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Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from Cutiepie
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Ah, yep. That certainly qualifies as unexpected. I do hope that you plan to delve a bit deeper into this mystery. For instance, where was Xander prior to arriving at SGC? How did Jack come to be his father (and yes, I do know about the 'birds and the bees,' so that is not what I meant). =] And why is Angel one of those listed as a contact? Not to mention Angel Investigations still being around and Cordie being able to answer the phone. Too many questions! We need answers! =D
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from PaulineE
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Loved the whole Jack, Xander, Angel, Cordy thing ..... not quite sure how Sam's 'secret' fits into it all - it seemed really out of place in the whole story ...... still, nice tie in with Angel being called by Hammond and Tealc noticing the DNA reference.
Review By [PaulineE] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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Cool! I love Xander's file. And listing Angel as first contact couldn't have been Xander's idea. And Jack as his dad? I'm looking forward to more postings!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from jennad
Review:
Great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [jennad] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from Stacia2
Review:
I finished reading and said to myself, as I often talk to myself,
"What a great story! I wonder when the next chapter will be out?" I then looked and saw it was marked complete. That disappointed me. If this is complete, are you against the idea of a sequel?
Review By [Stacia2] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from Darklight
Review:
he he he, Jack became dad again, get Cordy to come to collect Xander like
no one else can. A dose of Cordy attitude will get the whole SG crawling up
the walls.

get more chapters out fast.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from rob2
Review:
Good start so far.


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from Jill
Review:
Good first chapter.
Review By [Jill] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from (Recent Donor)Selene
Review:
aaw, no sequal? No knowing if Xander knew about this, how Jack reacts, the rest of SG-1 and the Scooby gang? I'd like to see a sequel please! Pretty please?

i liked it, the only thing im missing is the reactions of the gang. good job

Selene
Review By [(Recent Donor)Selene] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Arrival" from Ronneem
Review:
Oh for thou art evil and cruel. First you hint at Samantha playing in the S/M world. Then you let poor Xander be completely out cold - and the first contact person is Angel? With Cordy there and curious about the situation. And finally, you spring on poor old Jack that he has a son he did not know about? I like this so far.

My only complaint... feal - should be feel. Otherwise, the flow is great. The teasing snippets here and there are wonderful. And the hints of things to cause even more trouble are perfect. Can't wait for more
Review By [Ronneem] • Date [30 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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