wow, loved it :) loved the trial the angel getting his 'reward' at last. first time i've ever seen angel get into heaven in a fic. hope the story doesn't end here, want more as xander as the terminator.
Fun, with a small side of slight silly. The trial was funny, and Angel was great as the defense. I would have liked Xander to continue as a terminator but that's mostly because I wanted more story.
So - since he isn't a Terminator any more, you could start a new story. Subtle aren't i?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Okay, here is where you should end this story and start on a sequel with a different title. Yes, I know that means we have a series, but the direct Terminator connection should be ... terminated ... at this point. Hopefully the sequel will be as excellent as this story.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [16 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I really like the way this story has been going so far, and I hope you continue it. I think Faith being added to the mix would only make things even crazier, and that would be a good thing. Plus, the thought of a Xander/Aura/Faith pairing would not be unpleasant. Finally, if you're going to really get into scenes that can't make it onto FF.net, is there a Yahoo group you own or are a member of?
Comments from author:
in reverse order, no, there is not a yahoo group that the missing scene is on, as it has not been written - I wanted to get the story out, so I didn't write it and, more to the point, I can't write smut. It's even worse than the 70's and 80's porno films - some substance and even less plot.
I may continue this story, though, as X/Aura/F isn't a bad thought, as you said... but it won't be until I finish a few other stories (Reincarnation Can Suck, for one, and then Suiting Up).
Thanks for the review.
Review By [ChaoticFred] • Date [5 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was a great story and now I am sorry it is over. I hope you revisit this time-line someday as I think there is a lot more fun, I mean adventures, here. Thanks for the laughs, romance, and action.
A female teenage hormonal wolverine clone in love (lust) with a semi/maybe human Xander...oh, those two are going to have fun!
...Just a thought but i don't actually remember you having any NC-17 moments (not including innuendo and nudity) ever thought of trying? It could probably be 'Siege' (the author for fanfic) worthy. And just a thought, wouldn't it be a better idea to have this as a series, with Xander-1000 as the first bit and what ever the hell he is now as the second, it's just he isn't an android or an x-1000 any more...is he???
Awww! No NC-17 scenes? You'll be sorry, I have a very dirty imagination. Lol! Nice update and I look forward to the next just to see how fast Xander heals. Lol!