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Review of chapter "chapter 3" from Mcspender
See Liam, that's what ya get for listening to ghosts :P.
Good thing he learned first hand his most powerful technique: The Multi Universe speedy ceviche xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Liam's a wacky kid. But he finally got his act together. Let's see of the prof is smart enough to figure why his blond assistant is acting so strange.

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from starchild
I confess to having never read the books, so I have no idea what's going on. Just thought I'd point out that you referred to him as Liam Arteries instead of Atreides.
Comments from author:
Fixed it. Thanks!

A lot of this is based on the "Slayers of Dune" series.
Start reading here:
Review By [starchild] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 2" from Mcspender
History became legend,and legend became a myth. Of course, the Benne Gesserit used this to take revenge against poor Liam's memory. Let's see what Buffy cando to to solve this mess.
Cool chapter, and a happy new year mate =)!.
Comments from author:
Happy new year to you too!
Keep the Buffy on the down low. Others are reading. : )

You know, just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in. I thought of this story after I wrote the last chapter of "Messiah".
I'm willing to bet that the Benne Gesserit are stupid enough to subcontract the Bene Tleilax to cook them up a Kwisatz Haderach version 3.0 and we know how well that worked the last two times around.

Welcome Back!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HMaxMarius
Excellent grasp of the feel of Arrakis also the style and pacing of Herbert.

Not so sure about the timeline and where you're fitting (The God Emperor, Leto II, son of Paul Muadib ruled for 2500 years roughly). Not sure if you're counting him as the third Atreides after Paul and his Sister...

Anyway, like melange, I'm now hooked ;) do continue.
Comments from author:
This happens after Leto II, after the scattering but before the Honored Matres blew up Arrakis.
It all started here:

Thanks for the feedback!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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