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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NiereG
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ROFLMAO!! I have been howling with laughter. I love this story. Every detail works so perfectly well. Harry's comments about "the old man" he worked for, and his pre-planned destiny and how he rebelled. When he arrived and commented about the politicians "down there". Poor Lindsey and Riley's crew. Willy's reaction when he realized who he was being threatened by. Everything is just wonderful.

I look forward to reading the rest. Such a "Mr. Black" feel yet completely original. Just wonderful.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Review By [NiereG] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lordamnesia
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Oh god, this is hilarious! I love the style, very Mr. Black - ish! Keep up the awesome work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lillyb
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This reminds me of "Make a Wish" which in my book is very high praise.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from stormcloud
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great story
Review By [stormcloud] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TheLaughingMan
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Wonderful. I can't even begin to describe how much I adore this story, so I will instead give you the highest compliment that I could give a fanfiction writer: you are completely original.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from eriktheviking
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A great fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from Difdi
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> "You're telling me that the devil had a date with my sister!" Buffy asked hotly.

And with that, Dawn's reputation for dating bad boys has finally topped that of Buffy the Vampire Layer. Hehehehehe....
Review By [Difdi] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from lillyb
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love this!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from Doodle
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Excellent chapters. 1,000/10

Excellent last line.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from IronBaron
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Hilarious series of events. No one ends up with the idiot ball since the conclusions are completely reasonable. A perfect case of mistakes in interpretation caused by having the wrong context.
Review By [IronBaron] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from hpssslashfan
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"Does this mean I have to give Satan the shovel speech?" Xander asked weakly. ROTFLMAO!!!!!!
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from TheLaughingMan
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Nice chapter.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheLaughingMan
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Delightful story.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selias
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LMAO. Yeah, I can see him being mistaken for Lucifer.

"I know how you feel. From the day I was born my fate was already made. All I am was dictated to me, All I do was predestined, I was destiny's whip boy and I had to like it. I had to follow a shrewd old man's vision. I thought then and there, when he told me that I had to die because he tells me to, that there was no other way, no other option but to do what he wanted me to do. What was I? Just a puppet for their amusement? I decided to rebel! I decided I want to be my own person. No one to shape me but myself. Some accuse me of betrayal but you get over that quickly."
Review By [Selias] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chap 2" from VillageOrchid
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The misunderstandings in this continue to be fun. Hey and for all we know Dumbles thought that Harry was his world's Damien, too.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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