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Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from banditdoz
Review:
Yay! your back! The story is amazing please continue *Gives puppy dog eyes and cookies
Love the new chapter and the demon dog
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm happy to be back and I'm glad you're enjoying the new chapter. The title of the chapter is actually a play on the 'black dog' myth. Not to say Bratty is now an ill omen of doom for Xander but, she might be for anything trying to hurt him (if Pitch doesn't get there first).
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from slmncpm
Review:
i am so very happy to see you back and writing. this was magnificent. *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
Scones! Yay! Glad to be back to be honest. Happy you liked what I wrote.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting story so far very interesting.

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I really just wanted to try writing something with the focus on family, or at least family-like relationships.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from waterwitchraven
Review:
Is Xander going to meet the guardians?
Comments from author:
I plan for Sandy to make an appearance and the others to be mentioned off and on in this fic. I didn't make a lot of things clear because I plan to explain them better in the next story when it hits Buffy canon but, the Guardians tend to avoid the Hellmouth. Heck, even Pitch avoids it for the most part.

Secondly, Xander doesn't believe in the Guardians. So meeting them is kind of hard when you don't believe in them. 'Believing is seeing' in the Guardians series.

Xander will meet all of the Guardians eventually, just not for a long while.
Review By [waterwitchraven] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from firedrakegirl
Review:
This really is a sweet story! I love it!
Comments from author:
thank you. Sweet and fluffy family feelings are what I'm aiming for.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Lovely. Lovely, and sweet.
Comments from author:
thank you.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from Eureka
Review:
Good to see you back, glad things have slowed down for you.

gotta wonder what Xander is changing him into..and how he will change Xander as he gets older.
Comments from author:
I'm sure if you wiki Pitch Black or have read the books you'll get some ideas. There's going to be a YAHF connected to this story that'll cover Pitch's back story and why I had to have him in a Buffy xover.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from Jaylynn
Review:
I'm curious to see if or how Pitch's influence will change Xander compared to cannon. Not to mention how he would feel about Buffy since she is supposed to be the bogeyman of all things dark and is one positive role model is the essence of the dark/fears of the dark...not to mention if she tried to slay his puppy.
Comments from author:
Ah, I haven't gotten into it much, just hints here and there but, I'm changing Xander in little ways here and there. I'm planning to make it more obvious once I get to buffy's canon. Won't lie, Xander being practically raised by Pitch is going to make things interesting between him and Buffy.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from Genuka
Review:
That's sweet. I hope Mother Nature and Pitch start understanding each other.
Comments from author:
It's complicated. So, so, complicated but, I have hope for them.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Black Puppy" from Myauzo
Review:
I love this story I'm so glad you updated. Xander is such a strange little kid. How long do you think this story will run? Until or after buffy?
Comments from author:
This story -originally- had 16 chapters. one for each year Xander and Pitch knew each other. things have expanded quite a bit and I bumped some ideas into the same year. So, I want a minimum of 10 chapters yet. But this story ends the fall before buffy transfers to Sunnydale (according to airdates of first season Buffy was a mid-year transfer, perhaps explaining the new kid hype).

The sequel, the story I originally wanted to write but decided it needed this prequel first, starts off with the beginning of Buffy.
Review By [Myauzo] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Thoughts" from ultor
Review:
this is a really good story even though I've never actually seen rise of the guardians, but you explained things really good so i have a general idea about what the movie's about. And i think its interesting how Xander believes in pitch but not Santa or the others although it does make a lot of sense what with fear being an everyday thing. i hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
Don't worry you're not the only one that hasn't seen the movie (or read the books). Like my other fic, the Leading Man, I recognize not everyone reading this story will know both materials all that well and so I try to explain things related to the crossover as they pop up.

That said, you should give the books or the movie a try. The movie is entertaining and the plot of the books are well written (plus 1 book only takes about 2 hours to read). Admittedly it's Pitch's backstory in the books that inspired this crossover because it fits very well with the Buffyverse's themes.

Anyways, life has slowed down for me some. Hopefully I'll update soon.
Review By [ultor] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Thoughts" from RojoOjo
Review:
Really wish for more!
Comments from author:
I have, unfortunately, been extremely busy of late. Things seem to be slowing down so I should be writing for this and other stories again soon.
Review By [RojoOjo] • Date [15 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Age Six: Thoughts" from firedrakegirl
Review:
I'm excited to see where this will go! I hope for an update soon.
Comments from author:
Updates should start back up soon. I had to put this and other stories on hold due to RL taking up all me time. Glad you enjoyed what I wrote so far.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Age Six: Thoughts" from slmncpm
Review:
i love it! i am glad xander believes in him. heh. love the dog. i can't wait to see more of it! *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
Oooooh scones, thank you! Glad you're loving it, more to come soon.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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