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Review of chapter "Sneezes" from GatorMegs
Review:
I really like this story-an interesting take. Please continue!
Review By [GatorMegs] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from purrfus
Review:
There is a part of me that wishes I had found TtH when it was new instead of just 5 months ago, but the other parts are glad I didn't because there is so much waiting to be discovered. This story has been one of the best.

Great work Joyce, Jack, and Dawn - the other characters were also well done and added to the story without overwhelming it.

I hope you find your way back to this some day.
Comments from author:
Thank you to you and all the other reviewers of this story! I really do hope to be able to finish this story for you all, and for myself.
Kay
2/6/07
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from DevJannz
Review:
I love this story so far. I hope that you continue it soon.
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
Excellent story so far! I definitely liked the dynamic between Joyce and Jack, and Dawn and Jack. Looking forward to the rest of it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [12 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from aussiemel
Review:
Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from killjoy
Review:
I like this story.I hope there is more coming.
Review By [killjoy] • Date [13 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm loving this! Joyce and Jack is a great combo, as well as making them a family with Cassie Fraiser and Dawn. And your use of the Urn of Osiris/Snake incident makes for an inspired blending of SG1 and Sunnydale mythologies. Please keep it up, and -- if it's not too much trouble! -- is it possible that we could eventually have a happy ending for Joyce? I mean, I know I'm being greedy, but she got so few breaks in the canonical Buffyverse that it's nice to see her win one, once in a while, in the fanfic-verse.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from Telmah
Review:
What a great storyline! I really like the pairing and the real-life issues. Dawn is a real teen and the twist of Willow being posessed by that snake from the Urn... brilliant. I look forward to your next installment! How often do you update? (Please help me set my expectations)
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us!
Telmah
Review By [Telmah] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
I have really enjoyed the story so far and wish you luck in continuing. Mainly so I can read more...completely self serving I know. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
An excellent and intelligent cross of the Buffy and Stargate Universes. Please write more soon.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [5 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from Vld
Review:
I've got a feeling Willow doesn't actually carry a symbiote, but just the snake's essence within her.
Review By [Vld] • Date [5 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for adding to the story!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from sapphire
Review:
thank you, thank you for continuing so many really good ones just stop thank you again
Review By [sapphire] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sneezes" from (Current Donor)kribby
Review:
oh that was interesting... i thought this was abandoned!
Comments from author:
not abandoned, just lost for a while. :-) thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)kribby] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comfort" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
An interesting tale - I particularly liked the idea of Joyce & Jack making a life with Dawn and Cassie. I hope you 'cure' her so that they can be happy. I also hope you continue this story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [25 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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