Good chapter!

fascinating tale, thank you

Love the mix, never would have thought of putting John in Buffy's world. Hope you will continue this story.

Loving this fic so far, every chapter. Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter. :) Thanks for a great read. :)

Thanks for reviewing :)

So, no Spike in a wheelchair? Funny that adding in John M. so far has improved things for the good guys, in a way. We're all hoping Drusilla is ok now.
If John gets a rep for aiding the slayer, the mayor won't be too happy....

Loved it. Hope for longer updates but this will do:)

Oh poor John, looks like Giles is going to have to do 'The Speech' yet again.

D.

Nice work on what you posted, but it seemed too short. I hope to read more soon.

-When might John get told about the supernatural?

Action-filled chapter, nicely done. Will be interesting to see how the scoobies react to a competent police officer - and then of course how the rest of the police reacts to John's report.

awesome so far. Loved coming back to town to read several chapters. (I have been out of town with no internet access I was going through withdraw) I thought it was going to start with Buffy and Faith and the killing of the deputy mayor guy but this is better.

Good. More. Quickly. :)

An interesting chapter decision. A good cliffhanger allowing the reader to fill in the thoughts of the character at that point.

Oh poor... poor... John he is so out of his league, but then again perhaps Buffy can recruit him into the gang.

Really enjoying this story! Just went back and reread the updated Principal Rodent speech though, and man, you took out the best line! That part about "if she is a delinquent maybe I'm looking at the reason" was awesome, I could totally have pictured McClane saying that. Anyway though, great concept, and I really feel like you've got the right voices for the characters. Looking forward to see where you go with it :)

EDIT: I guess... to me it just read like a logical extension of his first two lines, the "we're only looking at her as a victim in this matter" and "no one could prove the arson either time" things. As if he'd given Snyder a chance to back up his bluster, concluded he was full of crap, and verbally smacked him for it. Either way though, still an awesome story :)

I liked the line too, but Oxnate argued, correctly, that it betrayed information that McClane shouldn't have at that point. McClane wouldn't have concluded that Snyder's accusations against Buffy were baseless with so little information.

That's gonna make for a akward conversation.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.