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Review of chapter "Awake" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting that you go back to Willow or other Buffy-verse characters at all, and focusing on Kit's actions after Xander leaves the room. Exercises in description or future important elemetns to the story. Looking forward to finding out. So I'm guessing Xander instead of Paige in terms of the white-lighter witch mix? Care to confirm in author's notes?
Comments from author:
Yes, and no. Partially an excercise in description, partly future element. Yes, Xander instead of Paige, but different.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Goodbyes" from Caliadragon
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Wow! This is such a great start to this fic. I can not wait to see what happens next. Thanks and more soon I hope.


Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Goodbyes" from slbwhitewolf
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I'm very intrigued by this so far. When I saw there were three chapters I was expecting it to be a bit longer, but it's very good so I wasn't disappointed. Look forward to seeing more.
Sarah.
Review By [slbwhitewolf] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Author's Notes" from tohonomike2
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I like this. Please continue. So, Xander is half-whitelighter and only doing the job? Was he in Sunnydale since kindergarten? or is his life au? I'm thinking of the 'yellow crayon' on the Bluff. How about 'slashy' but not slash...like Xander goes out with a nice girl, but her brother keeps trying to pick him up/flirt with him. The Xander good-naturedly ducking the passes might be a light to counter the dark he seems to be ired in emotionally. And a nice girl since he seems to like girls but hasn't been lucky in love and the change would be a very new experience. However it works out, I look forward to more...
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying it. As for the slash, I'm not quite sure I'm going to pair Xander up with anyone. Mainly going to be concentrating on the storyline and Xander, if he ends up in a relationship it won't be central to the plot.
Review By [tohonomike2] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silent Goodbyes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay you seem to have figured out that italics... however you still have some 'splaining to do in how he was in first grade (at least) with Willow and fosted and mis-handed by the Harris family.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the help with the italics, I'd forgotten where the "/" went. Actually, that was the easy part, what with Paige(the youngest sister) being adopted in the original storyline. I just adapted it to fit Xander.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home At Last" from VillageOrchid
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that's before and after in HTML coding. Look it up start code and end code.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home At Last" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting. So far it seems like Xander didn't just talk Willow down, but absorbed some of her darkness and power, that plus his other life experiences changing his aura and destiney.
Italics must be hard coded with chevrons "" after without the quote marks.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Notes" from VillageOrchid
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This is an interesting concept. I do read some slash... it all depends upon the writing and erm... the visualizations.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Silent Goodbyes" from Wynde
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Interesting idea, Xander being the Charmed One's younger brother. Good start so far. I'm very interested in seeing where you take this.
Review By [Wynde] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Author's Notes" from Miceden
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Like the look of it but weres the story
Review By [Miceden] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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