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Review of chapter "13. Repercussions foreign and domestic" from BlueEyedJedi
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Ouch, Travers is going to be spanked. Good narritive, the conflict between the various groups. Willow wants Old Xander. Athena & Dawn Want Helo. Xander wants to make them all happy. Cordelia 6 wants control. The Centurions want freedom from slavery. (They might empathisize with the Jaffa.) SG1 wants a powerful ally. Daniel wants the knowledge of the new. Who will get what they want? Will there be answers in the new chapters?

TTFN
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from (Recent Donor)wolframhart
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I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. Keep writing, you are good at this. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)wolframhart] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from deathgeonous
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I don't know why,
but I'll try.

This is a very interesting yarn,
but there's a potential for future harm.

Geeze, why oh why,
did I even try?
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from Netchka
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More please! Can't wait for more please. Need more Xander and Sharon and family. :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from Lithie
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I am currently reading responses to the 'Ship of the Line' Challenge and I find your work really impressive so far. You've done a really good job at not making it too easy for the Scoobies while as the same time given them a nice upgrade. And the addition of Sharon, with Dawn and Faith as their children, is a nice touch.
Cordelia as the business shark is scary, but oh so good! The mesh of Cordelia-Six is really my favorite. The SGC speculations are also quite entertaining. And the little hint of other possible Cylons/Colonials out there is both exciting and worrying.

There is just a little something that I don't understand. In the last chapter you have the USAF general say they are getting 2 Viper mark 7, but you have Jono only working on a blend of Mark 2 and 5. It doesn't really seem logical to me to give a better ship that what you plan to produce. Isn't it counter-productive to keep the edge? Though they do want the Earth protected so maybe it's a small sacrifice in their mind.

Well keep up the good work and Update soon, please!!
Review By [Lithie] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from Genuka
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Wonderful tale. I can't wait to see what happens next... What happened to Fred? Or Giles for that matter?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from AndreaMaine
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I just thought of something; I'm too sure how your alternate history for the Colonials and Cylons went, but I think it's about time Leoben or one of the others show up.
Comments from author:
They are coming, I've been holding off on them because their arrival takes contact with the Asgard. Even then they're going to start off in a form thats a bit weird. :D
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from Runewolf
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Delighted to see another chapter to this story.

I really like how Cordelia reacted to the threat to the Centurions. It highlights how she sees them as 'people' not machines. Comparing Zabuto to the Colonials was a great touch.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from CrystalBlaze
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The thing with the lower-tech computers was that the Colonials deliberately downgraded their computer systems to the lowest workable tech and upped the countermeasures to an extreme to avoid Cylon "phishing" or hack subversions of their systems.
Comments from author:
True, but you have to consider who is here. Everyone in this fic from the nBSG verse who is colonial is from the military or they're a Cylon. All of their computers are Colonial military, or Cylon. A lot of what i'm doing is informed by that limitation... as for the size of the proposed computer, well it would have to devote a full half or more of its power to keeping the Cylons out because it was that important. At least that's where my head is...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from Bill
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Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from eriktheviking
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Well written intrigue and action.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from RoyalTwinFangs
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Not bad. They will start to need more armor support later on.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from michaelangelo
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Call me bonkers but can't the colonials and Cylons develop a jump capable nuke instead of the more risky Viper bomber to bypass shields? they could jump the things directly from the flight bay, it's like Andrew mentioned it's like they thought 'rockets work' and didn't even think of creating better delivery methods.

I bet Sam Zabuto isn't going to win any popularity contests with the Cylons now, if the Vamps are smart enough to use guns it's only a small step up to armor piercing rounds, grenades and rockets. I'm more surprised the Cylons agreed to do it in the first place, they should follow what the Roman Centurians did and develop some high tech metal Roman style shields.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from AndreaMaine
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I just hope Mr. Sam doesn't piss off Cordy enough for her to think about a repeat of the Twelve Colonies. On that note I can see Senator Kinsey doing such a stupid thing too.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18. High Tech isn’t an instant win button." from proofreader
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I don't know if it was intentional or not but the name is not Miramax Horn, it's Mirax. Plus, she kept the Terrik last name. This is straight from I, Jedi by Michael A. Stackpole. I do admit "Miramax" had me laughing from it coming from a supposed star wars geek.
Comments from author:
That was my goof, fixed now, i'm leaving the last name alone though.
Review By [proofreader] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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