's just harry and it's already an epic clusterfuck! It's like reading the dark lord ascendent or another ramna fanfic!
Comments from author:
dunno if it's a good thing or not but from your rating I think you like it so thanks!!!
Review By [cabale] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ivanjedi
Review:
*getting myself up from the floor from laughing*
Well, they do say that to assume things is the fastest way to make an ass of yourself...
Comments from author:
thanks!!!
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
If haiku is always so brief, why don't they call it 'underwear'?☺:

'Ware the Dragon's fart
Repulsive joy that it is
Each one loves their own


Great story! The dragon haiku is a nod to your Serpent assassin mini-arc.
Comments from author:
Ahaha well I'm glad that I inspired you to make or get or find a haiku for the story! Thanks for the review
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from Alestar
Review:
Oh, Good Lord. Or, should I say, Good Lucifer? Either way, this happens to be the most fun I've had reading a story in ages.

I stay a bit busy these days with work, but, if you still need the help of a beta, I'd be happy to make the time to do what I can. After all, the fact that you too can sit and watch "The Man Who Knew Too Little" two times in a row is very telling that you and I would get along. ;)

-Josh
Comments from author:
yay!
Review By [Alestar] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the story and am still a little confused about if anything at all might be "wrong" with Xander... or if his friends are only just noticing him again after ignoring him for a year.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from scottyboy
Review:
This is a hoot! Keep em coming.
Review By [scottyboy] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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