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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ivanjedi
Review:
*getting myself up from the floor from laughing*
Well, they do say that to assume things is the fastest way to make an ass of yourself...
Comments from author:
thanks!!!
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from borgrabbit
Review:
If haiku is always so brief, why don't they call it 'underwear'?☺:

'Ware the Dragon's fart
Repulsive joy that it is
Each one loves their own



Great story! The dragon haiku is a nod to your Serpent assassin mini-arc.
Comments from author:
Ahaha well I'm glad that I inspired you to make or get or find a haiku for the story! Thanks for the review
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from Alestar
Review:
Oh, Good Lord. Or, should I say, Good Lucifer? Either way, this happens to be the most fun I've had reading a story in ages.

I stay a bit busy these days with work, but, if you still need the help of a beta, I'd be happy to make the time to do what I can. After all, the fact that you too can sit and watch "The Man Who Knew Too Little" two times in a row is very telling that you and I would get along. ;)

-Josh
Comments from author:
yay!
Review By [Alestar] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Order,The Law, And the Snorkack" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the story and am still a little confused about if anything at all might be "wrong" with Xander... or if his friends are only just noticing him again after ignoring him for a year.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from scottyboy
Review:
This is a hoot! Keep em coming.
Review By [scottyboy] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thraxis
Review:
Good read. Shades of Make a Wish by Rorchact Blot.
Review By [Thraxis] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from eriktheviking
Review:
Good fun read with the attempts.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from stormcloud
Review:
great story
Review By [stormcloud] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
I don't think you should have made Harry completely oblivious to the attempted assassination. It would be even funnier if he as only acting that way to screw with their minds.
Comments from author:
who knows :D he might be ahahaha
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from lillyb
Review:
great work
Review By [lillyb] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
First off, amazing story. It's brillant and I love Dawn blackmailing Buffy into increasing her allowance. Oh, no the council messing with Harry won't be good. Look forward to more!

Second off, I am writing an Assassin Creed fic, and when "I say An assassin will kill you and be done with it, I however... I. Will. Break. You" my mind went to that so I have to ask...can I please use that line? Pretty please? With cherry on top? :D
Comments from author:
Sure you can :D
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from Rod
Review:
This is entertaining, but dear God does it need a beta reader. Every now and then your tenses go badly wrong, and you seem to be afflicted with Random Capital Letters. And funny as the oblivious encounter with the Serpent was, why on Earth is Harry suddenly immune to poisons?

PS: No, "Lucifer" does not mean "Morningstar", it means "light bearer". I think you can blame Milton for the poetic reinterpretation.
Comments from author:
yer... I blame Wikipedia ahaha... for poisons well I'm going to be explaining that later on the fic something to do with the HP background where he goes into a coma and wakes up but has not grown.
Review By [Rod] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter of the Serpent" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, glad to see another chapter so soon. Not quite sure what's going on with Xander but it seems fun.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ZippySaboteur
Review:
haha I can see now how this situation is going to hilariously spiral out of control as everybody keeps making assumptions and the only one who'd think to flat out ask Harry is Dawn and she'd never be listened to by the others. This is going to be entertaining.
Review By [ZippySaboteur] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The mutual misunderstandings continue to be quite funny. Didn't quite understand the pacing about your last paragraph with Harry and Riley.
Comments from author:
that was just an Omake

Nothing serious just something that dripped out of my brain ;d It's just a... spoiler if you will that might not even make it to the story
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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