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Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from leonamasha
Review:
Wow. That was just wow. It was poignant and yet still gave me hope there in the end. Definitely looking forward to what happened to the others. Thanks for writing this. It's great so far.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mind Over Matter" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story so far. Though if I had those powers I would have focused on the blood vessels in those people's brains and give them aneurysms. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Runewolf
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Interesting start so far. Not sure who Xander's replacing, but I don't know that world that well.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from banditdoz
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Great start :-) what's happened to buffy? Is she with them? Is she normal now? Can't wait to find out. Thank you :-D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Studyofchaos
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Nice choice of characters. Not as familiar with Hellion as the others but it should be interesting. Please continue.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
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Punctuation is not evil.

If you're going to be all in media res, you might want to have an establishing chapter soon. If you're trying for Scoobies in a completely unknown situation, having them all know what's happened works against you. Be consistent in how you're portraying the situation - is it the Scoobies in Marvel bodies, or Marvel characters gaining Scooby memories? There are indicators both ways.

Since this is the result of a wish, very likely Marvel comics exist in your Buffyverse. Have you considered how Xander's knowledge of them, even foreknowledge, will affect things in your Marvel verse?

That being said, it's not horrible.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from Vickzie
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Cool start to the story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from jormunguard
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Very good start, I like the choices you've made in the characters. I am very curious in seeing how you're going to bring the four together since Willow and Oz now belong to a much older age group than the other two. I do hope you continue this beause I can see a lot of potential.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from lilykep
Review:
Yes! I want more of this! Now please.
Review By [lilykep] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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