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Review of chapter "Crush" from Pyrrhus
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Hehehehehe. That was sooo cool! it was funny and kind of sweet with the Sirius/Dawn. If you update, I'll review again, I promise. And keep up the Sirius and Dawn cause Padfoot equals even better reviews! :D
Review By [Pyrrhus] • Date [19 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sick Cycle Carousel" from sonofgloin
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This chapter had everything. Sadness, laughter and a hint of the raunchy goodness, or was I the only one to get it?

Poor angel dying and all and sirius for not being able to have a proper brother. Poor Dawn for not being able to get back home and all the other sad stuff too.

Great with the laughs, like I said the chocolate cack scene was the best, but I am just a dirty muggle.

OH great too with all the new characters coming into the fic!! The quick spot of Frank and all the Blacks'... Looking forward to the next chapters as always but more to see how everyone is going to get on together.

Wish I could write fic like you Anoron

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [16 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Cycle Carousel" from Pyrrhus
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:D. Great fic. Love the embarrassment in the lingerie shop and love Padfoot. Please review asap.
Review By [Pyrrhus] • Date [15 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sick Cycle Carousel" from SecondSilk
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Loved it. You had me going with the mid chapter break. I really like Dawn's interpretation of events, and that she's there but nothing looks different yet and it's not easy. Will it actually be three months to the next update? because I could wait, if I had to, but I am looking forward to what's happening next.
There is the occasional wrong name for who's speaking, I think, which leads to mild confusion.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [15 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Cycle Carousel" from Chickalupe
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This is so great so far! Your Dawn is much more consistant with how we know her from season 5 than many stories which seem to feature her as the "mini-Buffy". The interaction and bonding between Dawn and the Maruaders is wonderful, and the emotion so genuine! I loved the moment between Regulus and Sirius; it really made me feel Sirius' loss of a brother due to his conflicting beliefs with his family. This really struck a chord with me. And yes, I loved Snivellus! Just how I imagined a young Snape. And the Dawn/Sirius/Chocolate Cake wrestling match! Super Duper Spiffy With A Cherry On Top! Keep up the good work. More soon please!!!
~Amber
Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [14 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Cycle Carousel" from VillageOrchid
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Liked this a lot. So if there's an alter Spike the question, of course, is does he already have a soul, or will he be Eeeevil with a capital "E". I think it is possible for him to be similar ot the Spike we know, cause he does fall in love so easily. Without Dru, he may have had to try to change himself for each "girl" several times, leading to some "soul-searching." I forget, has Dawn found out about the "year change" yet? Giles, if he lives in this universe might already be in his late 20s, while Wynham-Pryce could be Hogwarts age.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Business" from VillageOrchid
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The storytelling continues to be a joy to follow. Like with the young Sherlock Holmes movie, your story is so AU, that you hope for changes (for the better or for happiness) now that Dawn is there. Perhaps she'll even have an effect on Peter?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Business" from Jillian
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God, I love this story. It's fantastic, creative and I love all the characters. I love the way they react to each other. I love that they gave Dawn the name Kitten. Too funny. I love your writting, it's fantastic. And I love the little teaser with Malfoy. I can't wait to see what happens with that. And what Dumbledore wants to talk to her about. I hope Dawn helps James out with the Lily situation. Fantastic job. I love this story, I love the characters, and I love your writting. I can't wait for the next chapter and I'm hanging on the edge of my seat to see what happens next.
Review By [Jillian] • Date [8 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Business" from EllandrahSylver
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Most Excellent! Dawn's talents in magic making a nice showing, a few nice stings to James' slightly overinflated ego, and the beginning of a solid adjustment. And I really look forward to seeing how Dawn handles Mr. Lucius Malfoy's attitude and obvious disdain. Being a Summers, I imagine she'll figure him out, then give him what for. But then again, it's not my story. Please continue this fabulous fic so I can see what you do with our friends here.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [8 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Business" from alunderman
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This is a wonderfull story, I was excited to read the latest chapter. I also look forward to more in the future, good job. :-)
Review By [alunderman] • Date [8 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Business" from SecondSilk
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Aha, woah with the Slytherin creepiness. I've decided that England in the early eighties probably wouldn't seem to wierd to a girl from Southern California. (Sorry I have think about these things.) Great chapter, I'm glad things are moving along. I really like the parallels between James's and Harry's lives.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [7 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Business" from sonofgloin
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Really great!!!

And GGGRRR!!! to that stupid slytherin. I hope he gets some of his own back.

Was a good chapter Anoron. I was happy to see that Dawn is getting into all her studies and the practicality of the wizarding world while still continuing with the flow of the story. James is funny as hell, poor guy. You write the interactions betweem him and lilly wonderfully.

Hope Dumbledor has good news for her

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [7 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silence" from Jillian
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Once again, I love this story. Fantastic job. I love the Sirius and Dawn interaction. Too cute. Espeacially the part where she pet him. Hysterical. I loved the bit about the underwear too. Too funny. I love these characters. Wonderful job. I love this plot, completely original. I can NOT wait untill Dawn meets Malfoy or Snape. Should be very very interesting. Once again, I love this story and I love your writting. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you update soon. Please please please don't leave me waiting too long.
Review By [Jillian] • Date [29 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silence" from EllandrahSylver
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Well, this is shaping up beautifully. The dynamics are fantastic, and from what little Jo Rowling has shown us of the young Marauders, you are keeping them in excellent character. The friendly rivalry between James and Sirius, and the teasing - both amongst the boys, and toward Dawn - is very believable. I am most definitely looking forward to seeing where this lovely story goes.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [29 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silence" from sonofgloin
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Really GREAT update!!!

Awsome development of Dawn's character and the interactions that she is having with the foursome. Really good to see that her barriers are breaking down even more so. You got through all the necesities without letting the story be bogged down and who didn't laugh at clueless little Peter :)

Wonder what Sirius was doing with that hug and all? Anyone would think he liked her :)

Hopefully more soon Anoron... Good job

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [29 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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