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Review of chapter "Exposed" from SecondSilk
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I wasn't sure there could be more to this, but you did so very well with Grissom. Adding a little bit of Nick was good. I can see him frozen there... thinking...
Comments from author:
There wasn't supposed to be anymore of it... I wasn't sure if this fit the mood of the first two drabbles, but it just demanded to be written.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Keeping the Secret" from SecondSilk
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Beautiful. It's a brilliant idea. It would be interesting to see where it could go, if he might run into her again. But even just like that, it stands up so well.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Keeping the Secret" from Cutiepie
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Ouch. That just makes my heart hurt. They've both lost so much, and have no chance to get any of it back. I don't know which one I feel most sorry for, Faith or Grissom. If you feel so inclined, I would love another chapter to give me a happy ending. =] I don't expect it, but I sure would like it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Keeping the Secret" from Thedruid
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Oh man! That can't be all, it has too much potientiol. Starting with Faith's DNA showing up in a case and Griss investigating! Please, make this more than a drabble.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Keeping the Secret" from Maineiac
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Interesting. Makes you think about how the council did it, thats for sure. Could make a very good longer fic if you wanted to do that. Telling the hows and whys it happened.
Review By [Maineiac] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Keeping the Secret" from shimaspawn
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Nice job. Very interessting plot bunny. Grissom does play a lot of things close to his chest. It's sort of meloncholy, but thoughtful.
Review By [shimaspawn] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lie" from tals
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Perfect. What a beautiful drabble. You really sold me the idea of Faith as Grissom's daughter, with only a few short sentences. And I'm just left thinking, hey, maybe that's part of the reason he is so involved in solving the cases, why he never stops looking for answers for other people who have lost their lost ones. That's the reason he wants to give them some kind of closure. Because he never got any for himself. Just wonderful.

Thanks for sharing. Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lie" from rubberducky
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I think this has a lot of potential as a longer story (or series...) if you're willing to give it a go. Just my two cents worth. I liked what I've read so far. Thanks.
~rd.
Review By [rubberducky] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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