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Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from Traveler
Review:
Wonderfull story! I hope you are able to update as it has almost been a year. I'll be watching for more.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from Morgomir
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I Love it. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from spring
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I love what you have so far it's excellent. I am very very eager to see how SG-1 handles the Hellmouth, is Jack going to warn them before they leave? I also have to wonder if they will be able to tell that Willow is possessed by the "evil snake". Again I love this fic so far and I am very very eager for more.
Review By [spring] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Operation Proposal" from manic
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I love your Jack! He cracks me up! The spy mission was brilliant! I'm worried, though. What happens when he is relocated?
Review By [manic] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Beginnings" from manic
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I swear I've read this before, but it wasn't one of my flagged fics. Oh, well. I was laughing so hard at Dawn. Flesh eating robots ;) I really like the idea of Jack and Joyce together. I look forward to more.
Review By [manic] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from SpacedCadet
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Granted, I only just found this story. Granted, I was able to read all 20 of the chapters you've done so far, but it's been four years since you started this story, it still isn't finished and IwanttoreadmoreNOW!!!

Please.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from HeatherDee
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I do like your take on season 6. It seems more solid than Noxon's. The canon always felt 'tacked-on' to me wheras this works. One of the problems with season 6 was that they all seemed to lose touch with each other. It's good that you didn't leave this out. Your use of Tara's inner monologue to get that across worked nicely.

The G'ould possession might work too well in at least one respect though. If Xander ends up trying to talk Willow down here the result isn't likely to be at all healthy.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from RevDorothyL
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So glad you're continuing this story, and that dealing with Willow's part-time possession by an errant Goa'uld symbiote may soon become a joint Scobby-SG1 project.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from mousemt
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I like how you're doing this one. I like your characters and what-if.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes Part 2" from AllenPitt
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hopefully Giles will save the day on the Willow-front...but I like the "urn of Osiris" connection to SGC series, great idea!
And poor Anya will get a visit from the SGC... maybe the SGC can prevent Tara from getting shot...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from Scrappychic
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Any chance in this story being continued or is it completely abandoned at this point?
Comments from author:
Nope not completely abandoned. Just took me a LONG time to get back into it.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I must add to the clamor: please continue this story. It is one of the more interesting takes on combining both universes that I've seen in a while... And I am eager to see what the team make of the great ol' Sunnyhell!

Thanks for hooking me on your story... Please remove me from the hook soon so I can continue swimming in the pool of your story...

Blue..
Comments from author:
OK so the hook can be removed, I finally got off my butt and added a new chapter :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from lindiel
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So I know that it's been 2 years since you updated, but it's stopped right in the middle of the rising action where the different story threads are coming together. I really hope this story is continued.
Review By [lindiel] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Beginnings" from (Past Donor)Ponder
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Hi, are you still around? I note it's been a while since you updated any of your stories here. I like this story, but it could really use some copyediting. I'm willing to do it for you, but only if you're actually still around and willing to take my fixes and apply them to the story.

Let me know,

*** Ponder
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from merkaba
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Wow this is such an unique story and so well written. It is rare to find such well written stories that are new ideas and unpredictable. I like the way you've woven the SG and Buffy universes together. The twist with Willow being 'possessed' was really inspired. I keep wondering if your planning to save Joyce with some well placed alien technology... ok so I like happy endings. :-) I do have to confess that I am not really liking the clone Jon's interaction at the moment. The character feels a little off to me. I am not sure exactly why since there hasn't been enough of him to really see where that is going.
Anyway I am liking all the drama and action and I hope that I get to see more! Your very talented... don't stop writing. I noticed that it has been a really long time since you updated. Have the plot bunnies gone on to greener pastures, fresher carrots or is there a chance of the story being finished? Please.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review! I do plan on getting back to writting this story and others someday. Long story short - moving, friends, health issues, and most recently becoming a mother to the CUTEST little boy, have put much of my computer time on hold for far too long.

I really do hope that this winter I will be able to try and finally get back to it, but no promises.

Some good energy sent my way for better nights sleep and the return of my muses from Hawaii would be greatfully accepted! Thanks!
Kay
Review By [merkaba] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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