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Review of chapter "Nine: Grieving" from CPTSkip
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This episode tore my freaking heart out. The whole idea of "little girls dying in the night" is just so aweful when you think about it. Joss' show was a lot of fun and I loved watching it. But if you really look and think about his mythology, it is horrible. But your story is not. Your story is great. I love your characterizations and your people's emotions ring true to me. I look forward to seeing where you go from here.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nine: Grieving" from Ezmerelda
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Maybe now Dawn will start dealing with her grief better, now that she's talked about it. Anita, however; I'm not sure what's up with her, but it can't be good for Zebrowski for her to suddenly hate him so.

Great story, thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nine: Grieving" from moonfox
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This story has fully captured my attention! Definitly an original idea and wonderfully written.
Review By [moonfox] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nine: Grieving" from (Moderator)acs
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I realize you aren't done yet but the use of this one phrase (and the paragraph it is in) really makes the whole story rise to a whole different level:

"Just someone who remembers all the little girls who died in the dark."
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seven: Misunderstanding" from Knight
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can't wait for more, please update as soon as possible
Review By [Knight] • Date [28 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Six: Evading" from Ezmerelda
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Gotta love the nosey old ladies!

Zerbrowski should just come clean to Dawn, it would probably be therapeutic for both of them.

Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [25 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Six: Evading" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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Okay, here's one of the problems I have with a lot of AB/Buffy crossovers: The idea that there are two different types of vampires. Something that has never been mentioned in either AB, or Buffy, or Angel. It just seems wrong to me.

If you are going to do a Buffy/AB crossover, I think it's best to just not mention the differences between the two's vampires at all.
Comments from author:
I was leery about addressing the matter at all, but I'm trying to set something up for later. In my opinion, it's easier to have two types of vampires than to explain away the differences in how you can kill the two types (dust v. no, for example). But it's a problem of crossovers, trying to explain everything, I agree.

Have you read Consequences by Sonya (http://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=2624)? She has a take on the vamp types that I found quite neat.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Six: Evading" from CPTSkip
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Lol! Poor Z! Even little old ladies are getting on his case. Nice update. I like updates where we learn about people. I don't think every one needs to be filled with flame and destruction. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next to Dawn and Z. Sounds like they need to organize an Ex-Watchers Anonymous.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Talking" from Lilly
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it's going in a nice direction. *g* I like. will be watching for more.
Review By [Lilly] • Date [22 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five: Talking" from dulcinea
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I just love the tone you've set with this. Your Zerbrowski is perfect and your little bits of humor are well placed.
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [21 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four: Theorizing" from Ezmerelda
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This fic sort of reminds me of a CSI/Buffy/Angel/Anita Blake crossover I read many moons ago, but only in the sense that it's written like a cop show, which I find terribly entertaining. Loving the strange relationship Zerbrowski has with Anita, and Arnet's seeming attempts to catch his eye.

Very interesting, all of it, thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [21 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four: Theorizing" from CPTSkip
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I loved the 'cat fight' crack and I am glad you didn't go for your first idea for a title. Lol! Nice to see Anita is being nice for a change in a fanfic. I guess we still don't know if the Key can be made furry. I am still enjoying the heck out of your story. Please keep writing.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Contemplating" from CPTSkip
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Oh I am liking your story. Zerbrowksi's backstory is great and I really can feel the angst he is feeling. So Dawn might be a were, huh?. Somehow I don't think Buffy is going to be a happy camper at this news. At the same time, it will make "let's kidnap the Slayer's sister" plots a bit harder to carry out. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: Preparing" from Paulette
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I totally loved this, plz add more!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Paulette] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three: Contemplating" from (Moderator)acs
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Very well written. A nice bit of angst to add depth to the character but not so much that the story drowns in it. Looking forward to more... there are so many possible ways you could go with this... can't wait to see what you do :-).
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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