Good story. Don't know why it took me so long to start reading it, but once I did, I just kept going. :)

Brilliant! And i don't often write reviews to fanfiction that are praising, feel proud. I wish i could get to 3 chapters with a plot in my head but i never do, lol.

I haven't seen a story written this well, nor exciting for quite some years.

I'm sorry but Jack O'Neill not knowing about the wizard of oz is quite dare i say impossible to believe since the Wizard of Oz came out 1939 and Jack was born in 1952. And he's referred to it in Stargate more than a few times.

I don't like the way Xander says 'Give the Senator a cookie, he named his murderer.' He doesn't think of what he's doing as murder. It's punishment, vengeance, execution. If he said 'Give the Senator a cookie, he named his executioner/killer/etc.,' or something else neutral or positive, without the definite negative connotations of murderer, I'd be fine, but this? Murder is Wrong. Xander thinks of what he is doing as Right.

I can't believe how long I've been on this site, and yet somehow never managed to read this. I made a great big mistake. This story is funny, mature, real, intense, intelligent and full of enough action and tension to satisfy any action junkie.

I loved your Xander -- how powerful he was because of his very 'normal'ness. I almost always hate super Xander stories, and maybe I thought that this was what this would be, though from the summary, I can't see why... Anyway. I'm glad I looked again and got hooked.

I bow humbly. I am now of course going to run off and see what else of yours I can read and give one of my rare 10/10s

Peace,

Blue

very cool well detailed story. I loved it

david

Entertaining and well written.
Thank-you!

Awesome story! Very interesting the way you had the two universes meet. I loved the way you portrayed Xander, and the fact that you had the characters actually grow up without losing that essential quality that makes them who they are. Well-written, entertaining, and all-round good job! Loved the part about the "Scourge of the Goa'uld"!

Good work. I love to see a compete story and one which actually completes the story arc. You should be proud!
I especially liked the fact that Angel can save the SGC from the Gould but they all have to get bitten :) Jack can't avoid it forever!

This is by far one of my favorite fanfics I have read. I thought the way you portrayed the characters was excellent. I hope you decide to do a continuing story at some point.

Brilliant. Absolutely bloody brilliant. You manage to tie the SG and BTVS universes together in a good way to; my only question is why the Asgard were oblivious. Possibly because of their denial of the supernatural? The same issue that caused them trouble with millennia of cloning new bodies... Yeah, that'd do it.

I so enjoy a long story that maintains interest and is such a cracking good tale all the way through. I've read this probably about 5 times over the years, and been impressed every time. For those who worry that Sam Finn didn't feel enough agony...the loss of children, both in responsibility and in truth, is very likely to encourage her to walk in front of a bus full of F'yarl demons at some point. Again, just an excellent story. LurkerOOl

Absolutely superb.

This was well done. I don't knnow SG well but you seem to capture everyone. Xander was excellent. I cried when Xander broken done. So good.

Oh, god I loved it, I laughed right up til the end, and the holy terror that was Ashley will be dearly missed.