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Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from kitblue
Review:
I loved it.....please continue this! the interaction between buffy and daniel is great .
Review By [kitblue] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from spacey
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yes! more chapters! meeting reqs doesn't mean you wrote a story! and, more than that,

::motivates the hell outa you::
Review By [spacey] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from grd
Review:
i'm luving your story. the idea of Buffy babysitting Jackson is so original! I luv her take charge attitude. What is Hammond's reaction to all this? more soon please.
Comments from author:
Seeing as this is season eight, Hammond is not around but he could visit maybe . . .
PaBurke
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Wow!! What a fabulous start. I love the idea of Buffy as a Bodygaurd to Daniel and your Jack/Buffy Banter is perfect. I'd love to see you continue with more!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [29 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from pcody
Review:
Cool short fic. You have a good, sarcastic basis; I hope you continue along the same lines.
Review By [pcody] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from Zira
Review:
Loved it. Please write more. (Would be longer, but I'm in a hurry!) Loadsa Love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from kitblue
Review:
Love it! I love the buffy/jack interaction and Daniel's reaction to the 'geek bribes'!! Please write more!
Review By [kitblue] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from Iceflame
Review:
I was WONDERING if you was planning to update again :). Nice section here by the way!!!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am still enjoying the heck out of your story. You have nailed Jack's character so perfectly, I expect to see this episode on Wormhole X-Treme in the near future. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from raven
Review:
Stories like this remind me why I go back and re-read your work so often. I would put in everything that made me laugh but that would just be copying most of the story. Excellent job.

Loved Jack's reaction-figure he will spend a lot of time on the red phone regardless though.

Questions:

Buffy gets out with a nothing and pulls a purse, a backpack and a trunk from the back of the truck? Then the purse and backpack appear/disappear at will? Not sure about that. Unless that was a typo (backpack is actually a large purse that looks like a backpack) why not stick to a backpack full of geek bribes and a trunk for her? Just seems a bit fumbly in an otherwise well-crafted story.
Comments from author:
You are absolutely right about dropping the purse. I hope you like my corrections.
PaBurke
Review By [raven] • Date [1 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from (Past Donor)houses
Review:
Clever, unusual, and very well executed. An engaging read, with nicely characterized Jack and Buffy. I can see poor Daniel getting mobbed and Buffy's reaction to being offered the position was spot on. Thanks for this delightful fic.

houses
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [31 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from Freewrite
Review:
Great start, I love the idea of it and hope you do actually continue this story.
Review By [Freewrite] • Date [31 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from Nightwind
Review:
ROTFL! Just wonderful, I haven't laughed that hard in days. I love Buffy and Daniel's antics. 'Geek bribe' ~ Gotta love it.

I can't wait to read more ^-^
Review By [Nightwind] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from Iceflame
Review:
I "request" *looks over arsenal of mayhem that would warm any Slayer's heart* That you or someone considers writing this challenge as a big story. ESPECIALLY YOU :-D. HOPE TO SEE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from HeatherSin
Review:
Excellent Start!!!!!
I can just picture Buffy in the skirt and heels ... sigh... I also sense many-a-funny scenes in the future with this little bunny.
Good luck with future chapters!
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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