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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
So Xander is behind the attacks and fooling Giles with the fake Intel about Buffy's baby, and Amy does not know about it. Very clever of him I must admit, a two pronged attack.
And Faith is slowly solving the puzzle about her past, this is gonna be messy :S.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Blood caked on the walls and flesh flying out the windows maybe?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from PATM
Review:
Ok, Xander is involved. Giles has regressed to infantality hasn't he. Reminds me of the good old days of dithering in the Library. Faith needs to butt in now!
Comments from author:
I put Giles' actions down to jet-lag...and a certain amount of dittering!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
I was hoping that Willow would beat Giles about the head and shoulders with a copy of "Oedipus Rex." (Hopefully in the original Greek)
Comments from author:
There once lived a man called Oedipus Rex,
You may have heard about his odd complex.
But still and all you have to confess,
That he loved his mother!

Or something like that...I'll have to work this one out...I may be some time.

D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Xovervore
Review:
I edited my previous review, and it didn't replace that review as normal, so have removed the duplicate text and put this note here instead.
Comments from author:
Okay.
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Xovervore
Review:
I just remembered another story involving the KoB - http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-15068/DreamOfStories+What+we+do+for+Family.htm.

I believe Amy has made a big mistake - the Chinese will get involved, and the Chinese slayer really seems on the ball; and together her and Riley have quite a lot of clout - with military and intelligence services. Her method to attempt to kill Riley lacks subtlety, and was using a sledgehammer to kill a mouse (in relative terms of the forces brought to bear to try to kill one man), and attracts attention to her from the above mentioned powerful mil/int forces.
Comments from author:
Also REALLY remote area so its going to take a while for 'whoever' to work out what's gone wrong. Amy has a window of opportunity, not a very big one but its there.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
So now the high powered rifles come in and Willow will get the third degree. Crap, meet fan...

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from MarcusRowland
Review:
You'd think that by now Giles and Willow would know about Slayer hearing...
Comments from author:
Giles is suffering from jey-lag and you know how Willow tends to just babble on!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Misty
Review:
Oooops! I don't think that was a good idea... Thank you for another fab chapter
Comments from author:
My pleasure.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Misty] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from AllenPitt
Review:
And... nobody really knows anything about Faith's past, other than she was from Boston. Hm, if this 'change' goes through, please please have her turn into the kid Eliza D. played in the film "True Lies". Instant parents. heh, with lots of extra problems attached.
I have to say, this is the worst idea Willow's ever had. I'm sure she'll go through with it too.
Gee, Xander really has fallen down the supervillain hole. Apparently wants to monolog at Buffy after his revenge is done. Wow.
Comments from author:
But of course...which can mean just about anything!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from BillieBog
Review:
Xander a bad guy--don't sat it is so.

Great story so far. More soon. For some reason I didn't get or missed the update notices but am glad to see more of Faith in the army!

Billie
Comments from author:
I've noticed update notifications don't always work. No idea why.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Letomo
Review:
Well, I'm a little sorry to see that you didn't have Xander learn from his mstakes [really, the monster-girl thing was very early, not late season], but the series as a whole is particularly good. Thanks for writing these!
Comments from author:
Well, Anya was a demon and there was that demon girl in season 7. I felt it was something that would follow him for the rest of his life unless he got away from hellmouths.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Xovervore
Review:
Dave - there are two stories that I know of that have the KoB post S5: your compatriot Marcus Rowland's http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-5220/MarcusRowland+The+Key+to+Byzantium.htm, and Jaded's http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-24875/Jaded+Sunrise+on+the+White+House.htm.
Comments from author:
Cheers.

I started reading 'Sunrise on the White House' but stopped for some reason, and I might have read Marcus's work. However I will check both out again.


D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Runewolf
Review:
"Amy suddenly wished she had a cat to stroke" Great image.
Comments from author:
I almost wrote 'pussy' but I thought that was going too far!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Good to see Riley survived. I'm hoping the younger Chinese Slayer got out, too.

Anyway, it looks like this little grudge match is about to turn into an international incident.
Comments from author:
The two Chinese slayers were originally from a fic of mine that got abandoned but I liked the characters. One day they may reappear.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from AllenPitt
Review:
Huh. I wonder if Shi. knows his wife is a slayer, even "the" slayer... not important. Wow, the Knights have taken heavy casualties and so far have nothing. They never were all that competent.
Riley should definitely stay behind a desk, he's too high ranking to be doing this sort of thing anymore. And Xander hasn't even struck yet...probably. It's kind of weird that neither Buffy nor Willow even know that he's now "out" of the council. Maybe Giles didn't have the heart to tell them?
Comments from author:
Maybe, people employed by the K of B to do their dirty work.

I agree that Riley should stay behind his desk but being a combat soldier at heart he probably jumped at the chance for one last hurrah!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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