Hey personally I really dislike Kennedy and I have to say that you portrayed her in a mostly positive light.

Which is a very hard thing to do, being able to set aside your personal feelings for a character and write a fic as it should be.

You should be proud.

Great :-)

I love this story, its really clever as a concept and perfectly executed.

I also like the way that you are restoring the memories gradually, rather than suddenly as the result of a single spell or something (which would be good too, but wouldn't give quite the emotional depth, probably).

I also like the way that Lily and Willow and Xander and James come together so neatly, at least it seems that way as I read it, I imagine it was probably quite hard to do.

I look forward to the next part very much

Yay new update!
I liked the way you had Kennedy brake it off with Willow. It's always hard to have make a character you dislike behave realistically, but you manage it well. As much as I was looking forward to having someone flay Dumbledore, I agree that it wouldn't make sense in the context of the story. Besides Dumbledore losing the respect of his friends would probably hurt him a lot more. Still I hope someone decks him for the way he messed with everyone's lives, he may have had the best intensions but still...Violence may solve nothing but it is still very entertaining.

Looking forward to more, this story is as addictive as 3D pong.
The AngryMonkey

Great fic so far. But I hope you're not too easy on Dumbly when he gets his. He raped two people in the worse possible way, and stole their child. If I was Willow or Xander, I'd string him up like a pinata by tender bits, and beat him to death with baseball bats. Until I could find a better way to deal with him. :)

And you actually made me feel sorry for Kennedy, not easy with her not real likeable character.

Rob

glad to see another chapter up, it`s an adictive story.
keep it up.

Sappy, but in a good way.

Did you already post this?

I always thought James was more powerful.
I mean will Xander/James have any of the power Willow
does? I'm still waiting to for Dumbledore and
those other two gits to get what's coming to
them. Willow they change their appearances back.
Sirius went to Azkaban! Because of them too!
Xander needs some powers and Willow needs to loose
some.

Kennedy should goto hell! They're married you scumy
slutty slayer! Could Xander accidently blast her through
like a gazillion walls... by accident. *eg*

More soon!

oh my goddess. i can't even speak. this fic is soo absolutely breathtaking. i must have more!!!!! u must continue this!! i do have to say it does get confusing separating the "past" from the "now" but i guess it intesifies Willow and Xander's feeling and thoughts, right. this is true amazing so far, so please continue. Gosh this fic has me blown away. Super Awesometastic Job!!

Very good. love the build up. cannt wait for the next one

I am loving this story so much...even if it is a bit angsty. I keep wanting to be like...go here, and talk to these people, and yeah...because I am excited for what happens next, but I don't want to rush it either, because Xander and Willow are going to be in for big changes, and their entire world is going to implode...

I am also worried about what eve is going to do...because we can't forget about her and the senior partners...

I think this was Tara. I doubt she was ascended, so I would go for Guardian Angel. The other possibility was whitelighter.

This is pretty good so far. I think the dream sequences are the best part; they're very vivid.

My guess on Tara? She is Tara - just not Tara Maclay.

I liked the chapter, especialy Eve's response. I still think giving him back his eye was cheap, but I figure you probably did it for a good reason. Looking forward to see more.

Interesting start, I can see a lot of havoc and major destruction happening in the future. I can see Moody being due for some serious pain in the future. It'll be interesting to see the what happens when Remus finds out what really happened to James and Lily. I'll be looking forward to more of this story

More!

It's one of the most original crossover ideas I've seen.