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Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is really fun! I like it best when the humor is there, but the characterization/reality/danger level is also still there.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
I knew there was a reason this was my favorite story of Buffy at the SGC. I like the Buffy you show here so much. I loved Daniel being in the bar talking to the demons. Lorne said he was discussing the Gou'ald so he must have realized they weren't just people in costumes.

I am looking forward to Daniel trying to get Teal'c to go and eventually Jack finding out about just where Ms. Summers took Daniel when she was suppose to be protecting him. I bet even knowing Buffy is extraordinary, Jack won't be thrilled. Of course it could be fun if Teal'C, Jack, and Daniel are all with Lorne and Sam walks in her own. Wouldn't they be surprised if she already knew about Colorado night life?

I also wonder if the sniper was anyone we know, especially since he refered to Giles as Ripper. I want to know more about the people trying to Daniel and I can't help but wonder who Sam would end up getting as a baby sitter? Xander? Dawn?

More than anything I would love to see more of the interaction you have going here. I haven't liked Buffy so much in a long time and the way she relates to the fellows is wonderful. You have certainly showed off your skill here. This story and your "10 Patients Janet wished she never had" are probably two of my favorite Stargate Crossovers - oh and for a nice chuckle "A Certain Blonde Major."

Thanks again for such a wonderful story!!
Comments from author:
Ahh! Teri, you're making me blush.

Thanks for your imput as always. You've given me several great ideas.
PaBurke
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from kitblue
Review:
I loved it.....please continue this! the interaction between buffy and daniel is great .
Review By [kitblue] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from spacey
Review:
yes! more chapters! meeting reqs doesn't mean you wrote a story! and, more than that,

::motivates the hell outa you::
Review By [spacey] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Banana Peels and Karaoke" from grd
Review:
i'm luving your story. the idea of Buffy babysitting Jackson is so original! I luv her take charge attitude. What is Hammond's reaction to all this? more soon please.
Comments from author:
Seeing as this is season eight, Hammond is not around but he could visit maybe . . .
PaBurke
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Wow!! What a fabulous start. I love the idea of Buffy as a Bodygaurd to Daniel and your Jack/Buffy Banter is perfect. I'd love to see you continue with more!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [29 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from pcody
Review:
Cool short fic. You have a good, sarcastic basis; I hope you continue along the same lines.
Review By [pcody] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from Zira
Review:
Loved it. Please write more. (Would be longer, but I'm in a hurry!) Loadsa Love, Zira
Review By [Zira] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from kitblue
Review:
Love it! I love the buffy/jack interaction and Daniel's reaction to the 'geek bribes'!! Please write more!
Review By [kitblue] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from Iceflame
Review:
I was WONDERING if you was planning to update again :). Nice section here by the way!!!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Presidents and Jack O'Neills" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am still enjoying the heck out of your story. You have nailed Jack's character so perfectly, I expect to see this episode on Wormhole X-Treme in the near future. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from raven
Review:
Stories like this remind me why I go back and re-read your work so often. I would put in everything that made me laugh but that would just be copying most of the story. Excellent job.

Loved Jack's reaction-figure he will spend a lot of time on the red phone regardless though.

Questions:

Buffy gets out with a nothing and pulls a purse, a backpack and a trunk from the back of the truck? Then the purse and backpack appear/disappear at will? Not sure about that. Unless that was a typo (backpack is actually a large purse that looks like a backpack) why not stick to a backpack full of geek bribes and a trunk for her? Just seems a bit fumbly in an otherwise well-crafted story.
Comments from author:
You are absolutely right about dropping the purse. I hope you like my corrections.
PaBurke
Review By [raven] • Date [1 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from (Past Donor)houses
Review:
Clever, unusual, and very well executed. An engaging read, with nicely characterized Jack and Buffy. I can see poor Daniel getting mobbed and Buffy's reaction to being offered the position was spot on. Thanks for this delightful fic.

houses
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [31 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from Freewrite
Review:
Great start, I love the idea of it and hope you do actually continue this story.
Review By [Freewrite] • Date [31 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from Nightwind
Review:
ROTFL! Just wonderful, I haven't laughed that hard in days. I love Buffy and Daniel's antics. 'Geek bribe' ~ Gotta love it.

I can't wait to read more ^-^
Review By [Nightwind] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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