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Review of chapter "In the Park" from Jonathansicari
Review:
OK, its two weeks late but

Happy Birthday to me, Happy birthday to me, Happy Birthday dear meee...

Happy Birthday to me.

Thanks Lucinda (I know you didn't know, I'm claiming it as a birthday present anyway).
Comments from author:
Well a happy belated birthday to you.

I have a few other fic-bits that got sent to a beta-reader (hopefully I don't scare this one away!) that I know you've been following... those will be posted when he sends them back to me. Among them is the final part of Counts of Blood, and Messed Up Family #30.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Park" from Sandi
Review:
Okay. Besides being scared shitless it's the best offer she's had in a while. Yeap. Gotta talk to .... Angel?
Review By [Sandi] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dark Visions" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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The mirror was still cross with her and refused to let her see herself within its silvery pane—love this. You do an EXCELLENT Drusilla!

Drusilla, if you and Buffy get into a fight, it might ruin your pretty dress.”--hahahaha

Ick torture… Poor Mrs. R…

I like how Dru calls her little tree. And yay for magic lessons!

This is really an excellent story and I cannot WAIT to read more! :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coffee and Dismay" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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and why oh why hadn’t Giles or Buffy thought to teach her even a little bit? --- i second that!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Images in the Steam" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Evil Angelus is deliciously wicked and I love how you write him. This is some bad ass evil stuff, right here.
Comments from author:
Well, if he's supposed to be an evil vampire, he has to do some bad things occasionally. Even better if thoe things both entertain and serve a longer-term purpose - he's supposed to be smart as well as evil.

A bit tricky to write too much of him too close together though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dark Moments" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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An image formed of herself and Dru, sprawled on a large bed with a ruffled comforter, dressed in fuzzy flannel pajamas, painting each other’s fingernails as her blinded and bound dolls watched from the dresser
---awesome image ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tea and Sympathy" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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I LOVED the Dru interaction and how she said Willow's words spilled like a waterfall! And I ADORE this version of Angelus! Yay for Evil Angel and Good Willow friendship!!

This story is sooooooooo goooooooooood!!!!!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dark Visions" from Sandi
Review:
And of course the fact that the magic is tainted by the hellmouth is just a bonus in Drucilla's mind. I love this story.
Comments from author:
Of course. If the very area is encouraging Willow to come around to the family's way of thinking, why ignore that resource? Especially if it will get her a little sister AND make her Angel-daddy pleased with her.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coffee and Dismay" from slmncpm
Review:
i just found this, went back and read the first story, i really like this! it amuses me that dru and angelus are courting willow. i hope you write fast on this, i see you started long ago. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [13 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coffee and Dismay" from Jonathansicari
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I haven't reviewed several of your last updates, I'm always glad to see your work so take this to extend to the Joyce/Emma story and your recent Muppet Contracts update as well.

Thanks.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [13 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coffee and Flaws" from HeatherDee
Review:
I love the way you show her inner thoughts here. She's much more convincing as a human being than she's usually written.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Willow should feel like a human being : ) After all, isn't that what she is?
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coffee and Flaws" from liability
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Just read all the way through these 2 stories and they are really good.

Thank you for writing them I look forward to more
Review By [liability] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Images in the Steam" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Hoo boy...

Willow hanging out with Drusilla and ANGELUS on a regular basis without even knowing Angelus isn't Angel?

The best part of it is that it's actually written in a manner that helps that situation make sense; your take on Angelus definitely demonstrates the scheming manipulation that made him such a ruthless vampire back in the day, while Drusilla's insanity is recognised without being overplayed.

Keep up the good work; I have a feeling that this is going to turn out to be VERY interesting as it progresses...

Just one question; is Angelus planning on turning Willow EVENTUALLY, or is he just going to leave her human (It's fairly obvious that he's going to gradually bring her over to his side either way; I'm just wondering how he's planning on ending it)?
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Angel(us) was supposed to be more than a pretty face, he was supposed to be smart, ruthless, and full of big, nasty plans. And I don't like trying to have Dru as ravingly bonkers all of the time - there's a limit to what the rest of them would put up with.


Angelus would assure you that he has a plan, and that nobody else needs to know all the details just yet. I will point out that the Hellmouth has an established history of warping if not destroying plans.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Images in the Steam" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Thank you.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harsh Words" from MistressRed
Review:
*Squeels* Thank you for the update. I loved it. I wish you could update more, but seeing as you probably have a life outside of fanficton I'll just have to hope you're able to soon. Can't wait!
Comments from author:
You're very welcome. Just remember - a handsome face and the ability to be charming do not mean someone is a nice person. Evidence? Angelus.

I've been doing a bit of an update-flurry while on break between classes - the next batch starts Jan 4th, but it will be a little lighter than it was before break, so I might get to update a bit more often than I did though the fall. I can hope, at least : ) Though the other time-demands are not changing much in the next five months...
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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