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Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from lateVMlover
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This was an incredible story! I'm so glad I found it. It was so well-written, so entertaining, and just plain good. You blended the two worlds so seamlessly that now in my head Jack will forever be Xander's dad. I also like that even though you centered it around Jack and Xander we still got pictures of the people in their life as well. So many great lines, great moments. I'm really glad I found your most excellent story!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from DragonBard
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Dawn was 15 in Season 5, so should be 17-18 about now.
Comments from author:
I don't understand your comment.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from DieselDriver
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Great story. Would love to see a sequel.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ten Years Taken Off of Life" from DieselDriver
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I don't see how anyone could or would think this chapter ambiguous. It clearly advances the story and is a good read. Well put together and ending with a very good question as to what is going to happen next. This is as good as ANY commercial fiction I've read and I've been reading science fiction books for at least the last 55 years. It's gotten harder and harder to find good stuff to read, mostly I think, because I've read so much that I can't abide something that isn't good. Too much stuff to compare it to in the back of my head. If I had to name 3 authors in the commercial world that are my favorites the first two would be Heinlein and Niven. The next would be hard. In the fan fiction I'd say Diane Castle is my favorite and number 2 would be very hard. This is right up there on par with her work, so here's a hearty "GOOD JOB!".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six Hours Till Dinner" from DieselDriver
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Having just finished Thanksgiving day a short time ago here, the scenes in this chapter made me a bit teary eyed again. Well done! I miss the big thanksgiving dinners we used to have when I was a kid and we all gathered at our grandmother's house for the feast. They are all gone now and the rest scattered to the 4 winds it seems so this is a sad day for me. This is just as good reading it again as it was the first time.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from DieselDriver
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I'm back. Reading it again. Obviously I like it, and I don't see anything wrong that I didn't see the first two times. Worth reading at least a third time.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from LaFlooze
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Engaging, well thought out, great use of characters from both universes, and just the right amount of angst. Thanks for writing!
Review By [LaFlooze] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from leb
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this was a great story
Review By [leb] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from DieselDriver
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Ummm... "‘farthead’" Not "Fartbreath?"
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eleventh Hour Tango" from DieselDriver
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Agents Gladi and Oulus? Naming the two agents after one flower would be just the sort of stupid thing that would have me running away like an Olympic sprinter.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten Years Taken Off of Life" from DieselDriver
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Maybe you don't know how you feel about this chapter (your note at chapter end) but I know how I feel about it. I LIKE it. It gives a lot of incite into the various characters thoughts and motives. Good stuff, vital to understanding motivations.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from DieselDriver
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This will be my second time through this story. Loved it the first time, very impressed with the way you portrayed some VERY difficult emotions. I'm sure I'll read it several more times in the future.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sixteen Happier Endings" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Slow to develop but well worth the read.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eight Men in Black" from breve
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it's 2am. thank god it's sunday today so i don't have to worry about sleeping in.
this story is amazing. and it's getting to the really, really, really good part.
Review By [breve] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from breve
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GOOD!
I'm excited that I found this, and CAN'T WAIT to continue reading.
Just taking a mini break to tell you what a great start it is :)
Review By [breve] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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