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Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from StoneCold
Review:
Not bad at all, in fact I really enjoyed it. Do we get to see some Xander/Faith together, because at points it looked like that was the direction things were going.
Review By [StoneCold] • Date [5 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander in Doppelgangland" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Nice to have an origen story to Venom. Keep them comming I love it.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [1 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander in Doppelgangland" from rob2
Review:
Great job with this fic. You're doing an amazing job of capturing the spirit of both Xander and Spiderman.


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Small things & Shocking Truths" from Cutiepie
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Oh, my! Why haven't I read this one before? I honestly couldn't tell you. But now that I have, may I just say 'Bravo' and 'wonderful' and 'Thank you so much for sharing'. I really like it, especially the part where you haven't made Faith go evil. She's my favorite, you know, and I prefer her to have all her marbles. =] I will be watching for the next update.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [12 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Small things & Shocking Truths" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Okay, I finaly finished reading all the parts and I can defently see what you ment when you did the comparison to my Marvel Style story. I always try to put a bit of the supernatural in my ficlets and you have done an excelent job interlasing the Marvel world with magic.

Your Punisher was truly inspiring. You brought acrost the true spirit of the character when you recreated him in a mystical format. Congratulations on that its a hard thing to do and you did it with flying collors.

I realy hope that you come up with the next chapter soon, I want to see how you do with the next Marvel character you introduce.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [11 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Small things & Shocking Truths" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
I had hoped that by this chapter, someone else might have pointed out the continuous errors and gotten you to fix them, but alas, your writing actually seems to be getting worse. And it's still Cordelia, last time I checked.
Comments from author:
Honestly I rushed the last few chapters and I'm a big enough person to admit that.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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Not a bad story, but the fact that a few words are either capitalized when they shouldn't, or not capitalized when they should, and you messed up the spelling of Cordelia, who is a major character, takes some points off my rating.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Nice. I enjoyed it but personaly I would have gone with the black costume.
Comments from author:
I thought about it but the 2099 outfit had a certain something to it that struck me as the type of outfit Xander woud either make or stumble across -- plus it has the advantage of seeming more spooky (to me anyway)
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [23 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
Awesome idea, I can't wait to read more.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from Caliadragon
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Wow! This is an awesome start and I love the fact that you didn't have Xadner going the way of the Marvel version of Spider-man. Xander already knows about responsibility. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from rob2
Review:
Good start, and I liked the mystical origin, fits much better than forcing in the original Spiderman origin.


Rob
Comments from author:
Thanks, I've seeen this done a few different ways and I eventually decided on a mystical origin for the powers ...interestingly enough once I locked myself into that choice other characters in Spideys world began popping into my head with mystical twists to their origins ...so stay tuned for updates
Review By [rob2] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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