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Review of chapter "First Meeting" from ueshiba
Review:
Fantastic, keep writing. I enjoyed your take on the Jack/Xander interaction, very well done. I really hope you continue this soon. Peace.
Review By [ueshiba] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Beneficia
Review:
good
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Nice. I like it. I have a feeling that Dawn went behind the computer or called Willow to find out about Jack. I'm wondering how much she would find out.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Auden
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Excellent start. You put alot of emotion into the conversation and realistically portrayed both Jack and Xander's emotional issues. I'd like to see how this evolves. Thanks for the entertainment.
Review By [Auden] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from newvitae
Review:
This is the BEST "Xander has a different parent" of the SG1 type i've ever seen! right up there with Heir of Voldemort ! a definate read!
Review By [newvitae] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from gglkat
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I've been enjoying reading all the stories in Xander's Real Family challenge. I hope you write more. Like some of the other reviewers I'd like to see Xander and Jack's reactions to the others secret life. Hope to see another chapter soon!!
Review By [gglkat] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from griffindorgirl
Review:
Interesting story idea. looking forward to seeing how you take it.
Review By [griffindorgirl] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Sio
Review:
Cool I can't wait to see what happens!!!! Please please don't make Xander the Zeppo.....update soon!
Review By [Sio] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
A good beginning. I like your characterisations of Jack and Xander. A proper level of suspicion all around. Xander doesn't just buy that Jack's his dad, and Jack realises that there is something up with Xander.

One minor continuity nit: Xander's mother's name was Jessica. We learned it in Hell's Bells when Xander's Dad was toasting her. (Xander's Dad's name was Tony.)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good! I liked it a lot. Good characterization and dialog, nice plot so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from StrangerInParadise
Review:
The first thing I thought when I started reading this was, 'This is going to be fun!'
and I was right. This was a really great first chapter. You've set up the story very
well here and it looks like you've got a lot of great directions you could take
this story in. I'm looking forward to Xander finding out what Jack actually does
and Jack finding what magic *and* the Initiative. Maybe Xander will be asked to
work with Jack, that'd be cool.

I hope you're able to post more soon but no pressure really. I can be very paitent.
Keep up the Great writing!

~Alaena
Review By [StrangerInParadise] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from slbwhitewolf
Review:
Really good. Great characterisations, I look forward to seeing how Giles will react (he has been a father figure in a way) and also how they each react if they find out each others secrets. Hope you can get the next chapter up soon!
Review By [slbwhitewolf] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Lemming
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Very Good, it will be interesting to see how the meeting between Jack and the rest of the scoobies, and I can just imagine the the look on Jacks face when he finds out about vampires!
Review By [Lemming] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from JUSTME
Review:
Fantastic! Please post more! I love this idea and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Review By [JUSTME] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from malaskor
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Very interesting beginning.
I'm looking forward to see how it goes on. How and if they learn their respective secrets should be interesting scenes. The future of this story has a lot of potential - like the NID learns of Xander and/or the "Things that go bump in the night"...

Keep it up and thanks for sharing
Review By [malaskor] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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