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Review of chapter "Holodeck Program Buffy 1 0 - 3 1 - 1 9 9 7" from Harry
So, Giles learned some Vulcan techniques in this AU to control the Ripper. But, this time, the Ripper came into play in a way that worked out well. But, one of those who got changed was Jenny Calendar! This is going to be INTERESTING!
Comments from author:
Wait until you hit 'Isn't This The ENTERPRISE's Job?' ;)
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Harry
Why do I see some NCIS with all the smacking on the back of the head that Xander is getting? But, I like the idea of SG1, Star Trek, and Buffy woven into one story. I just wish we could get a image of Willow in Fleet uniform to top this off.
Comments from author:
*drool* uh... oops :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Barona
Very well done story, and the best "Ship of the Line" one I have seen. Love the fact Willow got to be the Commanding Officer!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Of course I do point out that Ship of the Line was a secondary challenge in the writing of this story. :) After-all, Willow's the Captain... not Xander =D
Review By [Barona] • Date [4 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from HappyWonKinobi
I loved this! I can't wait for the sequel to come out! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Darkstrider
I love this story. Well crafted, nice characterization and above all...STAR TREK! Yeah!
Comments from author:
Thank you...

If I ever manage to get past the lethargy of 'writer burn out' I fully intend to write additional episodes of this. =D
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from myrddyn
yeah i know it requires a level of tech support that doesn't exist YET, but it wouldn't be too hard to use the holo decks and maybe some of those vr suites or even getting the memory device from that asgard protected planet early and transfere the knowledge (or maybe have giles give a similar spell to ethans a try?) (sorry if i can't seem to get my idea into words properly) i never liked that the sgc built all their ships and yards on planet even their mines were all groundside which to be perfectly honest for a space faring civilisation is really bad. i always thought that everytime the daedalus went on a trip to pegasus that on the way home they should have made a pass by that
planet from 100 days (hanka?) and beamed as much pure naquadah from the asteroids as they could carry to be dropped of at a refinary on earth. hell the fact they didn't have dedicated
cargo ships was a huge mistake then they were complaining that they could only manufacture
half a dozen vessels for the whole year sometime duing universe! its a major logistics nightmare.
besides thats what holograms are good for they can copy their engineering holograms and build
a shipyard that mans itself all automatic hehehe! and i'm only suggesting a few star wars
bits of tech star trek was great but a big problem that they'd have with their ships verses gou'ld and other races is point defence against smaller craft like fighters. i wonder if giles could use a variation on the halloween spell and a manaquin to create a commander data? as he was seconds before the end of nemesis?
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from myrddyn
o.k very cool story so far! and excellent work with the pilotable torpedoes ( i always hated that
star trek didn't have any dedicated carrier ships for fighter combat, it takes all that humanity has learned about war and throws it out the window! a carrier is a force multiplier and its what has helped the us be one of the top world powers for so long!) once the ship is finished being complete it'd be a good idea if they started work on making utopia plantia drive yards or spacedock 1. maybe have jonothan add some star wars tech like the quad blaster cannons from the empires ships, and lets not forget they still have the ship thats powered down that they detected!
so please hurry up and update looking forward to what you come up with :)
Comments from author:

I've had a bit of a dry spell on the writing the last couple months. I'm hoping to get /something/ written again soonish, whether it be a start on the sequel to this or a follow-on chapter to one of my other works...

I very much doubt I'd do 'Utopia Planitia Yards' as that implies a level of technical support that does not yet exist in the Stargate Universe. On the other hand, there's that nice 'hidden facility' in the Nevada desert... ya know, where they built the X-303... ;) (Of course, that facility is so massive that it surely already exists, since it would take at least a couple years to build the X-303 from scratch).

As to Star Wars tech... maybe. It really depends on what Jono remembers, after all, with the PROMETHEUS, they have the entire Starfleet Database. With Jono, it's all in his head.
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AlbertG
First of all, thank you for writing this story. I am hoping that you will continue this. Although I like 'Code Ragnarok' hat one has 225 chapters so far and I would love to see a continuation of this story. With respect please continue soon. It's rare to have a good Buffy-Star trek crossover. Thank you once more.
Review By [AlbertG] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Okay. I don't know how I missed this when it was posted. Its excellent. You even managed to work in DAWN. (Poor Joyce hearing it like that) The girl needs a mobile emitter to get hugged, though. I really hope that there will be a sequel soon.

So many loose ends to resolve, least of all with the JAG angle. Wonder what Kinsey will try against the Prometheus crew? And how the Council will react to SLAYER IN SPACE! (With special guest star: Mr Gordo the pig!)

