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Review of chapter "Neon Orange" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, darling. You wanted a review. Plot and characterization good. Spelling, capitalizing and punctuation terrible! Some of it made my ears bleed.
Find a spell-checker, another person, or re-read your material out-loud a few times.
Comments from author:
Don't worry I have insurance and will pay for medical bill, after I leave the country, hehe I am always posting in my break back from work so I never seem to have the time to check and all that, But I will make time so help me god this can not go on!!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Neon Orange" from LadyRowan
Review:
This is a cute story, but you really need to look into a beta. There are some punctuation and spelling problems that interfere with the continuity. A very nice start. Lori
Comments from author:
I know I know (hangs head in utter shame) I am a bad person will find a beta I swear

ta for the review
Review By [LadyRowan] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from kumagorou
Review:
"And so they ate Sir Robin's minstrals...and there was much rejoycing...yaaay."

good story so far!
Comments from author:
Yeah Monty Python Kicks Arse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

here is your Prize.......................PRIZE........................

HAHAHA ta for the review
Review By [kumagorou] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Neon Orange" from kitblue
Review:
good chapter, with the exceptiion of the "Danielle" instead of Daniel at the begining. I like where this is going, keep it up.
Comments from author:
I am sometimes convinced that I am possesed by an evil gnome who likes to make me type real bad so I look like a fool, I swear cause I would soooooooo never tlkype wth suc bad splling i sewar hehehehehh
Review By [kitblue] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Neon Orange" from LNR
Review:
Whoo HOO!!!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!! Keep going, you've got a great story line.
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you like it hope to hear from you when chapter 3 is done
Review By [LNR] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from tru
Review:
Well at first i was all ike yeah then i was all like ok then it was just NOOOOOOO no not as in mooo but as in no o o o o o o o cause without any more of your work there is no more time for leisure. you work i leisure damn it
Comments from author:
HAHAHAHAHA ok I'm working on it but it's a bit hard at the moment as I am on a poasting so I can only leisure on my off time all 7h of it and I usualy use it to sleep but one of these days I shall jusaat have to forgo thte sleep for a more fun option of THE NEXT INSTALLMENT
Review By [tru] • Date [21 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from dragonsdaughter
Review:
More please!
Comments from author:
I'm on it have no fear
Review By [dragonsdaughter] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from WhiteWolf
Review:
nice start. And I like the fact she can't kick Buffy's or Faith's ass.
Comments from author:
I know what you mean it's just even if she is, was, whatever they are both realy far more experianced
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [23 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from PaulineE
Review:
A great start - can't wait for the next part :-)
Review By [PaulineE] • Date [23 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from BadBob
Review:
Sorry, me again...available as a beta if you'd like. bobbyperu1@juno.com
Review By [BadBob] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting so far. A few punctuation problems, but I'm pretty sure there was "much rejoicing" in several Monty Python parodies of biblical text. So that would probably be in both Holy Grail and Life of Brian, and then some. So is it the shoe or the goard for you?
Comments from author:
No silly we should all take off our left shoe and gather them in a sacred place forever walking around with just one upon us!!

hahahaha extra points for mentioning two Monty movies!!!!!!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story looks very, very interesting. I hope you continue to write more. Actually I like Council of Red Hot Mamas, but I am surprised Faith and Kennedy left Andrew still breathing. Lol!
Comments from author:
I should bye some kind of devise that tells me when I am making spelling mistakes by I don't know letting of a electrical current to zap me or something
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from BadBob
Review:
I would just like to say that this story is beginning w/ my favorite character (Dawn), and would like to encourage you to continue with this.
Review By [BadBob] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from shimaspawn
Review:
And there was much rejoicing. Yay. *twirls index finger* Got to love Montey Python.
Comments from author:
PRIZE PRIZE PRIZE PRIZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [shimaspawn] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from JoeB
Review:
Story line and concept are good. But you need to learn the rules of quotation marks,
Review By [JoeB] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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