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Review of chapter "Tea and Sympathy" from Harry
Review:
Easy Red. Be very careful with Angel. Something seems off with him, and I would recommend caution because of that.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changing the Rules" from purrfus
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Catching up on my reading and discovered I had missed several chapters.

This just works so well for Willow. Watching her deviate from the straight and narrow in directions other than canon, but still believable, is so much fun.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changing the Rules" from Jonathansicari
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Well, apparantly my last review was over a year ago. Time flies. Like the new chapter.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changing the Rules" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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“Maybe Angel can help me learn?” Willow considered the idea, before deciding that it was worth a try.

This sounds like it is heading in a very promising direction! :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dark Coffee" from Harry
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Well Angelus, you have a friend. A mortal female friend. Question is, how long do you drag things out before you turn her? I'd be careful if you do. I've SEEN what Vamp Willow can do, and you would NOT like what the result would be!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Drinking Delusion" from Keshkreature
Review:
I like seeing Willow getting more familiar with Angelus and family. It's leaving me with warm fuzzies :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drinking Delusion" from slmncpm
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oh thank you for updating! i was hoping you hadn't dropped off this story. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Darker Roast" from FrolickingNomad
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Chilling! And good, in a scary way. You do a good Drusilla-voice -- eerie and childlike but not cloying.

It had never made sense to me that, whenever Angelus got loose, he almost immediately started being blatant with the evilness. That's just stupid, and he's not otherwise stupid. Manipulating from behind the scenes, while still pretending to be Angel -- that sounds a lot more like what I always thought he would do. Glad someone else thought so too.
Review By [FrolickingNomad] • Date [16 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Darker Roast" from LeaFairy
Review:
Oh, this has been an utterly fantastic sequel so far! I LOVE how you're writing Angelus - he's definitely evil, but not SuperCartoonVillianEvil, and he has a lot more depth and is much smarter/cunning than he was in the show. Loving it :) I also again love your Willow and how you have her slowly changing because of her friendship with "Angel" and now Drusilla as well. It's very subtle with her only vaguely noticing it herself. It's very well done!

And speaking of Drusilla, I adore how you write her! You really have fleshed out her character well and I enjoyed all her scenes with Willow. Interesting idea too having her teach Willow magic. I liked Spike in the last chapters as well - is there a chance of more of him and Spike/Willow interaction in the future?

I'm also curious about Willow's reaction to eventually finding her mom's body? Love Angelus torturing/killing Sheila because of her treatment of "His" Willow. Possessive much? =) And I'm even more curious if/when Willow will finally admit to herself that "Angel" really isn't Angel anymore? Hmm... Also, will the Scoobies.. mostly Buffy, ever find out that Angel lost his soul?

Anyway, thanks bunches for the story, I really have enjoyed it and I definitely look forward to seeing what happens next with Willow and her vampire!!
Comments from author:
Thank you : )

While Angelus is not supposed to be a nice guy, I find it unlikely that he'd have made it as long as he did if he'd always been as over-the-top as he was depicted on BtVS. Since he was supposed to be smart and seductive, I thought it reasonable to have him seduce Willow to his side - not quite a literal seduction as in sex (though that isn't entirely ruled out) but a careful luring of ehr away from the Slayer and over to HIS side.

I really enjoy writing Drusilla! I enjoy her and consider having her just be the crazy madwoman or Spike's mean ex to be a waste of her potential. Spike will definitely be around, though he's tough to predict on the particulars.

Still working on that, and yes, Angelus is a possessive bastard.

Willow is starting to suspect that things aren't quite right, though she isn't going to want to admit that, let alone just how 'not right' things have become. It'll take longer for the Scoobies and Buffy to discover.

You're very welcome, I'm delighted that you're enjoying the story so much.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Darker Roast" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I LOVED this chapter. Your Dru is awesome. Also like Angelus' thoughts on what exactly Willow meant to him :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Darker Roast" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Wonderful as always.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Park" from Elissiaro
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Ooh I love this! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I love how you write Drusilla.

Bye. :)
Review By [Elissiaro] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Park" from deathgeonous
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We all have ways of keeping loved ones safe. Angelus's is just, more dirict and vicious then most, eh? Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Park" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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I love this! I love that Spike and Dru adore 'little tree' and that Willow keeps telling herself that Angel is just lying to them about changing her in order to keep her safe...heehee! This is great! I adore it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Brewing Darkness" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Most disturbing was the little part of her that hoped to see Buffy stake Sheila Rosenberg. To watch her mother’s body crumble to ashes. To see her die.

--- powerful.

yiiiiiiiiiiikes!
Comments from author:
I am attempting to show that Willow's friendship with 'Angel' and her growing friendship with Drusilla is having an affect on her - one that is NOT harmless.

And also, when someone hurts you, it is perfectly normal to have angry, possibly even violent thoughts cross your mind - though most people do not act on them, or dwell for long periods on those violent ideas. Willow must confront the idea that she isn't a perfectly sweet, harmless girl.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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