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Review of chapter "Gondor Vs. Rhun" from AllenPitt
Wow, you've jumped ahead a tiny little bit. Nice flashback. So... Arnor et al lasted longer because of Buffy? Makes sense.
That Sauron was behind everything is plain now, but I thought most people believed him gone for good until the Ring re-surfaced? Or was that just the Men, ie the elves knew better?
Comments from author:
I'm not entirely sure who knew what, but there's no doubt in my mind that Gondor would know that Sauron was alive by the end of the third age. Sharing a border with him, losing territory etc etc, and I think Gandalf knows, and Buffy for sure. She can feel him, knew that he wasn't dead when she went to Gondor for the first time. I think with Buffy in the story they know a lot sooner that he is alive, especially when he shows up in Greenwood. Thanks for all the comments!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gondor Vs. Rhun" from grd
Wisdom passed down to Faramir. Priceless. Hope Boro learns too.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Loved the heartbreak -- so glad to find chapters I had not yet read!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
I really love this story but I really really wish you would include translations for your elvish What does Caruvan merietya mean? I assume it means something like I will always be there for you or something but I really wish you would let us know. I tried going to my translators but they change things from English to Elvish not the other way around.

Ok so mini rant done. I really love this story and am so glad to see an update. I feel for Buffy finding the bitter taste of immortality when dealing with mortals. I loved the wolves but I am glad they will live to be a good wolf pack. Now I am wondering if a Warg pup can be raised to be good? LOL of course I was wondering that when I saw the white warg in the Hobbit.

I really hope Buffy will be able to save her mom from the Orcs and that she will be there for Legolas's young years so she can be a good older sister to him. (Even if she can only save her life after she is attacked like the twins save their mom and she has to go to Valinor for healing?) hoping hoping. looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [27 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Amazing update! Waiting for more!

Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [22 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from Swordstress
Great chapter! I felt sad for the wolves and Buffy--they would both consider the other family or pack.

Glad Buffy recognizes Glor as a romantic prospect now! What does the Elvish Glor says to her at the end mean?
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from grd
Wow! I was hoping that at least one of the wolves would become Buffy's companion. I wonder how her pack will change the Wolves of the North.
Comments from author:
I wrote another whole chapter about one of the wolves becoming her companion for a while, but it didn't fit as well as I had hoped, so I scrapped it, but I think I'll put it up as an outtake. Thanks for letting me know what you think.
Review By [grd] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from Nightscream
ahhhh and this is the chapter in which it hits home for Buffy, the reason why immortals and mortals don't often mix. I loved the breakdown scene, it was very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S. I'm glad you enjoyed your trip. And welcome home.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from randyzoopurple
i love that your back and i hope buff gets married to glor
Comments from author:
Thanks. A few more things have to happen first, but I will get there eventually.
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wolf Killer" from AllenPitt
It's tough for immortals. But also tough on the mortals. Greatly affected culture of Gondor & others, of course. Must be weird to realize there are beings in the world that are thousands of years old, who've seen it all.
I can understand how Numenor and later others got all bent out of shape over it........and just think how weird it'd be later on (for both) for Buffy to meet distant descendants... It'd be like us meeting William the Conqueror or Julius Caesar.
Moving on: now only about 750 yrs before the Istari show up... and... I wonder if her temporary adoption of those white wolves will have any long-term effect. Not sure it will, as Sauron can corrupt just about anything if he tries hard enough..
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Annuminas" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Gracious me, I've missed a lot! Great chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next! How did Glorfindel feel about her marrying another? Perhaps he should have spoken before she left to fight. I need more, please!!!!

Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Annuminas" from soulNchantress
I love this story.

I don't always have time to review, so I'll make this quick. While I felt this chapter was a little rushed it still had a boatload of substance. Kudos!

I don't know HOW to feel about her marriage. It would seem that after having been married before and losing both husband and children, she would chose an elf on purpose. Mainly because they (hubby and children) are guaranteed to live as long as she. I can understand ties to men, but come on. If Buffy was so uptight about sex in general, would she be so quick to throw about marriage? I guess it's safe to, though, because it's like saying, "I'll live forever if I want to, so what is a couple of decades of marriage to a human?" To me, having her marry a human, even a long lived human, is like a slap in the face. She already knows she is going to outlive them, by far, and it doesn't seem to bother her that she is giving birth to children that she KNOWS will die before she will. From what I understand, her longevity was a surprise when she married her first husband. Now she knows, it doesn't seem likely she would do it again after it hurt her so bad the first time.

Those are just my thoughts. I want to say again that I am loving your story. I think you are doing a great job of writing it. I don't notice mistakes like some stories. There are those that write so many mistakes I can't read them. You, however, are doing awesomely. So, please, don't take my opinions as an attack of your story, it is not intended that way. I just wanted to let you know what was on my mind.

Great job. I'll be watching my email for an update notice.
Comments from author:
Thank you SoulNchangress for taking the time to explain what you think. It's a difficult situation she finds herself in. I think at this point, Buffy still considers herself more human than not, and I know I would rather be with someone I love even for a little while, than be alone for what might be thousands of years. I think most of us go through some relationships that end badly, either in death or separation, but that doesn't mean, at least in my case and in Buffy's as well that she wouldn't seek another partner, or she'd have given up after Angel, or Spike after he supposedly died the first time. Even beings like elves and vampires die, or move west, and I don't think that's a good enough reason not to form attachments. Also, a lifetime relationship, or marriage to an elf might be a bit scary for Buffy. At that point in the story, she was just beginning to understand what it would mean to be alive for a couple hundred years. Despite that, you make a very good point, and Buffy will not, or I don't think she will be marrying any more humans. I agree with you, but I think the connection to Arnor was important, and will be when Aragorn comes along. Thank you for letting me know what you think. Good review help me along.
Review By [soulNchantress] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Annuminas" from JeanClaudeslover
I am enjoying this story. Especially since it's not the typical setting of the lord of rings. I like how you are making her fit in and growing.

I do hope she chooses Glorifindel though since he seems perfect for her.
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Annuminas" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
such a bittersweet chapter. I loved it though. I am very much looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Be or Not to Be" from Keshkreature
Very cool! It's good to see Buffy out in the world, and still being Buffy.
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Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [25 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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