There is a part of me that wishes I had found TtH when it was new instead of just 5 months ago, but the other parts are glad I didn't because there is so much waiting to be discovered. This story has been one of the best.
Great work Joyce, Jack, and Dawn - the other characters were also well done and added to the story without overwhelming it.
I hope you find your way back to this some day.
Comments from author:
Thank you to you and all the other reviewers of this story! I really do hope to be able to finish this story for you all, and for myself. Kay 2/6/07
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I'm loving this! Joyce and Jack is a great combo, as well as making them a family with Cassie Fraiser and Dawn. And your use of the Urn of Osiris/Snake incident makes for an inspired blending of SG1 and Sunnydale mythologies. Please keep it up, and -- if it's not too much trouble! -- is it possible that we could eventually have a happy ending for Joyce? I mean, I know I'm being greedy, but she got so few breaks in the canonical Buffyverse that it's nice to see her win one, once in a while, in the fanfic-verse.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
What a great storyline! I really like the pairing and the real-life issues. Dawn is a real teen and the twist of Willow being posessed by that snake from the Urn... brilliant. I look forward to your next installment! How often do you update? (Please help me set my expectations) Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us! Telmah
Review By [Telmah] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
An interesting tale - I particularly liked the idea of Joyce & Jack making a life with Dawn and Cassie. I hope you 'cure' her so that they can be happy. I also hope you continue this story.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [25 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]