Good read. Shades of Make a Wish by Rorchact Blot.

Good fun read with the attempts.

great story

I don't think you should have made Harry completely oblivious to the attempted assassination. It would be even funnier if he as only acting that way to screw with their minds.

who knows :D he might be ahahaha

great work

First off, amazing story. It's brillant and I love Dawn blackmailing Buffy into increasing her allowance. Oh, no the council messing with Harry won't be good. Look forward to more!

Second off, I am writing an Assassin Creed fic, and when "I say An assassin will kill you and be done with it, I however... I. Will. Break. You" my mind went to that so I have to ask...can I please use that line? Pretty please? With cherry on top? :D

Sure you can :D

This is entertaining, but dear God does it need a beta reader. Every now and then your tenses go badly wrong, and you seem to be afflicted with Random Capital Letters. And funny as the oblivious encounter with the Serpent was, why on Earth is Harry suddenly immune to poisons?

PS: No, "Lucifer" does not mean "Morningstar", it means "light bearer". I think you can blame Milton for the poetic reinterpretation.

yer... I blame Wikipedia ahaha... for poisons well I'm going to be explaining that later on the fic something to do with the HP background where he goes into a coma and wakes up but has not grown.

Well, glad to see another chapter so soon. Not quite sure what's going on with Xander but it seems fun.

haha I can see now how this situation is going to hilariously spiral out of control as everybody keeps making assumptions and the only one who'd think to flat out ask Harry is Dawn and she'd never be listened to by the others. This is going to be entertaining.

The mutual misunderstandings continue to be quite funny. Didn't quite understand the pacing about your last paragraph with Harry and Riley.

that was just an Omake

Nothing serious just something that dripped out of my brain ;d It's just a... spoiler if you will that might not even make it to the story

ROFLMAO!! I have been howling with laughter. I love this story. Every detail works so perfectly well. Harry's comments about "the old man" he worked for, and his pre-planned destiny and how he rebelled. When he arrived and commented about the politicians "down there". Poor Lindsey and Riley's crew. Willy's reaction when he realized who he was being threatened by. Everything is just wonderful.

I look forward to reading the rest. Such a "Mr. Black" feel yet completely original. Just wonderful.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Oh god, this is hilarious! I love the style, very Mr. Black - ish! Keep up the awesome work!

This reminds me of "Make a Wish" which in my book is very high praise.

great story

Wonderful. I can't even begin to describe how much I adore this story, so I will instead give you the highest compliment that I could give a fanfiction writer: you are completely original.