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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Berkus Berkus, the Common or Household Berk. Related through the Bullius Bullius to the Jerkus Jerkus and Jerkus Maiorus.

I wonder where this will go. And how one S. Snape ended up with one B. Summers.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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If memory severs this is also Rose's first year, and was promised dyer consequences if she were not sorted into Gryffindor, could this be the new 'Golden Trio' or maybe the new and improved 'Scoobies'. guess time will tell hope to see an up-date soon.
Comments from author:
Or maybe a version of the Marauders! As you noted, only time will tell.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from purrfus
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Cute.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from Dreamweaver
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Hmmmm...

Excerpt:

[The dark haired daughter of a one-time potions professor and former headmaster of Hogwarts..]

Sooooo, how long did Sev stick around in the Wizarding World before faking his death/disappearing? It also sounds like once Buffy met Sev (and had her daughter?), she kept her distance a bit from the Slayer lifestyle as much as possible if the daughter (sorry, can't remember her name off the top of my head) hasn't been hearing a lot of the old stories and gossip from Buffy's early Slayer years.
Comments from author:
That question and more will be answered, at least in part, soon.
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from VillageOrchid
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Your time will tell comment on where they get sorted leads me to hope that they'll get sorted for "loyalty and hard work" not blind loyalty in Hufflepuff.
Comments from author:
Maybe. Maybe not.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IronOx
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This is fun - looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
More to come fairly soon.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from CPTSkip
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I quite liked this update. Your kids actually sounded like kids. The daughter of "I have a habit of burning down or blowing up my school" Buffy sorted into the Snakes? I hope the insurance at Hogwarts is all paid up. Lol!
Comments from author:
If the premiums weren't sky high before, they will be soon. Thank you for saying that the kids sounded like kids. I really appreciate it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from Aenea
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Funny, and well considering what a berk actually is Albus has a very dirty mouth. http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=berk
Comments from author:
Well, he can't be docked house points yet. Plus, little boys tend to know the bad words, especially ones with older brothers and cousins. I did get my definition from http://www.peevish.co.uk/slang/b.htm which listed it as general inoffensive despite its source. It's been a long, long time since I spent a semester in England.
Review By [Aenea] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from RevDorothyL
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Harry's son and Snape's (and Buffy's) daughter? Can't wait to see what kind of trouble they'll get into (and out of!).
Comments from author:
Author cackles madly.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from kiwi
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awwww. they meet! :)
Comments from author:
And the groundwork is laid for chaos.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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*chuckles happily* Brilliant chapter! I'm really looking forward to more of this, whenever you get the chance. Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from VillageOrchid
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This is nice. Not sure how I feel about the legacy names, but the one the Snapes picked shows an inner mushy thoughtfulness.
Comments from author:
Little Albus Severus Potter is canon. Severus did respect Minerva, deep down at any rate.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
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I'm glad to see Minerva has met Albus and hope they're both in Slytherin. The sharing a bit of their family's history was interesting to read. I'm so glad you're writing a Buffy-Severus story.
Comments from author:
Time will tell where they are sorted.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – The Train Ride" from ChaosLady
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Nice continueation. I was hoping for a little more though...
Comments from author:
Hopefully it won't be too long before the next chapter is posted.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChikaraKatherine
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Very nice idea. Snapes alive and married to Buffy. Go them. I love the idea of them both getting happyness. Nice plot idea, good flow. Now if Ron, Harry, and Hermione can just keep there noises out of things that don't concern them. Well if not then Willow can blast them out of it. That or Buffy could just punt them. Oh the joys of seeing angry white haired Willow blasting people. Can we get some wand distruction for someone? Bahwhahahaha. But no this is really a very nice first chapter. Buffy and Sev making cute talk about there daughters ability to burn down gyms, schools, exct. Again great idea and wondeful first chapter.
Comments from author:
Hope you enjoy the next chapter but Ron and Harry won't turn up until chapter three.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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