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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Starfox
Review:
"Swatting the flies" with a fly swatter that can take out cities, wielded by Dawn... poor Jaffa.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Traveler
Review:
A laugh, a smile and a 12 year old more destructive then my Grand daughters. A well written story, please continue and Thank you for sharing.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Compston
Review:
Kool so far
Review By [Compston] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadowcade
Review:
Woo, so long without this, I almost paniced there. My reviews tend be extreamly basic when I review things which Is why I rarely do it but I am curious. I don't know all that many noble/princess type characters. Just how many beside Princess Peach are capable of pulling frying pans out of no where?
Review By [Shadowcade] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Raider
Review:
I have this big grin on my face right now.
Review By [Raider] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Well done, Xander AND Dawn!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Genuka
Review:
Poor Jaffa. I wonder if they're going to decide that Xander and Dawn are gods?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from GundumM
Review:
Love The new chapter
Review By [GundumM] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from CageFire
Review:
Another nice new chapter. Keep up the good work. :) Finally dawn is blowing up stuff that /should/ actually be blown up. Hehe.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from HMaxMarius
Review:
very nice....

of course I must paraphrase Syndrome here...

"If everything is funny...
... then nothing is."

-hmm
Comments from author:
Very nice paraphrasing :)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from removedauthor
Review:
Grate chapter I look forward to the next one.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Please Oh Please, let Xander answer the Goa'uld, with something like. "This Captain Crais of the the Starship Dawn Patrol, Retreat or be DESTROYED. One Underpowered Volley nearly destroyed your ship. You don't want me to fire a FULL powered shot, do you?"

I can't what for more.

TTFN
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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