'And since there were no smoking craters where an enclave used to be, she could assume no one had tried to mess with Willow Rosenberg’s memory.'
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SUPERB.

Absolutely superb. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. I've been checking in on this story for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... It's too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.

Terrific so far. But it's been ages since an update & I'm scared you'll abandon it. Please don't do that. Update soon. Please.

I take it the series had died? That sad because it is one of the better ones out there.

Lisa

sigh: 3 years since the update.

please restart this wonderful story

I've been re-reading this, and like always when I get to this chapter, I find myself hoping that this time, Remus will magically survive.

An excellent story, too bad that it has been abandoned just when it was getting to a really exciting part.

Boy is this a good story. I am afraid that it is an abandoned story, but I would like to see it continued. Please.

It's been years! Want More!!!

MORE!

The dialogue improved a lot in later chapters, but the odd missing words thing carried on; there was also a lot of incorrect homophone usage and even the kind of error that Spellcheck should have picked up, such as 'apposing' for 'opposing' in this chapter. If you have a beta-reader he/she didn't do a very good job.

Apart from the errors it's a good story. I gave up on the Potter books after 'The Goblet of Fire' because I couldn't take the tedium any longer; you do a much better job than Rowling. Hopefully you'll pick the story up again and suitably nasty things will happen to the obnoxious Potterverse characters such as Sirius Black and that patronising git Dumbledore.

Most of your other stories are very good - I voted for 'Word on the Street' in the CoA Awards, for instance - and the first two stories in this series were good, but this story badly needs Brit-picking. To a Brit the dialogue of the supposedly British characters is tooth-grindingly, excruciatingly, cringe-inducing. "I have a meeting scheduled at 10 Downing with the Prime Minister", for example; no-one would ever say that. The correct colloquialism is "...at Number 10". Most of the uses of 'My Lady' belong in the Middle Ages - the chauffeur is the only character who might use that form of address, and even he would probably think his employer suffered from the delusion that they were Lady Penelope and Parker from 'Thunderbirds'.

So far this chapter is reminiscent of the infamous 'Friends' and 'Bones' episodes in its inaccurate portrayal of Britain (which you spell as 'Britton' in one place, for some strange reason). Or of the dreadful Faith arc in the 'Season 8' comics.

There are also missing words and, conversely, occasional superfluous words randomly appearing where they make no sense.

Please say that there are plans to continue this and the other Changed World fics. They are some of my favorite fanfics.

This is a marvelous body of work. I really hope you pick it up again. Since it's been nearly two years I don't know how good the chances are, but I'm not above a little groveling!

Awesome work and far more realistic. With squibs in the mix its bound to get out that a government would know or have people who would know. After all its hard to Obliviate ones own brothers/sisters when the law says they can have the knowledge they have.

Are you ever going to pick this thread back up or are do you need somebody to sic a plotraptor on you?