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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Eureka
Few spelling mistakes, but pretty good.
Is the new Whitelighter by any chance Andy or Prue?
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The new whitelighter is Andy. At this point in the timeline Prue is still alive and well.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SpacedCadet
her mom Ira

Her mom **and** Ira ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
So need more of this awesomeness !!! You were right it would have been a sin for this story to not be continued, hoping for more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you like it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from moringstar
Another great chapter
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Thank you.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bluesnowman
good work
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thank you
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from cyberfish
I bet the New Whitelighter is Jesse
Comments from author:
Ah no.
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BlueEyedJedi
I am Beyond eager for the next chapter, and who the Whitelighter will Be. Andy would be a good canidate but so would Mark Chao (The Ghost that Piper fell for in the first season Episode 'Dead Man Dating'), Principal Flutie would be another good one.

Perhaps Xander & Paige could heal Faith. (Including her mind, that may be why she turned, she was insane.) She would better for him than Anya. (To be fair so would Drusilla or Harmony, and they are Vampires. Not a Anya Fan.)

Have you decided what witch power, Xander will have?

Xander needs to be put in touch with Grams & Penny (His Mom.), they can help him just as much as a whitelighter.

Comments from author:
Glad you like it.

I did consider Mark Chao but decided against it as he didn't really die helping or protecting others. As for Principal Flutie that would be just a bit too weird plus he kind of might have some issues with Xander considering the nature of how he was killed during that whole Hyena Boy incident. In the end I settled on Andy as I think he would make a pretty good whitelighter - its also fits into a little plot of mine for later in the fic.

Faith I'm not sure what to do with her. She's gone major dark after all and if she attacks them they might vanquish her though they'd be more likely to simply disable her and use magic to strip the Slayer powers from her and either transfer all of them back to Buffy or force them to move onto the next potential. Of course the fact that they could do that at all would set alarm bells ringing with the Watchers Council.

With regards to Xander's witch power I have decided but you will have to wait and see what exactly it will be.

Ah you've made a slight error there Grams is Penny, the mother of all the Halliwell kids (including Paige and Xander) is Patty. As for getting in contact thats a possibility.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from jbjewel
I'm guessing Andy is the whitelighter. I always thought that they were going to use him as one and then something fell through. I was really glad to see that someone was continuing this.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.

And yes the whitelighter is going to be Andy, I though of a few others but none of them quite fit the role I had in mind.
Review By [jbjewel] • Date [20 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AlecMcDowell
I'm always a fan of whitelighter!Xander fics and him as Paige's twin is awesome so I'm glad to see you picked this one up. It'll be fun to see Xander adjust to his magic in the next few chapters- whitelighter powers are pretty straight forward but there's no telling what his active power might be and how it could be influenced by his angel half. I'm interested to see how long Paige will stick around as well and then what will happen- does Xander have to stay away until time catches up to when Paige came to Sunnydale or can he go to San Francisco and for example save Prue before Paige ever became a Charmed One?
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from GaboonViper
Looks good so far. Good charmed crossovers are hard to come by, and this one has great potential.

Though I hope you're not going try and fix everything like so many lost-family-fics do. Characters should be flawed, and situations should be more complex than they seem at first glance. The Anya situation for example; you made it seem clear-cut. But when a person pretends to to be something he/she is not for as long as she has, a part of that pretense often becomes real. A lot of fanfiction writers forget to look at the other side of the story.
Review By [GaboonViper] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
oh i like this. wonderful update can't wait for the next bit
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DragonBard
Interesting, but when you revealed Anya as being evil, I just lost interest.
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Thing is I can see Anya agreeing to a deal with the Source so she gets to be a demon again. Remember she was desperate enough to get her power centre back and become Anyanka again that she tried to get Willow to do a temporal fold for her of course that didn't work and instead brought the Drusille-esque Vamp-Willow into their reality instead.

The Source kind of made his deal with Anya after that when she briefly left Sunnydale following the attempted ascension of Mayor Wilkins.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Studyofchaos
Nice contnuaton. Yes it is a little rushed. Sometimes you just have to tell the characters "Hey, wait a minute.... my story, your just part of it".
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I just let the chapter flow on its own and it has come out a little rushed. I'll try to slow things down a bit in the next few chapters but not too much.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from brokenangel
Well I'm glad this fic was continued. Been waiting for it to be ready for several years now.

I think the most important thing that should be focused on in this story is family. Xander gains a new family that will love him unconditionally unlike the BTVS family that seems to love him only when it's convenient to them. That was the one aspect of the BTVS show that I didn't like was they always forgot Xander's contributions to the team. With this new development of a family that will be there for HIM no matter the situation will add a retrospect for the other characters as the story progresses. Just my two cents.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm really glad that MarcD let me adopt this as it was too good an idea to just sit around gathering cyber-dust.

Indeed. While magic will be a part of it the focus will be more on family and how the Scoobies have to learn to deal with what Xander really is and the fact that the Source himself has been trying to set him up to turn evil his whole life. I imagine Giles will polish through his glasses when he finds that out.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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