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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - Scenes from July and August" from Cutiepie
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For some stupid reason, I had avoided reading your story until now. Honestly, I don't know what I was thinking. This story is just incredible! Even the chapter that you worried was an 'info dump' was beautifully written and not confusing like similar chapters in other people's stories. I just can't say enough in praise. It is good enough that I'm not even put off by spelling or grammar errors (which are very few and far between anyway). Thank you so very much for writing this terriffic story, and for posting it where people like me can read it (once we get a kick in the rear to get going). =]
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen - Scenes from July and August" from war
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great story.if Buffy thought the sunnydale tunnels were bad wait til she sees the wizards tunnels.looking forward to the next chapter
Review By [war] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Finding Hope" from msand
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I have always thought of the wizards in JKRowlings book much like the land owners in the southern US before the Civil War. "We must take care of the poor muggles (blacks) because they cann't take care of themselves".
We are more than what we appear to be. What have wizards done for mankind?
I like your story. I've got it bookmark so that I can check for up dates everyday. Sorry, no pressure intended.
Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

That's a very good question. What exactly have the wizards done for the world?
Review By [msand] • Date [19 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Finding Hope" from war
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another great chapter.you write Dawn as she should have been during season 7 and your OC characters are some of the best I've read in fanfiction.looking forward to the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've alway felt the writers on Buffy had no idea what to do with Dawn beyond the plot device of being the "key." Note that virtually all the episodes that focused on Dawn, focused on how she did not fit in with other Scoobies and how she had no real role to play. I think that shows the writers weakness in dealing with character. One of the many wasted opportunities of the last two seasons.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Finding Hope" from CPTSkip
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Wonderful, wonderful story. I am just amazed at how logically you have merged the Buffyverse and the Wizarding World. All your Scooby characters are so true to the series and your original characters are both interesting and realistic. I can't wait for more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Finding Hope" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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Poor Lady Aydin. LOL. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

As for outlines... you should see the big nasty brain-melting emails that go back and forth between Lucinda and I regarding Ultimate Venom. :)
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [18 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve - Finding Hope" from Tassos
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This story is very good! I really like Lady Aydin and am glad that she's starting to see the New Council for what it is: people who care very much about hte world and who are willing ot do something about it. Robert's reply about hte Scoobies not knowing the meaning of impossible was very nice. I liked that a lot, especially given how true it is. Young adults who grew up thinking outside the box - the world never knew what hit it. Keep up the good work.

Tas
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's one thing for Lady Aydin to understand intellectually that there are now hundreds of Slayers running around and that the new Council plays by a different set of rules. It's another to get sucker punched with the magnitude of just how different the world is post Sunnydale.
Review By [Tassos] • Date [18 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Target Selection" from SeshatTeirm
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Ooh. Is their spy Percy?
Review By [SeshatTeirm] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Target Selection" from (Moderator)acs
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A very enjoyable story. The way you center it around a non-wizarding group that takes an active interest in making sure all of the different magical groups keep their houses in order seems fairly unique. And that Covenant idea... dang... clever. And that it all works and keeps me reading. You've done a good job.

A small comment however ->

> As much I enjoy the other HP/BtVS crossovers I always find it a little odd that all
> the characters get together and share all their secrets in one chapter.

Not everyone does that in their fics :-) (though not everyone has such an elegant idea as your Covenant). That seems to happen a lot more on fanfiction.net than TtH. Verbal identity diarrhoea is popular in some quarters as a quick story jump start. But not everyone does it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment.

And you're right. Not every HP/BtVS crossover does the verbal diarrhoea. I just happened to have read through a couple that did and it was still fresh in my mind.

To trade compliments. Your Red Raider series of stories are very enjoyable. One the best blendings of the two worlds (along with a couple of others) I've seen. You do a great job of making the universes consistent while at the same time remaining true to the source material. Something I'm learning the longer I work on this story is very difficult to pull off.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Target Selection" from (Recent Donor)captuniv
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Hmm, this chapter gave me lots to think about. Firstly, is it possible that MI-5's mole is Percy Weasley?!? That thought gave me a heck of a shock. And now they are going to go after Sirius not knowing that he's actually innocent. Strange though, I would have thought that with the drawings of the ritual they might have identified the Death Eater who gave up his hand as Peter Pettigrew. Oh wait, the white mask bit hid all the identities. That's why they wouldn't know to target Lucius Malfoy either. Hmm, I am really enjoying this and look forward to the next update. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
I did give a another hint as to the identity of one of the Moles in "The Calls".

I had intended to include a bit about the limitations of Lovat's sketches in "The Shifting Currents" chapters, but it didn't flow well so I dropped it. His pictures tend to focus around one or two things. The exagerated scar on Harry's forehead, the enlarged picture of Voldemort's face (as he was the focus of the ritual). Other details, like facial details, can get blurred out. If you've read the Adept books this is a lot clearer. My apologies for not making that bit clear here. I'll insert that info into another chapter.

Nice to know people are thinking.
Review By [(Recent Donor)captuniv] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Target Selection" from WhiteWolf
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Poor Sirius. Never gets a break. Hope you don't kill him off?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven - Target Selection" from (Moderator)JoeHundredaire
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I always feel my head spinning trying to keep track of who knows what in these fics. I forgot too that not all the good guys knew about Black, either. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Comments from author:
You think your heads spinning. You should the outline I've constructed for this thing.
Review By [(Moderator)JoeHundredaire] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Wars Past" from Ezmerelda
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That's an interesting way to put it - Let's save these people from themselves.

I can't help but think it will be difficult to convince some of them coughMinistrycough that they're in need of saving.

Great story, thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [17 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Wars Past" from msand
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This is great. I would love to read more.
Thanks
Review By [msand] • Date [16 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten - Wars Past" from (Past Donor)houses
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This chapter was hardly too much of an info dump. It had the right pace of informative and moving the plot. I'm absolutely fascinated by the worlds you've woven together, and they way they've been woven. Just delightfully refreshing, creative and compelling. I'm eagerly anticipating what comes next.

houses
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment. As I said this chapter was the most difficult to write so far. Trying to find a balance between exposion, plot and rhythm was tough. I brought Xander in specifically to spice up the dialogue a bit and provide a break from the exposition.

Nice to know I succeeded with at least some people.
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [16 Aug 04] • Not Rated
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