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Review of chapter "the Matrimony" from JennMarie
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"Like, omigod, you finished another story!" I had to go back and reread Life of Brian in honor of the completion of Chasing Amy... You are a goddess!! What a lovely thing to come home to after evil math tests... As always, I snickered, snorted, sniffled, and generally made odd noises - in other words, I loved it!
Review By [JennMarie] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Matrimony" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Lovely end!! And hooray for getting one less WIP - I understand how that can be. These two are certainly in for living wickedly ever after - just as they deserve! ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Meaning" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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*cackles* This installment is every bit as nutters and choatic and delightfully insane as the rest. What a ride! ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the Matrimony" from Starshine
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Gods, I LOVE this story and it's prequel. Actually I pretty much love all your stories.. You wouldn't be thinking about writing a sequel to "I have never felt your fear" would you?? It's my favorite and I would worship you for eternity if you did.. But NO pressure!! Anyway, I'm off to read IHNFYF for 15th (or is it the the 16th??) time.
Lots of glomps from Starshine
Review By [Starshine] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Matrimony" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
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Excellent ending to a well-written series! Bravo! Bravissimo!

Especially liked the "reaction" at the end of "the Meaning." :)

Thanks so much,

Tracey
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Meaning" from Kenskirae
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I really like this characterization of Draco. Amy and Marcus' relattionship is also very well written and quite hot. I also like Percy's friendship with Marcus. Not many people use Percy in a story and give him a good character.
Review By [Kenskirae] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the Meaning" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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"I think it's sweet." Dawn said.
Draco gagged and looked affronted. "Slytherins are NOT cute."
"I think you're cute." She wriggled her eyebrows at him.

Just the general flow there, along with the repeated "cute"s later make me think Dawn should have called them cute to begin with? Otherwise, it rather seems like Draco is pulling his response out of his ass (wouldn't it be "Slytherins are NOT sweet."?) because "cute" doesn't appear in the chapter until he says it.

There also seems to be a case of Talking Head Syndrome in the Draco/Amy conversation, and the two characters are similar enough in age and tone that it's not immediately evident (without counting to yourself) who's talking in some spots.

Nothing unforgivable though, and I look forward to seeing where this story goes in the future. :)
Comments from author:
It had to be cute. That seemed like the right word there. I know you don't feel so, but it felt so for me. And of course it's not mentioned before then because it wasn't cute until then. If that even makes any sense at all. It's like "Blech! Suddenly they're cute! Gross!"

I am VERY guilty of the talking head thing. You will notice that in many of my fics. Very guilty. It's one of my faults. I try to remember not to do it, but... Sometimes it needs to just be the dialogue. Someirmes even I have to go back and count to see who's talking. That's usually when I go in there and add some indentifiers, but soemtimes not. It doesn't bother me that much, I guess.

Well, I am glad there's still even moderate interest here. Some of these fics I have let go so long I wondered if people were even still interested in reading.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from feekh
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One word: Wicked. Okay four: That was totally wicked!
Love the idea and the follow through. Especially the lets live wickedly ever after and Amy's toughts of scaring the bejeesus out of everybody by calling herself Madison-Malfoy-Flint.
Can't wait for the epilogue, cause surely that's the only thing missing.
Review By [feekh] • Date [13 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from Arjai
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I like this, A LOT! Amy was a nasty little witch and Marcus was a violent Git. They are perfect for one another. And I think Percy can be loosened up by Katie so another good pairing there. Good tale.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from (Past Donor)Deanie
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Absolutely wonderful!
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I just finished reading your wonderful story and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from ryan
Review:
More please. Great Echo please write more soon.
Review By [ryan] • Date [3 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from Nightscream
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I actually found this fic by accident via another persons favorites list. At first i thought ok i'll just pass this one by its not what i'm really into...but my eye kept wandering back to it so i said what the hell and read it. And boy am i glad i did it is a wonderfully done piece of work. I have to ask though is it completed? it seems that there might be more left to write...such as the wedding. Excellent work please keep it up.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [10 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from banner
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This story is wonderful. I love the way you've turned two minor characters into real people who are fun and interesting.
Review By [banner] • Date [20 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "the Misadventure" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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I LOVE this fic. Amy/Marcus is wonderfully wicked. Neither character had much exposure in their perspective verses, but I think you have filled them out veru well. I hope there will be a bit more?
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [5 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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