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Review of chapter "Silence" from tals
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beautiful chapter. your writing style is flowing and easy to follow, your dialogue is witty and stays true to your characthers. just beautiful. i am truly looking forward to more of this story.
Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [28 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silence" from VillageOrchid
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Very interesting chapter. Yeah, I guess Dawn did the best she could with having her new friends run from the vampire attack. Well, be it the hellmouth or because it is another dimension even "not as bad" vampires are probably dangerous, and they might have escaped a massacre. On the time/year difference? is there one in this version of HP? If so, when will Dawn notice?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silence" from SecondSilk
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Great chapter. Has Dawn worked out that it's at least 20 years before the time she left? You've managed to get interactions which show the various characters of the friends, and a strong range of emotions. I look forward to the next installment.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [27 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silence" from EvilAuthor
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Okay, since no comment was made about Dawn noticing outdated clothing on muggles, I'm going to assume that the Marauders are NOT living in the 1970s and that Dawn has NOT traveled through time.
Review By [EvilAuthor] • Date [27 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Undertow" from sonofgloin
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This chapter is just as great as the first.

The character interrelations are marvelouse, and all aspects of the characters are well captured. I especially like Dumbledor's comments about the password and James' lame attempts to get Lilly to go out with him.

Just one chapter in your development of Dawn has grown significantly and the relationships that she will have are clearly established. Is this sounding like a critique on an essay or what?

Great job Anoron, will be looking out for your next update

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [22 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Undertow" from Jillian
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Excellent story. So creative. I love the idea and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that there's flirtation between Dawn and Sirius and the trip should be interesting. I just love this story and I love the characters. I'm glad that you brought Lily in. Wonderful writting, laugh out loud hysterical. Again, amazing job and I love this story, I hope you update it soon!
Review By [Jillian] • Date [22 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Undertow" from VillageOrchid
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I liked this a lot. I'm still looking forward to see if you will AU the Potter-verse, if they are in another dimension all-together as well as another time. Issues remaining are Lucius, Severus, and Giles (should you decide to give him another universe anlog). I don't know if you care for any of the Slytherins or Giles, but I'm sure we will find out soon enough. Thanks for writing and posting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Undertow" from SecondSilk
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Another great chapter. I like your characterisation of the Marauders and Lily and Dawn. Diagon Alley sounds like it will be fun. I can see them as all the same age, it's working really well. Don't hurry it, but please keep writing.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [22 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Undertow" from Queensarrow
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Very very nice! This may be one of the kinds of stories that I sit on the edge of my seat waiting for an update. Which I hope is soon.
Review By [Queensarrow] • Date [22 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Brave New World" from SecondSilk
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I like it so far. Great take on the premisses, portal and Hogwarts. I look forward to seeing Dawn and the Marauders interact.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Brave New World" from sonofgloin
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Awsome!!!

I have been waiting for ages since IF2 finished to get some more fic out of you, and I am so excited with what you have done. All the characters are written well and from this first chapter you can see the inclings of a MAD plot!!!

Just reading it makes me want to get back to finishing mine :) Love the title too!!!

I think it is great that we see and will see more of Dawn in a different lite, more reserved, rather then a little Buffy. I think it is essentially Dawn being born again in the HP world and developing as a child would, learning all the ways of this universe. i.e. The early difference in Dawn's character is warrented

Once again, great start and I will be waiting with baited breath for the next update

§- sonofgloin
Review By [sonofgloin] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Brave New World" from EllandrahSylver
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Very nice. Strong beginning for what looks like it could become a wonderful story. Not too light, but not dark either. You've got a good balance here of serious plot and humor. You've set a solid foundation and it's beautifully written. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Brave New World" from VillageOrchid
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Kind of a sweet start. Not enough forshadowing to guess where you want the story to go, or in what leading genre. However, some nice storytelling.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Brave New World" from tals
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uhh... great beginning. very original feel to it. despite the many btvs/hp crossovers out there. good job on the dialogue especially sirius comes into character nicely. nice seeing a story that actually shows peter as a friend (being teased and all) despite how he turns out.
also nice detail having sirius being tired from carrying dawn. realistic, instead of superhero.
like the story, you have a good flow, and i enjoyed reading it. i'll keep my eye on this despite irregular updating. it's worth it, i think.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [18 Apr 04] • Not Rated
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