Thanks for writing

Edit: Heh. Glad to be of assistance. Wonder what Willow will get from her home. (And what her parents will think of it all...)
Comments from author:
Actually, the PROMETHEUS is fully 'holocapable'... DAWN S just can't leave the ship.

And thanks! I do hope to get a second 'episode' written before the end of the year. And oooo! I think you just tossed me the teaser! =D

1630 Revello Drive. The sudden absence of evening noises, crickets and other insects mostly, was rudely interrupted by a high pitched whine and a flash of light from an upstairs window. This was immediately followed by a crashing noise from that same location.

"Dammit Andrew!" Buffy muttered as she picked herself up off the floor. "Beaming me in standing on the EDGE of my bed MUST have been intentional."
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from valdimarian
Ack, sorry, I get so into one facet of things that it ends up occupying my whole review >.<

I loved the story, you perfectly balanced Teen Willow and Captain Willow in a way that I could totally understand. The one concern I have is how little the main cast and crew seemed to appear, but for an introductory episode you do have to do a lot more explaining than in later episodes, so hopefully that will even out.

Slowing down the pacing of the story should help with that, it seems like you reduced a 3 part crossover episode between Buffy, Star Trek, and Stargate into one two part crossover with elements of Buffy thrown in.
Comments from author:
No problem!

As to the 'Buffyverse' aspects, this story was focused on the fallout of the Halloween costume choices with an immediate crisis thrown in.

I do have plans for follow-on stories which will have a somewhat more Sunnydale focused bent. Buffy does still have to patrol... though Johno did get her a nice new sword ;)
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from valdimarian
I was going to say (before they were used) Quantum Torpedoes were designed that a spread of them could take out a ship that's literally 3 kilometers to a side with advanced alloys and redundant internal shields... against a ship not even a cubic kilometer with a single layer of shields that are not designed to counter warp / hyperspace jumps... (if memory serves it's explicitly stated in one episode)

A single Quantum torpedo would skip through a Ha'Tak shield like it wasn't there (as it's in a Warp bubble that puts it slightly out of phase with reality) and then detonate with roughly the force of a ZPM (according to memory alpha "The quantum warhead relies on rapid energy extraction from zero-point vacuum." AKA a detonating ZPM)

Most people don't realize how POWERFUL Star Trek ships are... a handful of Photon Torpedos could take out an Imperial Star Destroyer if properly aimed to cut into it's fuel tanks. A single Quantum Torpedo on the other hand could vaporize half the bloody ship! Speaking in relative terms it looks like an Asguardian Bilskirnir class ship is roughly on par with a Galaxy class ship, so an O'Neill would be equivalent to a Sovereign... The ship you've designed is a roughly 50 years more advanced fleet command ship including improvements from Admiral Janeway... that's obscenely overpowered (in a one on one fight... but the Goa'uld NEVER fight one on one if they can help it)
Comments from author:
Okay... but what did you think of the story?

To paraphrase a quote an unnamed member of the TNG writing staff "The ENTERPRISE is a vehicle for storytelling, nothing more, nothing less."

Star Trek was almost /never/ consistent in their use of the technology presented in the show because the stories were always about the characters.

And yes, the PROMETHEUS is major overkill in a toe to toe fight with a Ha'tak, unless you cripple yourself with Federation Sensibilities Rules of Engagement.

Suffice it to say that Captain Willow won't be repeating that mistake with the Goa'uld.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from SamJames
Great story. I like the way Willow adjusted to command and that the military didn't even try to take control of the ship.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [3 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from prehensileclaw
Thanks for the amazing ride.
Comments from author:
You're welcome! Glad you had fun!
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from kevinn
Being a Trek tragic as well as a BTVS fan I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to the next instalment (hint). It maintains the unusually high standard of writing you tend to find here at TTH.

Just one thing, any argument Buffy has with Giles about the real worth of the Council to the Slayer should now be won with just one word... Cruciamentum. It also proves the accuracy of their holodeck story.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I greatly appreciate that!

Unfortunately, while you are correct about her opinion regarding the council, it would not prove anything about the holodeck info because Giles was subject to the chaos spell. As a watcher, he would have had knowledge of the Cruciamentum, therefore since it is applied to every surviving slayer on her 18th birthday, the spell could have merely extrapolated a realistic outcome. As indicated in the story, the only way to prove things is to step completely outside those affected by the spell.
Review By [kevinn] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Morgomir
Great ending for the part. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I will try to do so. I have a couple other stories drawing my muse's attention at the moment, but I am thinking, planning, plotting and (heaven forbid) researching to get started on 'Rocks & Shoals'.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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