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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Nukem
Review:
Oh boy ... Detective John McClane in Sunnydale?
His first 'task' on duty is the Order of Taraka?
I see nightly firefights with submachine guns and exploding buildings in the future.

Let's see what you can cook up there.
Comments from author:
Yippee Ki Yay :)
Review By [Nukem] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Starfox
Review:
I meant some little bits that foreshadow some of the weirdness in SunnyDale. Like a "Barbecue fork" statistic seen on a desk while John is walking past, or an officer sporting a scar from a bite on the neck, or some files showing how they have a new coroner every few months. If the cops are aware of the nightlife, maybe a mirror at the entrance. Or some advice about never to invite someone into your home from a SPD veteran. Not normal procedure, just something a trained cop like John might pick up at odd at first sight upon walking through the station.
Comments from author:
:) patience, grasshopper
Review By [Starfox] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Starfox
Review:
Very interesting premise. I am looking forward to the next parts. Will there be flashbacks showing more of his introduction at the police?
Comments from author:
Neither Buffy nor the Die Hard franchise is a police procedural, and I don't really want to turn either one into a police procedural. The introduction of McClane at the police station is more scene setting and establishing that Sunnydale _has_ a police department. I do want to portray the Sunnydale Police Department as being more than a bunch of corrupt incompetents though, introduce a few dedicated cops doing their best to combat evil both inside and outside the police department.

If there is something specific you feel is missing, I'm open to feedback.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Malciah
Review:
Nice concept for a crossover, I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Malciah] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from NoirDetective
Review:
this sounds like an interesting concept. And there are lots of possibilities in where will this story go. I look forward for the next chapter. P.S. I wonder when will be John introduced to local "wildlife".

Cheers ND
Review By [NoirDetective] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from OlBear
Review:
Wow two chapters in less than a day. I'm impressed.
Comments from author:
Well, it is the weekend. Alas, you wont be seeing a lot through the week.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OlBear
Review:
Interesting start and I hope to see more in the near future.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am curious about where you are going to take this one. Looking forward to it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
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Interesting. He could make such a great difference.

And the shock to the Scoobies when they found out about a competent cop on the SPD. They might get a heart attack from the shock.

I'm wondering where you will go with this.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good concept. Nicely characterized. Let him make a difference for a named character not an OC, and you got something.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cardona
Review:
Are you planning to destroy Sunnydale well before it should happen?
good idea (for a crossover)

Mr. Cardona
Review By [Cardona] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
Review:
You've definitely got my attention, and I'm looking forward to what you might have planned.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LallaBelle
Review:
looks like it could be interesting... but um i'm wondering why you've got it filed in the 10 Things I hate About You category when your AN hasn't suggested that's one of the fandoms
Comments from author:
Whups! Thanks for the heads up.
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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