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Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Still hoping you'll be inspired to continue this story, one of these years! :)
Comments from author:
aw thanks, I know I'm hoping to as well, but loss of computer and notes through the years, along with many other RL things have pushed it to the background. I'm current almost complete with a huge Merlin story over on fanfiction.net pen name Moon Fox if you are at all interested in that fandom.

Perhaps once this is finished I will go back and take a look at what I left to see if there is anything I could do to even at least wrap it up and give it closure.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story...
hope you will continue it ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
17. Revisiting... part b

ohaa Dawn with possessed Willow.. so not good.

18. Comfort

a car accident? I don't think that Buffy told her mother the whole truth here.

19. Sneezes

ahh they are a step near to find out where the snake is.

20. Sneezes Part 2

ahh now Anya will get a visit from SG1 :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revisiting the Past" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
15. Frozen

ahh Tara thinking W is cheating on here...not good

16. Revisiting the Past

Joyce and D back in SD and good of Jack to get some closure on that front.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dad" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
11. My soon to be stepsister is a...

ahh they are all in know now about each other....good...at least that is something....

12. La La La

good and funny call :)

13. Surfacing


ahh good the snake hasn't total control of Willow, yet.

14. Dad

nice scene with Jack and Dawnie.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [7 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "no more worries" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
8. Lousy Excuses

rofl...what a way to ask Joyce

9. Open Options

hmm I hope they don't have to resort to the Tokra for Joyce


10. no more worries

ahh at least Joyce is getting an option
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tok'ra and Consequence" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh I wonder what happens to Joyce...and looks like Willow is either a Tokra or Goauld now. At least partly.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Price We Pay" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
5. Osiris Factor

ahh i hope nothing bad is happening with Joyce.

6. Price We Pay

hmm wonder how Buffy will handle it here and nice camo for Jon.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Operation Proposal" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh nice idea of Jack in how to include the girls in his plan *g*
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday Afternoon BBQ" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. New Beginnings

lol nice first meeting with Jack *g*

2. First Date

yeah teenagers can be a real pain *g*

3. Sunday Afternoon BBQ

look like Dawn made the first dent into Cassis grief armor.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [4 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from greysh
Review:
Nice fic! I like how you wrote Jack :)
I hope that joyce will heall, she deserves some good in her life.
Review By [greysh] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from Bluejello
Review:
I read this story a while back, had it rec'd to me, and re-read. What are the odds that I can inspire you to continue? *insert standard puppy-dog eyes here*
Really, it's nice to read a (all too rare) Joyce-based fic. And a good one at that!
Comments from author:
Recently had thyroid removal surgery, so I'm hoping my moods and anxiety level out and my muse comes back soon since I'm feeling a bit more stable than I have in YEARS!!!
Wish me luck as I continue to recover and hopefully I'll be taking another look at this soon.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from winnie
Review:
very interesting slant on the story line
hoping that there is more to come and not deserted
Review By [winnie] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from yuiop
Review:
This was a great story and I hope you finish it one day, but if not thanks for writing it and leaving it up for me to read!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from nemogbr
Review:
Great story telling. Hope the muse comes back for a visit.

Please update soon.

Regards,
Obi
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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